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by HumTum on July 28, 2005, 09:37:40 AM
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Hum ne pyar main paya to kya paya
Kabhi khood ro diye kabhi tum ko rulaya

Halat-e-ghum main beh gaya jo  aansoon
Who zindagi main phir kabhi na behnay paya

Saza mujhay mili or jaza unhain
Aisa bhi kya insaf ne hai sir jhukaya

Himat naheen thi us main saath dene ki
Ab tak na janey who kaisay chal paya

Tukray apnay wajood ke rooz jorta hoon main
Usnay meray dil ko aisa bikhraya

Zulm per zulm kertay rahay who or "HumTum"
Khamoosh hi raha, kabhi uff ker na paya !!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2005, 11:35:55 AM »
kya baat hai Humtum ji ............

Rota raha akela virano main chup kar
jab vo aai samane tuh chehre ko muskurahat se sajaya

kyun na dikha paaya apne aansu mehbub ko
kyun uski muskhurahat dekh ke gum ko gale lagaya
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HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2005, 11:48:03 AM »
Shukriya Sandhaya ji .. aur hamesha ki trah bahoot khoob likha hai !!!


kaise aankhen kahen inhe jo har dam jalte hain
aaj mausam meherbaan hai to inhe bhigone do
jo kuch tha dil mein ansoon ke saat beh gaya
kuch aur gunaah inhi ashkon mein duboone do !!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2005, 12:03:48 PM »
Inn ashkon ko tum paani na kaho
dil ke jajbaat ko khoon ki ravani na kaho
aur bhi gum iss zamane main uthake dekho
jo karte nahi mahobaat unke dil khali hai tum ye na kaho
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2005, 12:13:22 PM »
waah sandhaya ji...

yun mayuus na tha mein dil ki lagi se pehley
mujhey koi ghum nhi tha ghum e ashiqi se pehley
jab se hua hai ishq mujhey ik pal bhi chen nhi
kitna khusnuma tha mein iss awaargi se pehley !!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2005, 12:18:47 PM »
Mahobaat mile jise vo nasib vala hai
uski aadaon ne mujhpe koi jadu dala hai
abh tuh har aalam mahobaat ka nirala hai
unhe dekh dekh kar hi humne khudko sambala hai
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2005, 12:25:58 PM »
rah e ishq mein na jane kitne dhoke khaye hai
daar lagta hai ab mujho ishq ke anjaam se
zindgi mein ab kuch aseey halaat ban gaye hai
nafrat si ho gyi hai ab muhoobat ke naam se !!!
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2005, 04:51:52 PM »
wah wah humtum jiaur sandhaya ji....dono ne bohot hi acha likha hai!!!

pyar ka ehesas hi to muskurahat lata hai har chehere pe.
to har ashiq mohabbat me sirf ansson hi kyu ginta hai,
phoolon se bhara daman kyu nahin dikhta kisi ko,
zakhm khane ke liye kaanten hi kyu chunta hai!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2005, 04:55:33 PM »
bohat khoob humtum,sandhaya and meena sis Usual Smile .

"Jab tak kaanton ka ehsaas na ho,
  dard me rehke aanhein na bharo,
  na samajh paata hai koi pyaar ko,
  khushi se zyada dard ke is ehsaas ko."
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2005, 04:59:23 PM »
thank u kuddiye...aur aba  tumari sher ki kya tareef karon? humesha ki tara super duper likha hai!!

 :D
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sandhaya
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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2005, 06:22:32 AM »
sukhriay Meena Ji ........aur Nidhi ji .......

Asmaan main baji aaj sehnai hai
mausam pe bhi aaj khumari aai hai
ye kon ja raha hai raste se jor shor ke saath
oh tuh khuda ki beji ye paltan ashiq ka janaja lene aai hai
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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2005, 11:58:04 AM »
excellent work Humtum, Sandhya, Meena sis n Nidhi sis..........bahut hi acha likha hai sabne
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«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2005, 01:48:37 PM »
thanx sandhaya ji and nikki........... bohot ache sandhaya ji huemsha kki tara!!

 :D
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«Reply #13 on: July 29, 2005, 02:12:10 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah wah humtum jiaur sandhaya ji....dono ne bohot hi acha likha hai!!!

pyar ka ehesas hi to muskurahat lata hai har chehere pe.
to har ashiq mohabbat me sirf ansson hi kyu ginta hai,
phoolon se bhara daman kyu nahin dikhta kisi ko,
zakhm khane ke liye kaanten hi kyu chunta hai!!


Thanks a lot Meena ji aur bahoot khoob likha hai !!


yeh rah e chuni nhi jati bas mil jati hai
kaun khushi se khoon ke ansoon rota hai
lakh khosihey kar lo chaye khushiya pane ki
jo likha ho naseeb mein bas whi hota hai !!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 29, 2005, 02:13:40 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
bohat khoob humtum,sandhaya and meena sis Usual Smile .

"Jab tak kaanton ka ehsaas na ho,
  dard me rehke aanhein na bharo,
  na samajh paata hai koi pyaar ko,
  khushi se zyada dard ke is ehsaas ko."


Shukriya Nidhi  ji !!

be-Aetebaar waqt pe jhunjla ke ro parey
kho ke kabhi ussey to kabhi Paa ke ro parey
kab tak kissi ke soug mein roingey umer bhur
hum khud ko kitni baar yeh samjha ke ro parey !!!
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