AASHIK:Shayri-E-Dard

NETRAPAL

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veeran hogayee hai jindgee deedar hooye hai unke ke jbse
har khushi lagtee hai beginee see mujhe, darde-dil baya karoo kisse

ek hee pal me chura liya hai dil mera, barso sambhala tha maine jise
jiskee tasveer ko chumta hoo, wo choomtee hai par n maloom kise

doolee uth rahee hai nikal pade hai manjile- rah par wo musafir
ham chal pade rah par apnee , mayate-kandho par 'O' Musafir

rote hai idhar bhee gamgeen, anshoo hai yaha bhee ankho me sabke
kisen nibhaya tha pyar, kisne thee bewafayee kon kahega ab, or kisse

NETRA....


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Shikha12

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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2007, 01:03:27 PM »

=D> =D> Perfect.... as ever....


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Rajbir

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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2007, 01:39:48 PM »

Netra

Mashallah bahut khoob likha hai =D>


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angel4u

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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2007, 05:04:51 PM »

Bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat.


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2007, 04:38:52 AM »

bhoot bhoot shukriya aap sab ka

bedard kya jane dard kiseeka
dil kee dhadkano ko kya samjenge wo
seene me dadakta hooa dil no ho kiseeka

ishak ko khel hee to samjha thaa tune
thokaro me rakh kar toda tha dil ko tune
toot kar bikhar gaya, sambhala bhee nahi befa jise tune

pade hai rah me teri toota hooa dil liye
kabhi to ayega lot kar mahboob muskan ek hoto par liye
dube huye game-samnder me dekhte hai rah unki ek aas liye

aas maan par chamakte tare see timtimatee ho tum
roshni ke jalwo apne hee jalwo ke dikhati hee tunm
itna mat itra roope-roshani pe apne aye hamdam
toot kar girte tare ke bhee jamee pe nahi padte hai kadam

netra..


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2007, 04:39:24 AM »


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punam

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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2007, 11:20:30 AM »

Bahut khoob netra ji...
aap ka likhi shayari aik se bar ke aik hoti hai...


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deepika_divya

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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2007, 12:09:19 PM »

wonderful. nertapla ji....

Chahte hai jisse hum, woh aksar kisi aur k khayalo mea milte hai
chahte hame woh kehte hai , par na jaane woh itna dur kyun rehtein hai

kabhi ak zamana tha jab sunki labo par hum bastein the
par aaj na woh mausam hai, na ab hum unke khyalo mea bastein hai


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2007, 12:19:02 PM »

Quote from: "punam"

Bahut khoob netra ji...
aap ka likhi shayari aik se bar ke aik hoti hai...

very very thanks poonam ji, ye aapkaa baddapn hai jo aapne aisa kaha

netra...


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2007, 12:28:50 PM »

Quote from: "deepika_divya"

kya bhat hai divya jee bhoot kbhoob

badkismatee hamree jo chahat ko n samaj paye unkee
kyar kare dekthe hee hame najar tak jhuk jatee thee jinkee

dil kee jajbaat dafan hee rahgaye the seene me hee jinke
hona chah kar bhee bhee ham na hona pay the kabhi jinke

netra....


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deepika_divya

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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2007, 05:00:39 AM »

Good one Netra Ji

kabhi beit jahan hum chandni raato mea pyar k geet gaatein the
ab tho sanm pyar ke naam se hi kafa ho jate hai

kabhi jab rangeen nazaare hote hte fizao mea, tho apni meeti baato se mere man ko behkate the
ab tho wakt aisa hai kiwoh hmare saye se bhi nazre churate hai.

chalte the jiska haath thaam hum samunder k kinaro pe
woh chod gaye hume bich majdhaar pe ,jahan dur dur tak na koi kinare hai


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punam

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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2007, 06:02:42 AM »

Quote from: "NETRAPAL"

Quote from: "punam"

Bahut khoob netra ji...
aap ka likhi shayari aik se bar ke aik hoti hai...

very very thanks poonam ji, ye aapkaa baddapn hai jo aapne aisa kaha

netra...

kyun sarminda karte ho aap...


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punam

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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2007, 06:04:27 AM »

divya di nice going...


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NETRAPAL

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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2007, 07:26:11 AM »

Quote from: "deepika_divya"

bhoot khoob divya jii,

wo bahithe hai iskh ke guftgu me kiseeke
ham bhee hai kinare samandar ke intjaar me unheeke

wo shaath hamdam ke baithe hai aapne
ham bhee saath hai par darde-dil ke aapne

wo hans kar karte hai ijhare-mobaat ka unse
hamme bhee chahat hai unki par bya kare kisse

wo lagate hamdam ko see se apne hee
ham lagate botal ko hoto se gam bhoolane ke liye pane hee


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Jiya

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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2007, 12:52:10 PM »

Quote from: "NETRAPAL"

bohot khoob- bohot khoob,,,,, wah!!!!!!!! kafi achha likha hai aapne,,,,, gud job netra ji.

kyun gumaan na ho is husn par hume apne,
is husn ke humaare kai kadardaan hain,
is tadap se aapki lagta hai ki sachche aashiq ho aap humaare,
aur ye husn paanaa aapka bhi armaan hai.

kyun koste ho aap hume be-dard keh kar,
aapka dil to hume samjh hi na paaya,
hum aasmaan ke wo bedaag chaand hain ,
jise chah kar bhi koi chhu nahin paayaa.

jo aaj aapne apna haale dil bayaan kiya,
aji ye inaayat aapne pehele hi kar di hoti,
koi humko itni mohabbat bhi kar sakta hai,
to aapki mohabbat mein ye husn-e-mallika, kab ki jogan ban gayi hoti.

................................................. ................jiya ...


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