Aankhon Mein Aaj Ek Nami Si Lagti Hai.......

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Bahut Din Baad,Shayri-e-Dard Mein Kuch Likh Raha Hoon..Umeed Karta Hoon,Aap Sab Ko Yeh nazm Pasand Aaye..Iss Nazm Ke Aakhri Do Sher Hausla Zaroor Deti Hai..

Dard Mein Bhi Kuch Kami Si Lagti Hai,
Zindagi Ajnabi Si Lagti Hai...

Shikayte Rahi Hai Mujhe Hamesha Meri Taqdeer Se,
Kuch Keh Na Saka, Aur Chup Reh Na Saka,
Zindagi Ek Bejaan Tasveer Si Lagti Hai....

Hauslo Ne Dam Tod Diya,
Aur Phir Bhi Chehre Par Ek Bebas Si Muskaan,
Roya Kabhi Nahi Hoon Main!!!
Par Aankhon Mein Aaj Ek, Nami Si Lagti Hai....

Kuch Fark Nahi Ab Doston Aur Dushmano Mein,
Dushmani Bhi Ab Hume Dosti Si Lagti Hai....

Shamme Hasti Ki Lau Bahut Kam Hai,
Yeh Sehar Aakhri Si Lagti Hai....

Meri Nakaamiyaabi Par Kisi Ka Kehna Ke,
"KHWAISH" Gham Na Kar!!!
"Daana Khaak Mein Milkar Hi Gule-Gulzar Hota Hai."
Iss Baat Par Ab Mujhe Roshni Si Lagti Hai....

Apne Dard-O-Gham Ko Sochkar,
Naa Jaane Kya Likhta Chala Gaya "KHWAISH"!!!
Ab Padhta Hoon To Naa Jaane Kyon,
Yeh Shayari Si Lagti Hai......

         ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2009, 04:19:03 PM »
Aaj itna dard kyun ? Humesha ki tarah behad achcha likha hai Khwaish Dost .. Bohot Bohot Khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2009, 04:31:15 PM »
waah! sach mein, waise tho puree nazam kabil-e-tareef hai, par waqee aakhree do shaer kamaal hain!
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2009, 05:14:02 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 04, 2009, 04:19:03 PM
Aaj itna dard kyun ? Humesha ki tarah behad achcha likha hai Khwaish Dost .. Bohot Bohot Khoob Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat!!!Dard Ka Kya Kahoon, Kabhi-kabhi Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat Darra Jaati Hai.. sad7
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2009, 06:24:22 AM »
Bhai man gaye apko...kya khoob likha hai... Applause Applause
every single line touched my heart deeply but the last stanza was awesome...superb dear...

padkar tujhe Khwahish hum toh tere deewane hogaye,
meri zindagi teri shayari ki pyaasi lagti hai,
itna acha likha hai tune ke pehli baar kehgaya Rahim ,
aaj toh meri shayari bhi tere samne mamuli si lagti hai...
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2009, 06:26:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Khwaish Ji,
Sach me bahut hi dard bhara likha hai,

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2009, 07:46:17 AM »
Bohat khoob Khwaish.....muje to last ki do line bohat sachchi aur achchi lagi. Ghayel ki shayri ki buniyaad hain tumhari last ki do line....

Ek shayer ko pagal na kaho dosto
Uski halet pe na tum haso dosto
Jab gum me tum bhi mub_tila ho jaoge
Jab apni hi zindagi se tum ghab_raoge
Apne paraye tumko jab dege daga
Jab apni mohabbat banegi bevafa
Jab aakho se aasu behne lagege
Logh tumko bhi pagal kehne lagage
Baat GHAYEL ki us dum tujhe yaad aayegi
Har aah me teri shayri nazar aayegi

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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2009, 10:58:45 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 05, 2009, 07:46:17 AM
Bohat khoob Khwaish.....muje to last ki do line bohat sachchi aur achchi lagi. Ghayel ki shayri ki buniyaad hain tumhari last ki do line....

