Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri

by Lawa on December 21, 2004, 01:41:25 AM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: December 23, 2004, 05:25:53 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhh bohot badiya kamal ji!

zindagi ka hisab kitab rakhne wale hum kaun hote hai,
Khuda ki  dain hai to wohi hisab rakhte hai.
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Namkeen
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«Reply #16 on: December 23, 2004, 05:59:21 PM »
Quote from: "KaMaL"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Lawa"
Yeh maine mere ek dost ke liye likhi, jise Cancer hua hai
Huh...Achi khaasi zindigi chal rahi thi uski
Par jab ye baat saamne aayee, to sab kuch badal gaya.
To maine yeh shairee uski jagah par khud ko rakh ke likhi hai.
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.



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Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri
Mujh gam-e-saar se aashiqui na karo
Gam to mile hain mujhko sougaat mein
Yoon barbaad apni zindigi na karo

Jaam se lipti piya nahin karte
Leeron ko kabhi siya nahin karte
Kuch inke hi jaisi hai haalat meri
Khud apne dil se dillagi na karo

Bin nindiya ke sapno se kya faayeda
Pyar ke in sapno se kya faayeda
Ye sapne poore nahin hote kabhi
Jaan boojh ke bekhudi na karo

Meri asaliyat tumko maaloom hi hai
Meri haqekat tumko maaloom hi hai
Bhula do jahan se kahani meri
Khushiyon se tum dushmani na karo

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very nice!

zindagi ko azmana se kya faida,
jab humari sansen hi bewafa hai,
hum marham bhi nahin mang sakhte,
humara dard jo bedawa hai! (NM)


wah....Bahut khoob Meena ji...

Shaayad koi pichle janam ka,
Hum pe mout ka karz pada hai.
Liye honge kuch pal udhaar humne pehle bhi,
Jo ab zindagi ko girwi rakha hai.



Nice you all

khwab dikhe bhi nahi or toot gaye,
vo humse mile bhi nahi or ruth gaye,
hum jagte rahe duniya soti rahi,
ek baarish hi thi jo sath mein roti rahi...
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Meena
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«Reply #17 on: December 23, 2004, 06:20:47 PM »
nice one namkeen!

 :D
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Namkeen
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«Reply #18 on: December 23, 2004, 08:36:29 PM »
Woh Hamare nahin toh kya gum hain....
Hum toh unhi ke hain yeh kya kum hain....
Na gum hain na AAsoo Kum hain....
Dekhtey hain Rone walen main kitna dum hain.....N/M
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Lawa
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«Reply #19 on: December 24, 2004, 01:58:43 AM »
Quote from: "Namkeen"
Quote from: "KaMaL"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Lawa"
Yeh maine mere ek dost ke liye likhi, jise Cancer hua hai
Huh...Achi khaasi zindigi chal rahi thi uski
Par jab ye baat saamne aayee, to sab kuch badal gaya.
To maine yeh shairee uski jagah par khud ko rakh ke likhi hai.
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.



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Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri
Mujh gam-e-saar se aashiqui na karo
Gam to mile hain mujhko sougaat mein
Yoon barbaad apni zindigi na karo

Jaam se lipti piya nahin karte
Leeron ko kabhi siya nahin karte
Kuch inke hi jaisi hai haalat meri
Khud apne dil se dillagi na karo

Bin nindiya ke sapno se kya faayeda
Pyar ke in sapno se kya faayeda
Ye sapne poore nahin hote kabhi
Jaan boojh ke bekhudi na karo

Meri asaliyat tumko maaloom hi hai
Meri haqekat tumko maaloom hi hai
Bhula do jahan se kahani meri
Khushiyon se tum dushmani na karo

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very nice!

zindagi ko azmana se kya faida,
jab humari sansen hi bewafa hai,
hum marham bhi nahin mang sakhte,
humara dard jo bedawa hai! (NM)


wah....Bahut khoob Meena ji...

Shaayad koi pichle janam ka,
Hum pe mout ka karz pada hai.
Liye honge kuch pal udhaar humne pehle bhi,
Jo ab zindagi ko girwi rakha hai.



Nice you all

khwab dikhe bhi nahi or toot gaye,
vo humse mile bhi nahi or ruth gaye,
hum jagte rahe duniya soti rahi,
ek baarish hi thi jo sath mein roti rahi...


Quote from: "Namkeen"
Woh Hamare nahin toh kya gum hain....
Hum toh unhi ke hain yeh kya kum hain....
Na gum hain na AAsoo Kum hain....
Dekhtey hain Rone walen main kitna dum hain.....


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Thanks Namkeen
And very good
Wah wa
-- Lawa
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Lawa
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«Reply #20 on: December 24, 2004, 02:02:05 AM »
Quote from: "KaMaL"
Shaayad koi pichle janam ka,
Hum pe mout ka karz pada hai.
Liye honge kuch pal udhaar humne pehle bhi,
Jo ab zindagi ko girwi rakha hai.


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Bahut achhe...kamal
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KaMaL
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«Reply #21 on: December 24, 2004, 02:34:43 AM »
Thanks all.... Usual Smile
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rohit30002
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«Reply #22 on: July 01, 2005, 08:42:20 PM »
Quote from: "Lawa"
Yeh maine mere ek dost ke liye likhi, jise Cancer hua hai
Huh...Achi khaasi zindigi chal rahi thi uski
Par jab ye baat saamne aayee, to sab kuch badal gaya.
To maine yeh shairee uski jagah par khud ko rakh ke likhi hai.
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.



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Aasuon se bhari hai zindigi ye meri
Mujh gam-e-saar se aashiqui na karo
Gam to mile hain mujhko sougaat mein
Yoon barbaad apni zindigi na karo

Jaam se lipti piya nahin karte
Leeron ko kabhi siya nahin karte
Kuch inke hi jaisi hai haalat meri
Khud apne dil se dillagi na karo

Bin nindiya ke sapno se kya faayeda
Pyar ke in sapno se kya faayeda
Ye sapne poore nahin hote kabhi
Jaan boojh ke bekhudi na karo

Meri asaliyat tumko maaloom hi hai
Meri haqekat tumko maaloom hi hai
Bhula do jahan se kahani meri
Khushiyon se tum dushmani na karo

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Wow It's really great lawa
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