Aapse kya gila kare hum........

by fairy2633 on January 23, 2009, 01:38:41 PM
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Aapse kya gila kare hum...
Aap sanam toh patthar dil ho...
Patther mei jaan nahi hoti jazbat to dur...
Abb Aapse kya shikayat kare hum???  tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2009, 01:47:56 PM »
Aapse kya gila kare hum...
Aap sanam toh patthar dil ho...
Patther mei jaan nahi hoti jazbat to dur...
Abb Aapse kya shikayat kare hum???  tearyeyed


wah bahut khoob Fairy


DARD HAMARA WOH SAMAJ NAHI PAYE
DIL MEH HAMEY WOH KABHI BASA NAHI PAYE
ABB AAPSEY KYA GILA KAREY HUM SANAM
PATHAR DIL KABHI PIGAL NAHI PAYE


JASBIR SINGH

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fairy2633
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2009, 01:51:18 PM »
thanks jasbir ji......aur aapne bhi bahut acche lines likha hai
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2009, 01:53:42 PM »
thanks jasbir ji......aur aapne bhi bahut acche lines likha hai


Thanks Fairy

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2009, 02:40:18 PM »
Aapse kya gila kare hum...
Aap sanam toh patthar dil ho...
Patther mei jaan nahi hoti jazbat to dur...
Abb Aapse kya shikayat kare hum???  tearyeyed

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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2009, 03:26:43 PM »
Aapse kya gila kare hum...
Aap sanam toh patthar dil ho...
Patther mei jaan nahi hoti jazbat to dur...
Abb Aapse kya shikayat kare hum???  tearyeyed


Hay Hay Kya Baat Hai,.
Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai,.

Na Gilaa Karna Na Shikaayat Karna,.
Mujhse Bas "Fairy, Tum Mohabbat Karna,.

Patthar Nahi Hoon Main, Ye Khayaal Nikaal De,.
Gunaah Na Karna, Pattharon Ki Na Ibaadat Karna,.




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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2009, 05:58:01 PM »
Aapse kya gila kare hum...
Aap sanam toh patthar dil ho...
Patther mei jaan nahi hoti jazbat to dur...
Abb Aapse kya shikayat kare hum???  tearyeyed

Bahut khoob Fairy Ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2009, 05:05:09 AM »
Aapse kya gila kare hum...
Aap sanam toh patthar dil ho...
Patther mei jaan nahi hoti jazbat to dur...
Abb Aapse kya shikayat kare hum???  tearyeyed


Bahoth Qoob Janab Kya Alfaz diye hain appne Ahesaas ko Wah maza agaya !! Eak Khushish Hamari Bhi !!

Dekh ke mere Janaze ko wo muskura raha hai Qadeer !!
Maine Suncha bhi na tha ke meri mahobbath itni Zalim hogi !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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fairy2633
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2009, 05:36:36 AM »
thanks for ur comments abd ji
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fairy2633
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2009, 05:38:44 AM »
Bahut khoob Fairy Ji
thanks rajesh ji....
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fairy2633
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2009, 05:41:56 AM »
shukriya jaanasheen ji aur aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai...






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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2009, 05:43:32 AM »
Bahoth Qoob Janab Kya Alfaz diye hain appne Ahesaas ko Wah maza agaya !! Eak Khushish Hamari Bhi !!

Dekh ke mere Janaze ko wo muskura raha hai Qadeer !!
Maine Suncha bhi na tha ke meri mahobbath itni Zalim hogi !!

Qadeer Toopchi
shukriya qadeer ji aapko meri shayri acchi lagi........aur aapki bhi bahut acchi koshish hai...
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