Ek shayer ko pagal na kaho dosto
Uski halet pe na tum haso dosto
Jab gum me tum bhi mub_tila ho jaoge
Jab apni hi zindagi se tum ghab_raoge
Apne paraye tumko jab dege daga
Jab apni mohabbat banegi bevafa
Jab aakho se aasu behne lagege
Logh tumko bhi pagal kehne lagage
Baat GHAYEL ki us dum tujhe yaad aayegi
Har aah me teri shayri nazar aayegi

-SG-
Applause Applause Wah wah Ghayel saheb..kamal ka likha hai apne...
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2009, 11:25:10 AM »
mashaallah kya khoob likha hai Khwaish ji bahoot hi khubsurati se byan kiya hai ...

Sajid ji, Kaash & Dead Heart .. kya baat hai bahot khoob likha hai aapne sab ne bhi.

Ak koshish meri taraf se bhi

chaha tha jisko , wahin dur ho gaye
Meri aankho mea sirf nami si thi
kyun badal gaya unka nazariyan hamare liye
sayad mere pya mea hi kuch kami si thi

Toot gai thi mea, Jab rutha tha woh
Mere paon tale nikli jamin si thi
Manana chaha unne hamne har tarah se
par unke paas mere liye,wakt ki kami si thi
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2009, 04:22:42 PM »
Bahut Khoob Khwaish Ji...

Meri Har Shayri Jab Dard Mein Lipat Jayegi,
Teri Bhi aankhon se kuch ladiyan nikal aayegi,
Sawal Chahat Ka Nahi raha ab na hi tujhse naata,
kar rahe hai gunaah jiski saza zindagi paayegi...
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2009, 06:06:40 PM »
Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 04, 2009, 04:31:15 PM
waah! sach mein, waise tho puree nazam kabil-e-tareef hai, par waqee aakhree do shaer kamaal hain!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya  aapke Hausle-afsaai Ka Sidra...
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«Reply #11 on: March 05, 2009, 06:08:24 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on March 04, 2009, 04:33:16 PM
waah Khawish ji behad acha likha hai aapne... Applause Applause

bahot ache ehsasaat... Applause Applause

danishta kinara mila to bhi hum lahar me kho gaye
aarzoo khud se hi kar lete par vo bhi daayre kho gaye

aasra bus sitamon ka hi raha hai aise
khushi milte hi tadap ki haseen vaadi me kho gaye



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji..

Aur aapne bhi Khoob Likha.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2009, 06:17:11 PM »
Quote from: dead heart on March 05, 2009, 06:24:22 AM
Bhai man gaye apko...kya khoob likha hai... Applause Applause
every single line touched my heart deeply but the last stanza was awesome...superb dear...



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rahim Bhai..iss nazm ne aapke Dil ko chua,yeh jaankar behad khushi hui..



padkar tujhe Khwahish hum toh tere deewane hogaye,
meri zindagi teri shayari ki pyaasi lagti hai,
itna acha likha hai tune ke pehli baar kehgaya Rahim ,
aaj toh meri shayari bhi tere samne mamuli si lagti hai...

Rahim Bhai,Koi Bhi shayari mamuli nahi hoti,kyonki isme shayar ke Jazbaat Base hote hai..aapne itni izzat bakshi jiske amin laayak nahi..Teh Dilse Shukriya aapka.. icon_salut
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2009, 06:18:57 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 05, 2009, 06:26:20 AM
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Khwaish Ji,
Sach me bahut hi dard bhara likha hai,

Shally.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shally..Aapko Bhi Yahan Par Dekh Kar Acha Laga..
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2009, 06:28:45 PM »
Har Saans Mein Chupi Kuch Bebasi Si Lagti Hai,
Zindagi Ajnabi Si lagti Hai...


Khwaishe Hazaaro Panap Rahe Hai Iss Dil Mein,
Par Naa Jaane Kyon,
Ab Khwaishe Bhi Kuch Dabi-Dabi si Lagti Hai....


Zakhmo Ke Nishaan rakh Kar Bhi Muskurata Hoon Main,
"Khwaish" AB Tujhe Zakhmo Ki Aadat Si Lagti Hai...

Aur Koi Nahi Par Mere Apno Ne Mera Har Kadam Par Saath Diya,
Qurbaan Jaata Hoon Main,
Mere Mehboob Ki Uss Baat Par,

"Khwaish" Agar Tu Mere Saath Hai To,
Dhoop Bhi Mujhe Chaandni Si Lagti Hai.."
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