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jagi neend se jab se aankhe....
hui kkhawab se khali aankhe...
ashq bacha na baki koi....
reet gayi ye geeli aankhe..
feeki feeki ho gayi duniya...
gai raat jab kholi aankhe...
na aahat na dastak koi....
kise dhundhe fir meri aankhe..
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2011, 11:38:44 AM » |
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Nive onep riya ji..
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2011, 11:39:56 AM » |
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adhoora hai ---
lekin achhi hai.
badhai
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2011, 11:40:13 AM » |
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hmmmm..........ankhe....kya kahne priya......
bht choti si aur cute si poetry likhi he ji apne to...
bahot aachi lagi muje to....
lijiye ankho ke liye
ashq chupati ye ankhe
ishq batati ye ankhe
jo ajaye jid per to
duniya jukati ye ankhe
kabhi na kuch ye bole he
bas dekhe hole hole he
dil ki baat batati ye ankhe
har raj batati ye ankhe
humko lubhati ye ankhe
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2011, 11:44:03 AM » |
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thanx geet ji.....
hmmmm sahi kaha nirala ji.... adhuri hai...
par puri karne ka man hi nahi hua....
so eise hi post kar di...
thanx mg....
ek baat batao koi eisa topic hai jis par aap nahi likh sakte.....
very nice reply ji.....
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2011, 11:45:53 AM » |
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hud kar di priya apne to ....
itne din se dost ho aur pata bhi nahi chala...
he yaar esa ek topic he ...
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2011, 11:46:55 AM » |
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saagar ki gahrai si
duniya isme samai si
pyar ki chalkti boonde isme
nirmal shital sa jal isme
aankhen ye teri aankhen
bhool kar saari khudai mehbub ki tasbeer samai isme
aankhen ye teri aankhen
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2011, 11:47:35 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2011, 11:48:17 AM » |
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arreee aapne to suspence creat kar diya.....
kaun sa topic hai batao jaldi se....
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2011, 11:49:50 AM » |
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bahot simple he priya......
koi suspance nahi he re
ekdum clear he
wo topic me khud hu.........myself
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2011, 11:51:01 AM » |
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ye to badi ajeeb si baat hai.....
khud par thode hi koi kuch likhta hia......
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«Reply #11 on: January 26, 2011, 11:52:08 AM » |
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kya baat kahi hai nirala ji..... wah wah karne ka dil kar gaya..... hats off sir ji.... saagar ki gahrai si
duniya isme samai si
pyar ki chalkti boonde isme
nirmal shital sa jal isme
aankhen ye teri aankhen
bhool kar saari khudai mehbub ki tasbeer samai isme
aankhen ye teri aankhen
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«Reply #12 on: January 26, 2011, 11:55:09 AM » |
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aapki ye khoobi to hume pahli baar pata chali anaam ji.... bada accha likhte ho aap to...... kya baat kkahi hai.... bht bht kkhoob.... |
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2011, 12:00:34 PM » |
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shukriya priyaji.....ye chhoti si koshish pasand aayee aapko.......  aapki ye khoobi to hume pahli baar pata chali anaam ji....
bada accha likhte ho aap to......
kya baat kkahi hai....
bht bht kkhoob....
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2011, 12:02:47 PM » |
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anytime anaam ji....
ab accha likhoge to tarif to karni hi padegi na...
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