Aasaan to nahin tha...lekin....!!!!!

by Talat on March 31, 2006, 09:17:04 AM
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Talat
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«Reply #30 on: April 02, 2006, 05:18:12 PM »
Quote from: "Rajbir"
Quote from: "Talat"
Dil ye pathar ka banana koi asaan to nahin tha
Door zindagi se jaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Ashkon ka samandar kahin aankhon me chupa hai
Qatre qatre ko chupana koi asaan to nahin tha

labon pe konon par jo muskurahat hai khili
Sang zakhmon ke muskurana koi asaan to nahin tha

Band palkon ke peeche jo chale aate hain manzar
Har raat yaadon me bitaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Bewafa naam hume jo de baithi hai ye dunya
Banana raakh par naya ashiaana koi asaan to nahin tha !!! sad5 sad5 sad5


Talat

Dil ko choo gayi aap ki yeh kavita !

Laga jaise aap humein humari kahani suna gayi !

Bahut khoob. Aap sada aisa he achcha likhti rahein. Dua hai humari

Rajbir


Thanks a lot Rajbir....jab dil ke dard ko lafzon ka pairahan pahnate hain to shayari apne aap ban jaati hai sad5
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«Reply #31 on: April 02, 2006, 05:20:39 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Bohat khoob Talat,waheed,sanya,nikki sis,Bharat.Sabne bohat hi acha likha.

"Gaye wo zamane tujhe yaad karnewale,
      ye samajhke ham to jee rahe thhe,

      bhulana tujhe jab mushkil ho gaya bohat,
      kore kaagaz ashkon se bhar rahe thhe,

      ye meri hi nadani thi jo andheron me jeeti aayi,
      jo saamne tha,use kyun andekha kar rahe thhe,

      teri yaadein kabhi mit nahi sakengi ab jaana hai,
      kya karun,agar tumne mujhe na pehchana hai."


Thanks a lot Nidhi....humesha ki tarah bohot achcha !!!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #32 on: April 02, 2006, 05:23:54 PM »
Thanx Talat Usual Smile .
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«Reply #33 on: April 02, 2006, 05:28:04 PM »
SERIOUSLY TALAT JI AND EVERY ONE ELSE TOO GOOD, DONT HAV WORDS TO SAY NE THING ELSE.
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«Reply #34 on: April 02, 2006, 05:30:21 PM »
KHIRD KE PAAS KHABAR KE SIWA KUCH AUR NAHI
TERA ILAAJ NAZAR KE SIWA KUCH AUR NAHI.

HAR MAKAAM SE AAGE MAKAAM HAI TERA            
HAYAT ZOQ-E-SAFAR KE SIWA KUCH AUR NAHI
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«Reply #35 on: April 02, 2006, 05:30:36 PM »
Thank you so much Phoenix...really my pleasure that u liked it Usual Smile
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«Reply #36 on: April 02, 2006, 05:33:00 PM »
TALAT JI dil ka dard jab padhte hai to dil se waah nahi  aah nikalti hai.

very nice poetry
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«Reply #37 on: April 02, 2006, 05:36:29 PM »
Thanx Phoenix glasses2 and very well written by u 2 Usual Smile .
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«Reply #38 on: April 02, 2006, 05:41:03 PM »
Bohot achcha likha hai Phoenix...!!! sad5 Usual Smile
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«Reply #39 on: April 02, 2006, 05:41:50 PM »
thanx nidhi ji
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«Reply #40 on: April 02, 2006, 06:09:54 PM »
Thanxxxx  alot    Talat....... Salma......... Nikki.....
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«Reply #41 on: April 02, 2006, 06:13:21 PM »
THANX TALAT JI
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Bharat
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«Reply #42 on: April 03, 2006, 12:50:03 AM »
Talat......Rajbir.........

Thanks for appreciating.
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«Reply #43 on: April 03, 2006, 09:08:43 AM »
Good work al glasses2
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Raja
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«Reply #44 on: April 03, 2006, 07:54:16 PM »
Everybody good job   !!!


Hum kashmkash se gujar kyun nahin jate
marna to baharhal hai, mar kyun nahin jate
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