AASHIK

by NETRAPAL on June 13, 2007, 12:40:24 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 15, 2007, 02:30:41 PM »
good job divya, Jiya and Netra ji!!!
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #16 on: June 16, 2007, 05:27:30 AM »
Quote from: "Jiya"
Quote from: "NETRAPAL"
bhoot bhoot shukriya aap sab ka

bedard kya jane dard kiseeka
dil kee dhadkano ko kya samjenge wo
seene me dadakta hooa dil no ho kiseeka

ishak ko khel hee to samjha thaa tune
thokaro me rakh kar toda tha dil ko tune
toot kar bikhar gaya, sambhala bhee nahi befa jise  tune

pade hai rah me teri toota hooa dil liye
kabhi to ayega lot kar mahboob muskan ek hoto par liye
dube huye game-samnder me dekhte hai rah unki ek aas liye

aas maan par chamakte tare see timtimatee ho tum
roshni ke jalwo apne hee jalwo ke dikhati hee tunm
itna mat itra roope-roshani pe apne aye hamdam
toot kar girte tare ke bhee jamee pe nahi padte hai kadam

netra..



bohot khoob- bohot khoob,,,,, wah!!!!!!!!  kafi achha likha hai aapne,,,,, gud job netra ji.

kyun gumaan na ho is husn par hume apne,
is husn ke humaare kai kadardaan hain,
is tadap se aapki lagta hai ki sachche aashiq ho aap humaare,
aur ye husn paanaa aapka bhi armaan hai.

kyun koste ho aap hume be-dard keh kar,
aapka dil to hume samjh hi na paaya,
hum aasmaan ke wo bedaag chaand hain ,
jise chah kar bhi koi chhu nahin paayaa.

jo aaj aapne apna haale dil bayaan kiya,
aji ye inaayat aapne pehele hi kar di hoti,
koi humko itni mohabbat bhi kar sakta hai,
to aapki mohabbat mein ye husn-e-mallika, kab ki jogan ban gayi hoti.

................................................. ................jiya ...


aree bap re itna gussa........bhoot khoob chaa gaye aap to

mat itra husan pe apne aye mallika
char din kee chandnee hai ye aye mallika
aaj to sajtee hai mahfile chah me teri bahut
kal tarso ke kadardan ko ek bhee aye mallika

hamne to chate aye sadiyo se tujhe aye 'jigar'
chandni hee nahi tere andhere  bhee chumte hai ham
tum to sama gaye ho rooh bankar aatma se meri
chah kar bee n chuda paaoge daman apna aye hamdam

netra....

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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #17 on: June 18, 2007, 06:23:12 AM »
mar mite the ham to chah me teri hee
tum na aye janaje par jab ankh mund gaye thi meri

aye parvardiar banayee ye hasse-wadiya tune
befayee ka aalam bhee kyo dikhya tha tune

wo to chale gaye, na kar paye the ijhare-mohabbat
ham bhee the chah me, bya kare juba se ijhare-mohabbat

najaro kee bhasaa n samjhe the wo, n samje the ham
hogaye  kurbaan wo, ham bhee chal diye aashiko ke rahe-kadam

n bahao ashk apne, aashkee nahi marte hai kabhi
markar bhee jinda range aashik to kisse ban kar sada
aynge mjar par lagenge mele tab
chuume ggee duniya saree us majar ko jaha aashik hooe the dafan

netra...


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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #18 on: June 18, 2007, 06:23:48 AM »
mar mite the ham to aye mohabbat chah me teri
tum na aye janaje par jab ankh mund gaye thi meri

aye parvardigar banayee ye hasse-wadiya hai tune
befayee ka aalam bhee aashiki kyo dikhya tha tune

wo to chale gaye, na kar paye the ijhare-mohabbat
ham bhee the chah me, bya kare wo juba se ijhare-mohabbat

najaro kee bhasaa n samjhe the wo, n samje the ham
hogaye  kurbaan wo, ham bhee chal diye aashik ke rahe-kadam

n bahao ashk apne, aashkee nahi marte hai kabhi
markar bhee jinda rahenge aashik to kisse ban kar sada
aynge sab apne bhee, mjar par lagenge mele tab
chuume ggee duniya saree us majar ko jaha aashik hooe the dafan

netra...


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