Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri

by Lawa on December 21, 2004, 01:41:25 AM
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Lawa
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Yeh maine mere ek dost ke liye likhi, jise Cancer hua hai
Huh...Achi khaasi zindigi chal rahi thi uski
Par jab ye baat saamne aayee, to sab kuch badal gaya.
To maine yeh shairee uski jagah par khud ko rakh ke likhi hai.
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.


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Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri
Mujh gam-e-saar se aashiqui na karo
Gam to mile hain mujhko sougaat mein
Yoon barbaad apni zindigi na karo

Jaam se lipti piya nahin karte
Leeron ko kabhi siya nahin karte
Kuch inke hi jaisi hai haalat meri
Khud apne dil se dillagi na karo

Bin nindiya ke sapno se kya faayeda
Pyar ke in sapno se kya faayeda
Ye sapne poore nahin hote kabhi
Jaan boojh ke bekhudi na karo

Meri asaliyat tumko maaloom hi hai
Meri haqekat tumko maaloom hi hai
Bhula do jahan se kahani meri
Khushiyon se tum dushmani na karo
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KaMaL
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2004, 07:25:43 AM »
Excellent Lawa ji....Sach mein aapne bahut acha lika hai...
I am impressed... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2004, 07:27:59 AM »
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KaMaL
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2004, 07:30:40 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
please support me if you love my siggi here:
http://www.yoindia.com/forums/ftopic4492.html
vote for "yes" to support me!!!


Hmmn Heart abhi aaya...
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2004, 07:40:48 AM »
tune vote nahi kiya kamal....... tu bhool gaya
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KaMaL
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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2004, 08:10:31 AM »
Kab ka kar diya hai maine Vote...
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2004, 08:33:53 AM »
yes  i know i m very happy....... main aur chota kar dunga siggi par powerpuff girls nahi hatengi..................... agree?Huh???
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KaMaL
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2004, 08:38:26 AM »
Yes...Dear...Tha..
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KaMaL
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2004, 02:49:24 PM »
Quote from: "Lawa"
Yeh maine mere ek dost ke liye likhi, jise Cancer hua hai
Huh...Achi khaasi zindigi chal rahi thi uski
Par jab ye baat saamne aayee, to sab kuch badal gaya.
To maine yeh shairee uski jagah par khud ko rakh ke likhi hai.
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.


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Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri
Mujh gam-e-saar se aashiqui na karo
Gam to mile hain mujhko sougaat mein
Yoon barbaad apni zindigi na karo

Jaam se lipti piya nahin karte
Leeron ko kabhi siya nahin karte
Kuch inke hi jaisi hai haalat meri
Khud apne dil se dillagi na karo

Bin nindiya ke sapno se kya faayeda
Pyar ke in sapno se kya faayeda
Ye sapne poore nahin hote kabhi
Jaan boojh ke bekhudi na karo

Meri asaliyat tumko maaloom hi hai
Meri haqekat tumko maaloom hi hai
Bhula do jahan se kahani meri
Khushiyon se tum dushmani na karo
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I told you that I am impressed.
Jaise aap likhte ho bilkul hi waise main sochta hoon.
Main bhi Kai baar jab likhta hoon, to bas doosre character ki jagah khud ko rakh ke hi likhta hoon. Main samajh sakta hoon saare jazbaat.


Kya haqeekat hai apni
Kya tumhein hum batayenge
Kya hua hai humein
Kab talak chupaayenge....NM
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Lawa
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2004, 02:59:00 PM »
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Thanks Kamal Usual Smile

You also write very well Kamal

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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2004, 03:39:43 PM »
Quote from: "Lawa"
Yeh maine mere ek dost ke liye likhi, jise Cancer hua hai
Huh...Achi khaasi zindigi chal rahi thi uski
Par jab ye baat saamne aayee, to sab kuch badal gaya.
To maine yeh shairee uski jagah par khud ko rakh ke likhi hai.
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.


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Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri
Mujh gam-e-saar se aashiqui na karo
Gam to mile hain mujhko sougaat mein
Yoon barbaad apni zindigi na karo

Jaam se lipti piya nahin karte
Leeron ko kabhi siya nahin karte
Kuch inke hi jaisi hai haalat meri
Khud apne dil se dillagi na karo

Bin nindiya ke sapno se kya faayeda
Pyar ke in sapno se kya faayeda
Ye sapne poore nahin hote kabhi
Jaan boojh ke bekhudi na karo

Meri asaliyat tumko maaloom hi hai
Meri haqekat tumko maaloom hi hai
Bhula do jahan se kahani meri
Khushiyon se tum dushmani na karo
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excellent.............superb...........nice wordings...........lawa..
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Lawa
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2004, 12:36:20 AM »
Thanks Waheed bhai
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2004, 02:36:32 PM »
Vey nice lawa........
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2004, 08:00:38 PM »
Quote from: "Lawa"
Yeh maine mere ek dost ke liye likhi, jise Cancer hua hai
Huh...Achi khaasi zindigi chal rahi thi uski
Par jab ye baat saamne aayee, to sab kuch badal gaya.
To maine yeh shairee uski jagah par khud ko rakh ke likhi hai.
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.


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Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri
Mujh gam-e-saar se aashiqui na karo
Gam to mile hain mujhko sougaat mein
Yoon barbaad apni zindigi na karo

Jaam se lipti piya nahin karte
Leeron ko kabhi siya nahin karte
Kuch inke hi jaisi hai haalat meri
Khud apne dil se dillagi na karo

Bin nindiya ke sapno se kya faayeda
Pyar ke in sapno se kya faayeda
Ye sapne poore nahin hote kabhi
Jaan boojh ke bekhudi na karo

Meri asaliyat tumko maaloom hi hai
Meri haqekat tumko maaloom hi hai
Bhula do jahan se kahani meri
Khushiyon se tum dushmani na karo
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very nice!

zindagi ko azmana se kya faida,
jab humari sansen hi bewafa hai,
hum marham bhi nahin mang sakhte,
humara dard jo bedawa hai! (NM)
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KaMaL
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«Reply #14 on: December 23, 2004, 12:33:35 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Lawa"
Yeh maine mere ek dost ke liye likhi, jise Cancer hua hai
Huh...Achi khaasi zindigi chal rahi thi uski
Par jab ye baat saamne aayee, to sab kuch badal gaya.
To maine yeh shairee uski jagah par khud ko rakh ke likhi hai.
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.


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Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri
Mujh gam-e-saar se aashiqui na karo
Gam to mile hain mujhko sougaat mein
Yoon barbaad apni zindigi na karo

Jaam se lipti piya nahin karte
Leeron ko kabhi siya nahin karte
Kuch inke hi jaisi hai haalat meri
Khud apne dil se dillagi na karo

Bin nindiya ke sapno se kya faayeda
Pyar ke in sapno se kya faayeda
Ye sapne poore nahin hote kabhi
Jaan boojh ke bekhudi na karo

Meri asaliyat tumko maaloom hi hai
Meri haqekat tumko maaloom hi hai
Bhula do jahan se kahani meri
Khushiyon se tum dushmani na karo
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very nice!

zindagi ko azmana se kya faida,
jab humari sansen hi bewafa hai,
hum marham bhi nahin mang sakhte,
humara dard jo bedawa hai! (NM)


wah....Bahut khoob Meena ji...

Shaayad koi pichle janam ka,
Hum pe mout ka karz pada hai.
Liye honge kuch pal udhaar humne pehle bhi,
Jo ab zindagi ko girwi rakha hai.
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