Aap ki dosti hamesha...

by honeyrose on January 06, 2008, 04:06:54 AM
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Mere aankhon mein hai yaadien appki
mere dil peh hai sapne appki
 
Jabbhi tumhe bhulne ki koshish ki
Hum neh tanhaye peh raha guzare
 
Yeh umeed par rakha hai essas
mera sabr ka imtihan nah loh
 
Yeh pyaar hai sadiyo seh sah khaas
Jab chahoo toh mujhe appne dil
 
keh kareeb na chahoo ya toh appne
dil mein apni kabar saja doh
 
Aap ki dosti hamesha is dil mein rahegi
appka pyaar na pah sakho toh dosti hi saahi
 
Na mangha tha dar-de-gum hum ko mila hai
zindagi bhar ka gum..
 
Mere dil ki awaaz na tujhe suna sakhi
tumne hai diya hai  zindagi ka dukh
 
Aab kya fariyad kareh hai kudha
Tere ish Kaf-e-naazuk mein nikale meri jaan..
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sika
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2008, 09:48:05 AM »
kismat to hamari bhi achhi thi
par humne kisi ke nam kar dee

hum jeete the badi shan se
par unke isk ne zindagi aam kar dee

kabhi to sahar hogi is bekhudi ki
jis khudi mein zindagi andheron ke name kar dee
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kaham
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2008, 11:58:19 AM »
Dear

you need to improve your words. I found there is conflict of gendre in your poetry.
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2008, 02:40:05 PM »
nice honeyrose and sika!!
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