Aawaz Ke Iss Bazaar Mein,Khamoshiyon Ki Pehchaan Nahi Hoti "Khwaish"

by khwaish on May 03, 2009, 07:02:41 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2009, 05:32:44 PM »
Quote from: Mann on May 03, 2009, 08:10:22 AM
Wah Kya Baat hai KHWAISH ji.. Dard Bhara Yeh Ek ek Lafz aapne such likha hai..!! Aur Last Jumla to Waqai Kamaal Likha Hai aapne.. Really A Beautiful Poem..! Bahut khoooob.. Applause Applause


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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mannji..Aapne Hamesha se Izzat aur Haulsa Bakhsa Hai..Teh dil se shukriya aapka..
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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2009, 05:41:57 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 03, 2009, 07:02:41 AM
Aawaz Ke Iss Bazaar Mein,
Khamoshiyon Ki Pehchaan Nahi Hoti,
Maayus Insaan Ki Nazrein hi Keh Deti Hai sab!!!
Usse Zaroorat Zubaan Ki Nahi Hoti....

Usko Tha Yeh Gumaan Ke Ek Woh Hi hai,
Jo Hai Halaat ke Qaid Mein Majboor!!!
Iss Duniya Mein Aise Bhi Bahut Hai Jo Har Dard Sehte Hai,
Par Unke labon Par Koi Shikayat Nahi hoti....

Jo Ashq Aankhon Mein Aakar Rukh Jaaye,
Woh Duniya Ke Liye Sirf Paani hai!!!
Jab Tak Ashq Aankhon Se Behta Nahi,
Uski Koi Keemat Nahi Hoti.....

Gard-e-Safar Mein Gira To Hai "Khwaish"
Par Abhi Haara Nahi!!!
Khud Ko Zinda Rakhna Zaroorat Hai Meri,
Muaf Karna Eh Khuda,
Yeh Koi Bhagaawat Nahi Hoti....

Har Shaks Iss Jahaan ka Apni-Apni,
Pareshaniyon Mein Uljha Hai!!!
Dusro Ke Dard Ko Bhi Samjhe,
Itni uske paas Fursat Nahi Hoti....

Apni Har Ek saans Ka Bhi Hisaab Dena Padta Hai,
Qayamat Ke Uss Din!!!
Afsos Jab Koi Insaan Ko Zamaanat Nahi Hoti.....

"Khwaish" Ki Kalam Ab rukh si Gayi hai Naa Jaane Kyon??
Sach to Yeh Hai Ke,
Kabhi-Kabhi Zindagi Bhi Lafzon se Bayaan Nahi Hoti....

              ~~~~~ Khwaish~~~~~

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Bohot Khoob Khwaish...kis sher ki taareef karun aur kiski nahin...har sher ek se badh ke ek !!

Very nice creation !
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«Reply #17 on: May 06, 2009, 07:19:39 AM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 03, 2009, 01:24:23 PM
ek chhoti si koshish kar rahi hoon...


samajhna to chahte hai khud hum tumko,
par kabhi kabhi aankhein moondni padti hia,
tu behek na jaaye mere dard ke mausam se,
mujhe apni ashqon ki baarish sametni padti hia,
dilki majboori ye, saath ho kaarvaan phir bhi humko
safar-e-zindagi tanhaiyon mein kaatna padta hai...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Angel,is Poetry Ka jawaab zaroor dunga..Shukriya saath dene ka.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: May 08, 2009, 06:54:48 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 05:41:57 PM
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish...kis sher ki taareef karun aur kiski nahin...har sher ek se badh ke ek !!

Very nice creation !

Talat,Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka..Aapne Hamesha Se Mera Hausla Badhaya Hai..Hamesha Saath Diya..Thankyou Soooooo Much Dost!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: May 08, 2009, 07:04:04 PM »
Bahut sundar peshkash hai Khwaish Ji
Maza aa jataa hai aap ke har ek shayri padhkar
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«Reply #20 on: May 11, 2009, 03:22:24 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on May 05, 2009, 06:12:29 PM
Waah Clapping Smiley bohot acha likha hai aapne Khwaish ji..har ash'aar ek alag rang lie hai.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji..It's Always Nice To Hear From you.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: June 11, 2009, 01:48:19 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 08, 2009, 07:04:04 PM
Bahut sundar peshkash hai Khwaish Ji
Maza aa jataa hai aap ke har ek shayri padhkar

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajesh Ji..
Thanks A lot For Your Appreciation, Aapne Hamesha Se Hi Mera Hausla badhaya hai..Thankyou Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: June 12, 2009, 05:21:56 AM »
MASHA ALLAH KHWAISH JI,AAPKE HAR EK LAFZ DIL KO CHU GAYI
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«Reply #23 on: June 24, 2009, 05:36:27 AM »
Quote from: shab on June 12, 2009, 05:21:56 AM
MASHA ALLAH KHWAISH JI,AAPKE HAR EK LAFZ DIL KO CHU GAYI

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shabanaji..
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«Reply #24 on: June 24, 2009, 06:42:22 AM »
Wah wah Khwaish ji,excellent,very nice, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Beautiful poem by Angel .
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«Reply #25 on: March 20, 2010, 03:28:06 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 24, 2009, 06:42:22 AM
Wah wah Khwaish ji,excellent,very nice, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Beautiful poem by Angel .

Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much Dear  :)Madhu..
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«Reply #26 on: March 20, 2010, 03:45:24 PM »
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji.. waakai bahoot hi lajawaab likha hai .. Bahoot Khoob!

Maine isse miss kaise kar diya ! sad5
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«Reply #27 on: March 21, 2010, 10:40:29 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on March 20, 2010, 03:45:24 PM
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji.. waakai bahoot hi lajawaab likha hai .. Bahoot Khoob!

Maine isse miss kaise kar diya ! sad5

Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much Sophi... Usual Smile

Aur Aap Iss Kalaam Ko padh Sako,Isliye To isse Vaapas Dhoond Kar Le Aaya Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: March 21, 2010, 10:54:27 AM »
MINDBLOWING ,EXCELLENT.KHWAISHJI.
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«Reply #29 on: May 14, 2010, 06:43:19 AM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 21, 2010, 10:54:27 AM
MINDBLOWING ,EXCELLENT.KHWAISHJI.
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