Aansu......... " ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on September 14, 2010, 06:48:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 21, 2010, 12:23:26 AM »
Quote from: Anshumali on September 14, 2010, 10:43:36 PM
MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai

MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai

Very Impressive......Sameer Ji ! Aansu Ke Dard ko dil me utaarne ki behtreen koshish..... mujhe aapki yeh koshish behad pasand aai...

MMaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai

Maqtaa mujhe khaas taur par bahut pasand aaya ...

dil ko chhuute ehsaas bahut khoob rahe....tahe dil se daad hazir hai.. Qubuul karen... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....


Naresh Jee aadaab!

Aapki purkhulus aur dilkash tarif e housla afazai
ke teh dil se mashkoor o mamnoon hai...

Aapne jin ashaaroN ko pasand farmaya hai, hume bhi
Khub lage hai woh... aapki yeh daad dil se kabool ki
aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.....

Khush o aabaad rahiye....
Khuda hafez.... Usual Smile         
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #16 on: September 21, 2010, 12:42:31 AM »
Quote from: ANAAMIKA on September 15, 2010, 07:25:07 AM
Nice thread....nice Gazhal...Parwaazji....nice replies....kasak ji.... anshumaliji...sameerji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kaash wo nagme humein sunaye na hote,
aaj unko sunkar ye aansu na aaye hote,

agar is tarah bhul jaana hi tha,
to itni gehrai se dil mein samaaye na hote......not mine...

Anamika jee aadaab!

Thanks for this beatiful reply.... Usual Smile
aapne bhi bahut achchi line kahi hai daad...Usual Smile

Aati rahiye......
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         


LaboN se muskuraate rahe, palkoN se ashk bahate rahe
Pucha kisi ne humse toh, khushi ka ahsaas dilaate rahe
     
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«Reply #17 on: September 21, 2010, 05:11:15 AM »
ji nice creation.......... Applause
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #18 on: September 21, 2010, 08:00:18 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on September 15, 2010, 09:48:59 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Parwaaz Ji..

Shaandar Peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Kalaam ki pasandeedgi aur aapki aamad ke liye
behad shukraguzaar hai...

Ummid hai aage bhi aapka saath milta raheNga hume..
Aate rahiye...
Khush o aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #19 on: September 23, 2010, 09:07:16 AM »
zabardast hai  icon_flower
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #20 on: November 15, 2010, 02:57:32 PM »
Aapka shukriya Parwaaz-bhai....jo aapne hamaari lines ko saraha....

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 21, 2010, 12:42:31 AM
Anamika jee aadaab!

Thanks for this beatiful reply.... Usual Smile
aapne bhi bahut achchi line kahi hai daad...Usual Smile

Aati rahiye......
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         


LaboN se muskuraate rahe, palkoN se ashk bahate rahe
Pucha kisi ne humse toh, khushi ka ahsaas dilaate rahe
     
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«Reply #21 on: March 27, 2012, 08:54:17 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 14, 2010, 06:48:45 PM
Mujhe Haq nahi gar teri nisbat meiN kuchh kahne ka,
Mujhe tuu apni aankhoN meiN panaaH kyuN deta hai

MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai

MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai

Gar hai Tujhe ruswaaiyoN ka dar meri aamad se toH
BarsaatoN meiN bhi tanhai ka samaa kyuN deta hai

MaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai

         




 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: October 08, 2012, 07:15:03 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 14, 2010, 06:48:45 PM
Mujhe Haq nahi gar teri nisbat meiN kuchh kahne ka,
Mujhe tuu apni aankhoN meiN panaaH kyuN deta hai

MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai

MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai

Gar hai Tujhe ruswaaiyoN ka dar meri aamad se toH
BarsaatoN meiN bhi tanhai ka samaa kyuN deta hai

MaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai

         


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: October 08, 2012, 08:22:15 AM »
bohat khoob parwaz ji.......bohat c daad.....
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«Reply #24 on: October 08, 2012, 08:30:52 AM »
Zabardasht
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«Reply #25 on: October 08, 2012, 11:06:46 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 14, 2010, 06:48:45 PM
Mujhe Haq nahi gar teri nisbat meiN kuchh kahne ka,
Mujhe tuu apni aankhoN meiN panaaH kyuN deta hai

MaiN chup rah leta umar bhar dastaan e gham bankar
Mujhe ashk bankar bahane ki wajaaH kyuN deta hai

MaiN teri aankhoN se barsaa huN tere dil ne kaha tha
Mujhe apne hi dard ka naam e khataa kyuN deta hai

Gar hai Tujhe ruswaaiyoN ka dar meri aamad se toH
BarsaatoN meiN bhi tanhai ka samaa kyuN deta hai

MaiN kahiN khushi se hi naa mar jauN " ParwaaZ"
Merii beraNgi kou tuu rangeen duaa kyuN deta hai

         



miyaaN parwaaj ................ acha kaah hai
zara aur oonchi parwaaz lagao lekin
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