Aashiyan______________Baadal

by baadal102 on October 26, 2009, 04:28:00 PM
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Ranjo-Gum se humara naata kuch aisa juda hai,
Jab se us KHUDA ki likhi kismat ko hum.ne paaya hai,

Paas hote hue sab kuch, sab kuch paaraya hai,
Samaj nahi aata aaj hum.ne kya khoya or kya paaya hai,

Gujaar di jin ke liye tamam kimti gharian umar ki,
Aaj unhi ke pass humare liye waqt ki kami ko paaya hai,

Dunia ki har rasmo or riwajo se wakif sab hai,
Lakin apni jindgi mai hum.ne inhe ulta hi paaya hai,

Jo apne the un ke pyar pe haqe tha humara,
Aur un apno ko hum.ne gairo pe mehrbaan hote hue paaya hai,

Nazaro ko fer lena to dastoor hai dunia ka,
Par apno ko to daaman churate hue hum.ne paaya hai,

Kabhi jo ponchte the humari aankho ke aanshu,
Unhe aaj gairo pe aanchal bhigote hue paaya hai,

Akele baith ke jab BAADAL poochta hai apna haal-e-dil,
To khushk aankho ko tut.te hue khawab dekhte paaya hai,

Fir bhi mai us KHUDA ki rehmat ka sukergujar hu,
Sada jis ke dar ka paak aashiyan hum.ne paaya hai,

Jab se us KHUDA ki likhi kismat ko hum.ne paaya hai,
Sada jis ke dar ka paak aashiyan hum.ne paaya hai.............






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fairy2633
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2009, 05:13:25 AM »
bahut khoob badal ji......well done.... Clapping Smiley
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baadal102
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«Reply #2 on: October 27, 2009, 06:21:48 AM »
sukria fairy ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 27, 2009, 07:06:26 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Baadal ji,very touching and lovely creation,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2009, 03:46:50 AM »
Badaal ji, kahan the aap itne din se?

Aap ki nazmaen padrne ka har baar intizaar rehta hai,good going bhaijaan~ very nice
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2009, 04:38:48 AM »
na jaane kyun mere aashiane ka rukh nahin karte log
do gaj zameen k neeche hai, khauff khate hai log
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2009, 02:29:54 PM »
Nice and Excellent Badal  ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2009, 03:28:44 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob Baadal ji,very touching and lovely creation,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut sukria madhuwesh ji
thanx a lot
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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2009, 09:40:47 AM »
aap sabhi ka bahut bahut sukria

ANJAAN JI

SAHIL JI

N

RISHI JI


thanx a lot
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«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2009, 10:53:01 AM »
Kuch Andhera Bhi Zaruri Hai Gham-e-Yaar K Sath ....
Ab Diya Koi Na Rakhe Meri Dewaar K Sath ....

Mein Jo Ik Umer Masafat Mein Raha, Tab Jana ....
Rah Bhi Chalti Rahi Hai, Meri Raftaar K Sath ....

Hum To Yusaf Nahi,Bazaar-e-Sukhan Mein “FARAAZ”
Yun Hi Chal Parte Hein, Har Ik Kharidaar K Sath ....

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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2009, 11:35:36 AM »
Kuch Andhera Bhi Zaruri Hai Gham-e-Yaar K Sath ....
Ab Diya Koi Na Rakhe Meri Dewaar K Sath ....

Mein Jo Ik Umer Masafat Mein Raha, Tab Jana ....
Rah Bhi Chalti Rahi Hai, Meri Raftaar K Sath ....

Hum To Yusaf Nahi,Bazaar-e-Sukhan Mein “FARAAZ”
Yun Hi Chal Parte Hein, Har Ik Kharidaar K Sath ....

-Ahmed Faraz,.

bahot ahchche
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«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2009, 01:31:12 PM »
bahut khoob azeem bhai
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«Reply #12 on: October 31, 2009, 02:59:32 PM »
Kuch Andhera Bhi Zaruri Hai Gham-e-Yaar K Sath ....
Ab Diya Koi Na Rakhe Meri Dewaar K Sath ....

Mein Jo Ik Umer Masafat Mein Raha, Tab Jana ....
Rah Bhi Chalti Rahi Hai, Meri Raftaar K Sath ....

Hum To Yusaf Nahi,Bazaar-e-Sukhan Mein “FARAAZ”
Yun Hi Chal Parte Hein, Har Ik Kharidaar K Sath ....

-Ahmed Faraz,.

Nice sharing Azeem bhai
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«Reply #13 on: November 04, 2009, 09:44:08 AM »
rishi ji aap bhi kuch likhte to aacha lagta hmme
well wait for ur lines
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«Reply #14 on: November 04, 2009, 09:49:07 AM »
Azeem bhai ,Saahil ji,bahut bahut khoob,lovely lines.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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