"" ab bhi hain raahen "" 'nir'

by nirala on January 26, 2011, 06:58:02 AM
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""
chand saanse aur hain
bardast kar
jee le khusi se
waqt se pahle na marr

koi gaya hai dil tod to kya
ab bhi hain raahen
kuch kar guzar

aas ke paimaane me
himmat ka kuch
aur jaam bhar

kya hua gar zara sa
zakhm de gaya koi
uss par marham bhi
zarur lagayega koi

ummeedon ka ek hi
daaman thaam le
behte ashqon
toote dil se bhi 'nir'
tu khusi ka naam le
""
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Anshumali
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2011, 07:28:31 AM »
Quote from: nirala on January 26, 2011, 06:58:02 AM

""
chand saanse aur hain
bardast kar
jee le khusi se
waqt se pahle na marr

koi gaya hai dil tod to kya
ab bhi hain raahen
kuch kar guzar

aas ke paimaane me
himmat ka kuch
aur jaam bhar

kya hua gar zara sa
zakhm de gaya koi
uss par marham bhi
zarur lagayega koi

ummeedon ka ek hi
daaman thaam le
behte ashqon
toote dil se bhi 'nir'
tu khusi ka naam le
""

Good One ........ Nirala JI !
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tamanna.pt
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2011, 08:03:20 AM »

   Nice poem Nirala ji. icon_flower
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ANAAM
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2011, 08:18:04 AM »
likhte raho bidu....ab bhi hain tujhe padhne waale...... Applause Applause Applause
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2011, 10:31:46 AM »
Kya hausla deti kalam hai..
bahaut khoob..
daad..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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shabbir143
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2011, 10:33:42 AM »
kya baat hai bohat khoob
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2011, 12:04:51 PM »
bht khoob nirala ji....
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2011, 12:35:14 PM »
bahot aache nirala ji.......2nd last para bada touching he
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2011, 04:51:56 AM »
Bahut Khub Nirala Ji
Nice Creation


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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2011, 05:06:36 AM »
bht achche nirala ji......mazaa aagya padhke ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2011, 05:24:52 AM »
aap sabhi teh dil se sukriya
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