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Mujhe Haq nahi gar teri nisbat meiN kuchh kahne ka,
Mujhe tuu apni aankhoN meiN panaaH kyuN deta hai
MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai
MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai
Gar hai Tujhe ruswaaiyoN ka dar meri aamad se toH
BarsaatoN meiN bhi tanhai ka samaa kyuN deta hai
MaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2010, 07:15:57 PM » |
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aahhaaaaaaaaaaaa........kya kehne janaab aapki iss gazal k....dil khush kar diya aaj apne.......behad hi umda khyaal se aur lafzon se nawaza hai aapne iss kalam ko...
chaliye aapki style mehi kuch likha jaye.......aapke sheron k jawab ..aapki style me......galtiyan maaf karna ji......
Mujhe Haq nahi gar teri nisbat meiN kuchh kahne ka,
Mujhe tuu apni aankhoN meiN panaaH kyuN deta hai
Tujhe aankhon me na rakhun to kya karun main ee dost
Tu mere is tute dil me bade pyaar se jo janm leta hai
MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai
Tu to chup reh leta na kehta kuch bhi mere humdum
Tera yun chup rehna meri aankhon k baandh khol deta ha
MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai
Tu mere dard ki nishaani hai ye na maan mere dost
Ek tu hi to mere dard me mera sath nibha deta hai
Gar hai Tujhe ruswaaiyoN ka dar meri aamad se toH
BarsaatoN meiN bhi tanhai ka samaa kyuN deta hai
Tujhse meri ruswaai nahin meri paakizgi hi chchalakti hai
Inn barsaton me tu mera saathi ban mera sath deta hai
MaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai
Main na sambhal pai hun iss kasak ko jo dil me uthti hai
Tu behke aankhon se ispe marhum laga deta hai…….
[/b] ek behtareen gazal k liye dil se daad kubul kijiye parwaj ji...
hamari ye koshish fir ek bar aapke chehre pe smile le aai hogi |
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2010, 07:55:37 PM » |
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Bahaut khoob Parwaaz jee..Akhri shaer toh bas uttar gaya dil main.. Bahaut khoob Anamika di..  |
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2010, 07:58:54 PM » |
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bahut khoob parwaaz ji.......
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2010, 10:43:36 PM » |
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MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai
MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai
Very Impressive......Sameer Ji ! Aansu Ke Dard ko dil me utaarne ki behtreen koshish..... mujhe aapki yeh koshish behad pasand aai...
MaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai
Maqtaa mujhe khaas taur par bahut pasand aaya ...
dil ko chhuute ehsaas bahut khoob rahe....tahe dil se daad hazir hai.. Qubuul karen... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 03:08:36 AM » |
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Kasak Jee aadaab!
Aapne itna khoob reply diya ke humari style meiN nahi yeH to aapki nayi style hai jee ..... abhi aapki isi style meiN hum aapko bad meiN reply deNge..... 
Thanks for appriciate......
Aage bhi apna saath banaye raakhiye....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez...... aahhaaaaaaaaaaaa........kya kehne janaab aapki iss gazal k....dil khush kar diya aaj apne.......behad hi umda khyaal se aur lafzon se nawaza hai aapne iss kalam ko...
chaliye aapki style mehi kuch likha jaye.......aapke sheron k jawab ..aapki style me......galtiyan maaf karna ji......
ek behtareen gazal k liye dil se daad kubul kijiye parwaj ji...
hamari ye koshish fir ek bar aapke chehre pe smile le aai hogi
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 07:25:07 AM » |
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 09:48:59 AM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Parwaaz Ji..
Shaandar Peshkash!!! 
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 10:20:02 AM » |
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Mujhe Haq nahi gar teri nisbat meiN kuchh kahne ka,
Mujhe tuu apni aankhoN meiN panaaH kyuN deta hai
MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai
MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai
Gar hai Tujhe ruswaaiyoN ka dar meri aamad se toH
BarsaatoN meiN bhi tanhai ka samaa kyuN deta hai
MaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai
Bahut behatreen peshkash hai aap ki Parwaaz Ji |
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 10:42:20 PM » |
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Sameer sahab ek achi paishkash par aapki khidmat mai daad paish hai qubool keejiye kya baat hai........likhte rahiye
aslam
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«Reply #10 on: September 16, 2010, 01:08:09 PM » |
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Bahut achhi peshkash hai Parwaaz ji,very nice.  |
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #11 on: September 17, 2010, 11:56:49 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: September 17, 2010, 12:06:19 PM » |
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Mujhe Haq nahi gar teri nisbat meiN kuchh kahne ka,
Mujhe tuu apni aankhoN meiN panaaH kyuN deta hai
MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai
MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai
Gar hai Tujhe ruswaaiyoN ka dar meri aamad se toH
BarsaatoN meiN bhi tanhai ka samaa kyuN deta hai
MaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai
BAHUT KHOOB .....BEHTREEN...MIND BLOWING.....HAR SHER APNA EK KIRDAAR BAYAAN KARTA HAI....AAP TO WAISE BHI BHTREEN SHAYAR HAI....VERY NICE PARWAAZ SAHAB |
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«Reply #13 on: September 21, 2010, 12:08:00 AM » |
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bahut khoob parwaaz ji.......
Thanks BBL thanks for appriciate
Aati rahiye..
Khush rahiye..
khuda Hafez... |
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«Reply #14 on: September 21, 2010, 12:13:04 AM » |
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Bahut Khub Janaab Parwaaz Saheb
Badi Hi Khoobsurati Se Dil Ke Esaasaat Ko
Lafzon Ki Shaql Mein Pesh Kiya Hai Aapne.
Bahut Janaab.
Dad Hazir Hai Kabul Karen...1
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
Shihab SahaaB Aadaab!
Jee aapki pazi rai ka aur kalaam ki ahsaasoN
ko pasand karne bahut bahut shukriyaa...
Aapne apna kimti waqt diya... uske liye bhi
Shukriyaa...
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.. Is hounsla
afzai ke tahe dil se mamnoon hai....
Khush o aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... |
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