-Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-:Shayri-E-Dard

HumTum

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Aaye they mere ghar mein bhi chand sitare kabhi
Khiza hi khiza hai har sou ab woh baharien nahin

Dil tu kyun nakaam-e-muhhobat ki baat karta hai?
Hum to ho gaye hai unke agar woh hamare nahin

Behtar yhi ke ab bando saaz-o-samaan aur nikalo
Ab iss shahar mein janab tumhaare guzaare nahin

Ja kar koi uss sitam_gaar ko yeh ithelaah kar de
QurbaaN ho gaye hai ishq mein magar hare nahin

Daftaan chend logo ne hath mein utha to liye sang
Magar jane kya yaad aaya unko, ke maare nahin?
(Sang = Pathar / stone)

Shayaad usne bhi khola hoga khaat koi puraana
Tabhi aaj usne apne gesu sawarien nahin
(Gesu = Julfien)

Phir hum uss bewffa ko yaad karte hai
Wohi din hai hamare aur hamari raatein hai wohi

Ilaahi, mujhe uss basti ka pta bta de ke jahaaN pe
TeG nahin lahuu nahin dhuan nahin angarien nahin
(TeG = Talwar/Sword)

Asia nai ke humse ishq karne walon ki kami hai magar
Dil toot kar unhi ko chahta hai jo hamare nahin

Kahin koi masoom apne ghar se be_ghar na ho jaye
Yahi soch kar humne apne ghar mein jale uthare nahin
(Jale = Spider’s Net)

Ajab mod par aa kar rukh gyi hai zindagi :HumTum:
Dil wohi dilbhar nahin ankhien wohi nazarien nahin !!

HumTum


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Roja

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2009, 08:27:00 AM »

Wah wah waaaaahh.. HumTum... Bahut umda likha hai


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abdulqadeer

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #2 on: January 28, 2009, 08:31:33 AM »

Quote from: HumTum on January 28, 2009, 08:13:51 AM

Kya likha hai janab apke har alfaaz me ahesaas ko mahesoos kiya humne !! bahoth umda peskash hai apki ye !! maza agaya padke !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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abdulqadeer

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2009, 09:50:20 AM »

Eak Koshish hamari bhi humtum sahab tawajo chahonga janab !!

Dekh ke mere Janaze ko wo muskura rahi hai Qadeer !!
Maine suncha bhi na tha ke meri mahobbath itni zalim hogi

Qadeer Toopchi


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #4 on: January 28, 2009, 01:21:21 PM »

Yaar humtum 5th sher ke kya kehne aur 6th sher ne kaleja cheer diya yaar Bohat bohat zabardast peshkash mere bhai

Quote from: Shihab on January 28, 2009, 08:32:33 AM

Gham ki Barish ne bhi Uske Naksh ko Dhoya Nahin..
Usne Mujhe Kho diya Main ne Use Khoya Nahin..

Nice Sharing Shihab......

Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 28, 2009, 09:50:20 AM

Eak Koshish hamari bhi humtum sahab tawajo chahonga janab !!

Dekh ke mere Janaze ko wo muskura rahi hai Qadeer !!
Maine suncha bhi na tha ke meri mahobbath itni zalim hogi

Qadeer Toopchi

Bohat khoob Qadeer........


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HumTum

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2009, 08:41:54 AM »

Bahut bahut Shukariya DostooN.

Shihab - "Faraz" sahab ne khoob likha hai:

Gham ki Barish ne bhi Uske Naksh ko Dhoya Nahin..
Usne Mujhe Kho diya Main ne Use Khoya Nahin..

Neend ka halka Gulabi sa Khumar Aankhon mein tha..
Yun Laga Jeise Wo Shab ko Dair tak Soya Nahin..

Janta hon Aik Aeise Shaks ko Main bhi 'Faraz..
Gham se Pathar ho Gaya Lekin Kabhi Roya Nahin !!

Accha lga phir se iss Gazal ko padh kar magar aap apna kucch likhte to aur bhi accha lagta. aur haan jasei ki Yoindia ka rule hai .. Aap please NotMine likh diya kariye agar aap apna kudh ka likha post nahin karte to. aur haan yaqeen maniye jab aap kudh sochkar likhna shuru karenge to dhiree dhiree iss se bhi jiada accha likhange.

HumTum


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HumTum

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2009, 08:46:50 AM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 28, 2009, 09:50:20 AM

Eak Koshish hamari bhi humtum sahab tawajo chahonga janab !!

Dekh ke mere Janaze ko wo muskura rahi hai Qadeer !!
Maine suncha bhi na tha ke meri mahobbath itni zalim hogi

Qadeer Toopchi

waah Qadeer Sahab .. kya khoob kha .. mazza aa gya. bahut acche... Kucch arz hai ....

Kucch aur bhi nikhar aayega teri Heena ka rang
Jab mere lahhu ki bhoonde ismein Shamil hongi!!

HumTum


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abdulqadeer

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2009, 09:25:15 AM »

Wah Wah kya kahene is kalaam ke janab bahoth qoob !! Aur humtum sahab app ke sher pe ajj shayari ka matlab hi rakh deta hon Tawajo chahonga aur ye kahena munsaib samjhonga ke ye eak nayab ashar hai mera !! agar ashar ke matlab tak pahonc gaye to nawaz dena "Humtum"sahab !!

Sher ,Shayari kya hai "Qadeer" Eak alfaz ka namona !
Ye hunar hai Samandar-a-jazbath ko "kuze" me band karna !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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HumTum

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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2009, 09:38:15 AM »

waah waah waah .. Qadeer sahab.... kya kehne iss sher ke ... Samander-e-Jazbaat ko Kuze mein band karna ... waah ... yeh hunar to khuda ne shayrooN ko baskha hi hai .... kucch arz hai .... Gour farmaiyega....

GumooN ne aakar jab mera Dil Chaak kar diya
Seena nikal kar apna AsharaaN mein bhar diya !!

HumTum


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2009, 10:05:33 AM »

Wah wah lage rahiye HT and QT bada maza aa raha hain....


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HumTum

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Re: -Aaye They Mere Ghar Mein-

«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2009, 03:20:08 PM »

Shihab - Shukriya ... Usual Smile


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