Aansun

by Bambi on June 23, 2010, 09:08:11 PM
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Bambi
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Aansun bhi chamakta hai.

Usme bhi hira dikhta hai,

Namak ka rang jhalakta hai.

Aansun bhi chamakta hai.

Galon ko chumta hai

Ungiyon sey baatein karta hai

Jism main ghulkar

Sare unkahe labz

Suna deta hai.

Aansun bhi chamakta hai.
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2010, 07:44:24 AM »
Exactly same as your poem titled Chamak only title is different
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Bambi
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2010, 04:58:39 PM »
yes I didn't feel the title was working.
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