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Dilo Dimak Pe Chaye Hai Aapke Nagme
Ab Mere Sher Bi Mujhko Ajnabi Se Lage
Zamane ber ki Kitabon ko aaj padte huwe
Pareshaan rooh hai meri khayal kya kahiye?
Sabhi ko dawa hai apne hi fan ke gaalib ka
Jo mai nahi toh fir malaal kya kahiye
Tajurbe mere bi kehte hai kal ke afsane,
Samne aapke meri hi shayri se lage.
Mujhse behtar haqikat ko likhne walon ne
Apni mazi ke tasavvur ko bhula rakha hai
Log auron ki tokkar se sabak lete hai
Maine dawat main museebat ko bhula rakha hai
Agar ye daur mubarak ho aapke katir
Khusi ke hadse bhi dil ko dillagi se lage
Tanha hu aaj bi taqdeer ka sataya hu
Naseeb aapke jage hai sitaron ki tarah.
Aapki aankhon main machalte hai chand ke jalwe
Hasti hai meri ek jugnu ke isharon ki tarah.
Jawani fir un andheron main jhake leti hai
Jahan ujale mujhe roshni se lage
Dilo dimak pe chaye hai aapke nagme
Ab mere sher bhi mujhko ajnabi se lage.
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2008, 05:18:35 PM » |
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bahoot khoob Roja!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2008, 05:46:08 PM » |
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Thanks didi
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2008, 12:19:22 AM » |
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Khoob! bohot khoob roja ji, bade dinoN ke baad aaye magar poori aab-o-taab ke saath.
"Maine dawat main museebat ko bhula rakha hai"
Kya kehne is misre ke, bade jigar ki baat he. 
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2008, 01:21:37 AM » |
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Bahut bahut shukhriya Sayyid ji. Aate rehna
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2008, 02:41:15 AM » |
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bohut acha likha hai nice!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2008, 05:08:35 AM » |
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Dilo Dimak Pe Chaye Hai Aapke Nagme
Ab Mere Sher Bi Mujhko Ajnabi Se Lage
Zamane ber ki Kitabon ko aaj padte huwe
Pareshaan rooh hai meri khayal kya kahiye?
Sabhi ko dawa hai apne hi fan ke gaalib ka
Jo mai nahi toh fir malaal kya kahiye
Tajurbe mere bi kehte hai kal ke afsane,
Samne aapke meri hi shayri se lage.
Mujhse behtar haqikat ko likhne walon ne
Apni mazi ke tasavvur ko bhula rakha hai
Log auron ki tokkar se sabak lete hai
Maine dawat main museebat ko bhula rakha hai
Agar ye daur mubarak ho aapke katir
Khusi ke hadse bhi dil ko dillagi se lage
Tanha hu aaj bi taqdeer ka sataya hu
Naseeb aapke jage hai sitaron ki tarah.
Aapki aankhon main machalte hai chand ke jalwe
Hasti hai meri ek jugnu ke isharon ki tarah.
Jawani fir un andheron main jhake leti hai
Jahan ujale mujhe roshni se lage
Dilo dimak pe chaye hai aapke nagme
Ab mere sher bhi mujhko ajnabi se lage.
 khoob likha hai Roja dear..  |
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2008, 06:33:40 AM » |
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Log auron ki tokkar se sabak lete hai
Maine dawat main museebat ko bhula rakha hai
Agar ye daur mubarak ho aapke katir
Khusi ke hadse bhi dil ko dillagi se lage
roja ji waise to aapki puri nazm bohut hi khoobsurat hai magar hamei ye upar likhe lines bohut hi pasand aayi
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2008, 11:08:41 AM » |
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buht achaa intkhab hy roja ji
ye haath main toota liye kia aap hain?
plz ans.
gulzar
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2008, 05:36:09 PM » |
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bohut acha likha hai nice!!
Thanks sidushale sis |
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2008, 05:37:56 PM » |
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khoob likha hai Roja dear.. Thank you very much Honey dear |
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2008, 05:38:57 PM » |
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Log auron ki tokkar se sabak lete hai
Maine dawat main museebat ko bhula rakha hai
Agar ye daur mubarak ho aapke katir
Khusi ke hadse bhi dil ko dillagi se lage
roja ji waise to aapki puri nazm bohut hi khoobsurat hai magar hamei ye upar likhe lines bohut hi pasand aayi
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«Reply #12 on: July 30, 2008, 05:40:07 PM » |
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Bohat Hi Umda Likha Hai Roja Sis Aapne
Yun Hi Likhte Rahiyega Aur Hum Padte Rahe hmhm
Lagey Raho.
aha Thanks for your valuable comments Majid brother. Nice to see you around. |
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«Reply #13 on: July 30, 2008, 05:44:50 PM » |
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buht achaa intkhab hy roja ji
ye haath main toota liye kia aap hain?
plz ans.
gulzar
Thanks Gulzargul ji...
(aap kya pooch rahe hai? and kya mujhe jawab dena hai? meri samajme
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«Reply #14 on: July 30, 2008, 05:58:41 PM » |
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Dilo Dimak Pe Chaye Hai Aapke Nagme
Ab Mere Sher Bi Mujhko Ajnabi Se Lage
Zamane ber ki Kitabon ko aaj padte huwe
Pareshaan rooh hai meri khayal kya kahiye?
Sabhi ko dawa hai apne hi fan ke gaalib ka
Jo mai nahi toh fir malaal kya kahiye
Tajurbe mere bi kehte hai kal ke afsane,
Samne aapke meri hi shayri se lage.
Mujhse behtar haqikat ko likhne walon ne
Apni mazi ke tasavvur ko bhula rakha hai
Log auron ki tokkar se sabak lete hai
Maine dawat main museebat ko bhula rakha hai
Agar ye daur mubarak ho aapke katir
Khusi ke hadse bhi dil ko dillagi se lage
Tanha hu aaj bi taqdeer ka sataya hu
Naseeb aapke jage hai sitaron ki tarah.
Aapki aankhon main machalte hai chand ke jalwe
Hasti hai meri ek jugnu ke isharon ki tarah.
Jawani fir un andheron main jhake leti hai
Jahan ujale mujhe roshni se lage
Dilo dimak pe chaye hai aapke nagme
Ab mere sher bhi mujhko ajnabi se lage.
simply superb......realy nice and very different...... roja ji |
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