AANSU PEE GAYEE........KOYAL

by KOYAL46 on July 11, 2010, 05:12:49 PM
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KOYAL46
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Mein is dhoke mai aansu pee gayee
Kay bujh jaayegee wo ek chingaaree

Jis se aag bhadakne ka darr tha mujhe
Haaye ye kya kiya meine,apne he dil kay

jakhamon pe namak chhidak diya meine
Ya rab khare-khare aansu pee liye meine



            --------KOYAL---------
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Anshumali
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2010, 05:31:34 PM »
Mein is dhoke mai aansu pee gayee
Kay bujh jaayegee wo ek chingaaree

Jis se aag bhadakne ka darr tha mujhe
Haaye ye kya kiya meine,apne he dil kay

jakhamon pe namak chhidak diya meine
Ya rab khare-khare aansu pee gayee mein



            --------KOYAL---------
Ashaar Ke khayal Umdaa lage mujhe.....bahut khoob...Koyal Ji....dil se daad !
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2010, 06:01:10 PM »
Wah! Kya khoob peshkash hai Koyal Ji
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2010, 12:57:25 PM »
WAAH KOYAL KYA BAAT HAI!!!

HANSI KE PARDE SE GHAM JHANKTA HAI.
APNE ASHQON KO KOI AISE BAANT-TA HAI
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2010, 01:21:59 PM »
Thanks a lot Naresh-ji.....

Ashaar Ke khayal Umdaa lage mujhe.....bahut khoob...Koyal Ji....dil se daad !
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2010, 01:22:55 PM »
Shukriya RHji.......

Wah! Kya khoob peshkash hai Koyal Ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2010, 01:29:51 PM »
Aabhaar Mamta-di....

Didi Din k saath raat judi hai
Hansee k saath gham juda hai

Yahi tou zindagi ki reet hai
Chhupa lo dard isme jeet hai

Aansu baante kahaan hain meine didi
Dard ke wo ashru pee gayee hai koyal



WAAH KOYAL KYA BAAT HAI!!!

HANSI KE PARDE SE GHAM JHANKTA HAI.
APNE ASHQON KO KOI AISE BAANT-TA HAI

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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2010, 09:58:06 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2010, 05:21:37 AM »

   Poem ka khyaal bahut achha hai koyal dear. Aise hi chehekti raho, ab to monsoon aagaya yaar, ab to roz tumse poem chahiye hume,aakhir koyal ho tum yoindia ki bagiya ki. Khush raho. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2010, 09:45:06 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2010, 09:50:35 AM »
Kin shabdo mai aapka shukriya ada karun Tamanna-di....
Its very nice to get encouragement from poets like you....
I'll try to keep your word..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower wave hello

   Poem ka khyaal bahut achha hai koyal dear. Aise hi chehekti raho, ab to monsoon aagaya yaar, ab to roz tumse poem chahiye hume,aakhir koyal ho tum yoindia ki bagiya ki. Khush raho. Usual Smile
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