Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}:Shayri-E-Dard

angel4u

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One of my old creation...

Khushiyan To Wo Jaanewala Hi Apne Saath Le Gaya,
Jo Karvan Laaya Tha Wo Bhi Sang Sang Uske Kho Gaya,

Jise Maanga Tha Khuda Se Mannaton Mein,
Aaj Wo Kisi Aur Ki Hi Duwayein Maangne Mein Kho Gaya,

Sahara Kya Maangein Ab Kisi Aur Se HuM,
HaMara To Saaya Tak Besahara Ho Gaya,

Wo Laaya To Tha Saveron Ki Haseen Chandni
Par Saath Unke GaM Ke Andhere Bhi Chhod Gaya,

Koi Jaakar Zara Unse Puchhe,
Jo Rehta Tha In Aankhon Mein Khwabon Ki Tarah
Aaj Kyon Wo Aankhonki NaMi Ban Gaya...


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Roja

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 02:56:59 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 20, 2009, 02:55:36 PM

Bahut accha likha hai aapne dear Angel...


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angel4u

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 03:44:54 PM »

Thank u so much dear...


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khwahish

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 05:08:13 PM »

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!!!
Hamesha Ki Tarah Lajawaab!!

Jhooti Umeedo Par Rehne Do Hume Sada,
Zindagi Asliyat Jaan Jayegi To Darr Jayegi!!

Iss Tarah na Kabhi Chodna Saath Mera,
Verna Khushiyon Inn Aankhon Mein Aansuu Dekh Kar mar Jayegi..


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pandit

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 05:09:14 PM »

ONCE AGAIN ANGEL JEE..
BAHUT KHOOBSURAT............


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angel4u

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 05:22:15 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 20, 2009, 05:08:13 PM

Bahut Shukriya Khwaish Ji... Its always a pleasure getting comments from a wonderful poet like you.

Tere hi saath chali gayi ummeed saari meri sanam,
ab kya karenge is bebas si zindagi ko nibha ke hum,

Aankhon ki nami se bojhal hui jo har nazara nazron ka,
us manzar mein bhi tere pyaar ko dhundte rahe hum...


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angel4u

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 05:22:32 PM »

Quote from: pandit on May 20, 2009, 05:09:14 PM

ONCE AGAIN ANGEL JEE..
BAHUT KHOOBSURAT............

Bahut Shukriya Pandit Ji..


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dead heart

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 07:33:37 PM »

Bahaut hi acha likha hai apne Angel di...


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 07:48:56 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 20, 2009, 05:08:13 PM

wah wah bahut hi khoob KHWAISH Ji, wah

KHWABOH KI DUNIYA MEH HI HUM RAHA KARTEY HAI
DARD SEH KAR BHI HUM MUSKURAYA KARTEY HAI
NA JAAN LEY KOI ISS DARD KI WAJAH
HAR SHAAM UNKI YAAD MEH MEHFIL SAJAYA KARTEY HAI

JASBIR SINGH


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madhuwesh

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 10:58:00 PM »

wow angel ji very nice creation,khwaish ji and jasbir ji ne bhi bahut khoob likha. Applause


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Sager4u

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2009, 02:02:23 AM »

Very nice creation angal ji& nice reply khWaishji !


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2009, 05:53:21 AM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 20, 2009, 02:55:36 PM

HAMARA TO SAYAA TAK BESAHARA HO.......BAHAUT KHOOB ...A!!!


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angel4u

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2009, 04:11:10 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 20, 2009, 10:58:00 PM

wow angel ji very nice creation,khwaish ji and jasbir ji ne bhi bahut khoob likha. Applause

Thank you so much Madhu Usual Smile


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angel4u

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2009, 04:11:27 PM »

Quote from: Sager4u on May 21, 2009, 02:02:23 AM

Very nice creation angal ji& nice reply khWaishji !

Thanks Sager..


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Sager4u

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Re: Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel}

«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2009, 01:55:39 AM »

Aankhon ki numi kuch kahti hai,teri yaad her pal dil me rahti hai,kyon tune humse na rone ka vaada liya,tera vaada nibhane k liye ye hamesha chup rahti hai.


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