....~~Aansoo~~....

by HumTum on March 28, 2005, 02:27:48 PM
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ab dukhoon kay saye main, aaNchal bacha kay kia karaiN
zahen bhi apna bigar gya hay, dil bacha kay kia karaiN

ek shooKh nazar us ki thee, dil luT kay lay gayee
sookhee hoi aankhoon main ab, aansoo laga kay kia karaiN

maut bhi aatee nahiN, hay khudkushee haraam bhi
duniya maiN apna koi nahiN, duniya bana kay kia karaiN

her saans main usi ki ab, mehek aatee hay mujhay
phool hi jab aslee nahin, khushboo saja kay kia karaiN



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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2005, 04:35:52 PM »
beautifilll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! such a very sad but very gud poem janab!!!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2005, 04:39:51 PM »
Shukriya Meena ji...
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Ghazal
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2005, 05:02:43 PM »
is dil mein dard bohot hai
tere pyaar ki tardap bohot hai

dil mein dard anginet hai
ginna chaho to bhi gin na paogy

ham say door hokar kaha jaaoge
hamare pyaar kay bina mar jaaoge

is dil key zakhem kisay dikhaogy
mar kay bhi mere dil say na nikel paogy
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clicksahil
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2005, 05:19:18 AM »
wow nice work... good
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Ghazal
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2005, 05:55:43 AM »
aankhe chura kar aansoo chupa rahy ho
apney aansuo mein doobe ja rahi ho
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2005, 03:06:33 PM »
gud one... Ghazal
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2005, 03:19:54 PM »
nice on gazal ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2010, 10:46:33 AM »
Nice one Hum Tum Ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2010, 03:07:38 PM »
good one humtum ji..

dukho ke saye mein aanchal nhi bachayenge,
kismat mein tadapna hai to is tadap mein khudko jalayenge.
per ye jalan bhi dil ko kahan chain deti hai.
aaj to ashq ko bhi aankhein cheen leti hai hai
aap hi bata do is dard ki dawa kahan paayenge ,
dukho ke saye mein aanchal nhi bachayenge.........
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«Reply #10 on: April 02, 2013, 02:05:56 AM »
V.Nice.
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