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Meri tarap se tarap kar yeh aasmaan roya
Lahoo bahaya sitaaron ne aur samaa roya
Mujhe harr aarzu se waQat ne nashaad kar dala
Bahaaron ne mera gulahsan yunhi barbaad kar dala
Khizaan bhi ro pari ujra huwa jab dekha mera aangan
Mere dukh mein meri haalat pe sara yeh jahaan roya
Harr ik majboor hai meri tarha aatish bhi Qismat bhi
Mujhe yazdaa ne sab kuch de diya hasrat bhi himmat bhi
Giri jab bijli mere aashiyan par main nahi roya
Jala ke mere ghar ko jaate jaate yeh dhuaan roya
Mere aansoo bahe rukhsaar se tau dard ke maare
Meri taQdeer ka kaatib bhi gham se be-panah roya
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2005, 01:48:06 PM » |
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wahh aryaan bohot hi acha likha hai!!!! ..
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2005, 01:55:30 PM » |
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wahh aryaan bohot hi acha likha hai!!!! .. Bohat shukriya Sanya...... |
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2005, 02:21:42 PM » |
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Meri tarap se tarap kar yeh aasmaan roya
Lahoo bahaya sitaaron ne aur samaa roya
Mujhe harr aarzu se waQat ne nashaad kar dala
Bahaaron ne mera gulahsan yunhi barbaad kar dala
Khizaan bhi ro pari ujra huwa jab dekha mera aangan
Mere dukh mein meri haalat pe sara yeh jahaan roya
Harr ik majboor hai meri tarha aatish bhi Qismat bhi
Mujhe yazdaa ne sab kuch de diya hasrat bhi himmat bhi
Giri jab bijli mere aashiyan par main nahi roya
Jala ke mere ghar ko jaate jaate yeh dhuaan roya
Mere aansoo bahe rukhsaar se tau dard ke maare
Meri taQdeer ka kaatib bhi gham se be-panah roya
wah aryaa,bohat khoob  |
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2005, 03:14:01 PM » |
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Thank you so much Nidhi... .................. |
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2005, 10:47:46 AM » |
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Wow Aryaan ji... bohut hi khoob likha, very nice.........
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2005, 03:24:35 PM » |
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as usuall...bohot acha likha aryaan ji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2005, 04:14:17 PM » |
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wah wah wah kya likha.......very sad but GOOD and these lines "Giri jab bijli mere aashiyan par main nahi roya
Jala ke mere ghar ko jaate jaate yeh dhuaan roya "very touchy........dil ko chuu gayee
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2005, 08:48:54 PM » |
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Meri tarap se tarap kar yeh aasmaan roya
Lahoo bahaya sitaaron ne aur samaa roya
Mujhe harr aarzu se waQat ne nashaad kar dala
Bahaaron ne mera gulahsan yunhi barbaad kar dala
Khizaan bhi ro pari ujra huwa jab dekha mera aangan
Mere dukh mein meri haalat pe sara yeh jahaan roya
Harr ik majboor hai meri tarha aatish bhi Qismat bhi
Mujhe yazdaa ne sab kuch de diya hasrat bhi himmat bhi
Giri jab bijli mere aashiyan par main nahi roya
Jala ke mere ghar ko jaate jaate yeh dhuaan roya
Mere aansoo bahe rukhsaar se tau dard ke maare
Meri taQdeer ka kaatib bhi gham se be-panah roya
Wah kahein ya Aah kahein.................... |
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2005, 12:56:53 AM » |
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Jalpari, Meena, Isha & Aarzuu...
pasand karne ka bohat bohat shukriya dosto....
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2005, 04:58:05 AM » |
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Meri tarap se tarap kar yeh aasmaan roya
Lahoo bahaya sitaaron ne aur samaa roya
Mujhe harr aarzu se waQat ne nashaad kar dala
Bahaaron ne mera gulahsan yunhi barbaad kar dala
Khizaan bhi ro pari ujra huwa jab dekha mera aangan
Mere dukh mein meri haalat pe sara yeh jahaan roya
Harr ik majboor hai meri tarha aatish bhi Qismat bhi
Mujhe yazdaa ne sab kuch de diya hasrat bhi himmat bhi
Giri jab bijli mere aashiyan par main nahi roya
Jala ke mere ghar ko jaate jaate yeh dhuaan roya
Mere aansoo bahe rukhsaar se tau dard ke maare
Meri taQdeer ka kaatib bhi gham se be-panah roya
wahhhhh................ aryaan............. bahut khoob |
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2005, 01:51:15 AM » |
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wahhhhh................ aryaan............. bahut khoob
Thanks a lot Khushiiiii...... |
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2005, 01:52:52 AM » |
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Abhi tau ishQ mein aisa bhi haal hona hai
Keh ashk rokna tum se mohaal hona hai
Harr ek lab pe hai meri wafaa k afsaane
Tere sitam ko abhi lazawaal hona hai
Baja hai ke khaar hain lekin bahaar ki rutt mein
Yeh teh hai ke hamein bhi nehaal hona hai
Tumhain khabar hi nahi tum tau lut jaao ge
Tumhare hijr mein ik lamha bhi saal hona hai
Hamari rooh pe jab bhi azaab utre hain
Tumhari yaad ko iss dil ki dhaal hona hai
Kabhi tau roye ga woh bhi kisi ki baahon mein
Kabhi tau uss ki hansi ko zawaal hona hai
Milein gi hum ko bhi apne naseeb ki khushiyaan
Bas intizaar hai kab yeh kamaal hona hai
Harr shakhs chale ga hamari raahon par
Mohabbaton mein hamein woh misaal hona hai
Zamaana jiske kham-o-paich mein ulajh jaye
Hamari zaat ko aisa sawaal hona hai
Wasi yaQeen hai mujh ko woh laut aaye ga
Usey bhi apne kiye ka malaal hona hai
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2005, 01:59:34 AM » |
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Abhi tau ishQ mein aisa bhi haal hona hai
Keh ashk rokna tum se mohaal hona hai
Harr ek lab pe hai meri wafaa k afsaane
Tere sitam ko abhi lazawaal hona hai
Baja hai ke khaar hain lekin bahaar ki rutt mein
Yeh teh hai ke hamein bhi nehaal hona hai
Tumhain khabar hi nahi tum tau lut jaao ge
Tumhare hijr mein ik lamha bhi saal hona hai
Hamari rooh pe jab bhi azaab utre hain
Tumhari yaad ko iss dil ki dhaal hona hai
Kabhi tay roye ga woh bhi kisi ki baahon mein
Kabhi tau uss ki hansi ko zawaal hona hai
Milein gi hum ko bhi apne naseeb ki khushiyaan
Bas intizaar hai kab yeh kamaal hona hai
Harr shakhs chale ga hamari rahon par
Mohabaton mein hamahin woh misaal hona hai
Zamaana jis k kham-o-paich mein ulajh jaye
Hamari zaat ko aisa sawaal hona hai
Wasi yaQeen hai mujh ko woh laut aaye ga
Usey bhi apne kiye ka malaal hona hai
I have read it before on a site......................and i mail it to my frndz............
Thanx Aryaan .............................. |
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2005, 02:06:40 AM » |
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I have read it before on a site......................and i mail it to my frndz............
Thanx Aryaan ..............................
zaroor parhi hogi Naveed.....yeh mere favr8 poet Wasi Shah ki hai. |
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