Ab Gulaabon ke din gaye... Intezar !

by Intezar on January 23, 2011, 09:19:59 PM
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Tere chehre par khilta gulaab bas ab ek gujraa zamaana hai
Kabka hua main fanaa ab saans lena to fakat ek bahaana hai

aaj yun hi tanhayi me palat kar dekhi kitaab Zindagi ki apni
panno mein milta gulaab bas bayaan kartaa tera afsaana hai

wo shokhiya wo adaayein, wo najre jhuka kar chalna tera
mujhe to kar diya hai khaak, ab aur kis kis ko mitaana hai

ab mujhse mil kar aaj ye teri aankhein nam kyon hain bata
duboya mujhko tune har katre me, ab aur kitna dubaana hai

jaanta hun ki tu be-sabra meri maut talaashta hai har lamha
bas kuch wakt de teri har yaad ko apne seene se lagaana hai

Laut aaya hun main apne mukaam par tanha safar tai kar ke
huaa dafan main teri gali mein bas ab yahi mera thikaana hai

Gulistaan ko kya dekhte ho, ab gulaabon ke din gaye ‘Intezar’
Ab to fakat in Kaanton se hi tujhe apni lahad ko sazaaana hai… !

Shukriya
Intezar… !


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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2011, 09:31:02 PM »
Waah Bohat Khoob Bhai,.
Bohat Achchi Shayari, Achche Ehsaas Bhare Hain Tumne,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2011, 09:36:34 PM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob Intezar jee..
Kya baat hai yaar..
Valentines day ko sochte hue parra maine..
apka title bhi bahaut khubsoorat hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Dil se daad..
Likhte rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2011, 10:03:32 PM »
Shukriya Rahim bhai... bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

aapne valentines day soch kar padha lekin aapne paaya kuch aur... ab kya kare ??

Intezar !

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 23, 2011, 09:36:34 PM
Bahaut bahaut khoob Intezar jee..
Kya baat hai yaar..
Valentines day ko sochte hue parra maine..
apka title bhi bahaut khubsoorat hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Dil se daad..
Likhte rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2011, 10:07:39 PM »
Quote from: Intezar on January 23, 2011, 10:03:32 PM
Shukriya Rahim bhai... bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

aapne valentines day soch kar padha lekin aapne paaya kuch aur... ab kya kare Huh?

Intezar !

Jo paya bahaut khubsoorat paya..
Waise sirf apka woh title kay ab gulaabon kay din gaye..
yeh line main valentine day se relate kar raha tha..
ager mauka mila toh zaroor kuch likhunga iske uper..
kyun kay line bahaut gehri hai..aur bahaut khubsoorat..
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2011, 10:10:50 PM »
Intezar rahega Rahim bhai
aapka fir se tahe dil se shukriya...

Intezar !

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 23, 2011, 10:07:39 PM
Jo paya bahaut khubsoorat paya..
Waise sirf apka woh title kay ab gulaabon kay din gaye..
yeh line main valentine day se relate kar raha tha..
ager mauka mila toh zaroor kuch likhunga iske uper..
kyun kay line bahaut gehri hai..aur bahaut khubsoorat..
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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2011, 02:42:02 AM »
Kya ehsaas pesh kiye hai ... bahut khoob ... Intezaar Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2011, 05:56:50 AM »
achha hai boss.
lekin janaab kabhi kabhar iss uljhan se bahar bhi aiye
   kab tak murjhaye gulaabo se dosti rakhoge
jeewan ke kaante bhi hain Taaza tareen unse bhi dil lagaiye.
""
Sukhe Gulaab ko dekh khus hone se behtar hai ' nirala'
       Taaze kaanton se Zakhmi hona
""
don mnd --mai ulta soch rakhta hu bas
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2011, 04:48:15 PM »
Bahut khoob intezar ji,...
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2011, 05:55:57 PM »
Bahut Khub Intezar Ji Nice Work
U Hi Likhte Rahiye, Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2011, 08:12:17 PM »
Shihab bhai bahut bahut Shukriya aapka...

Intezar !

Quote from: Shihab on January 23, 2011, 11:30:18 PM
Bahut Khub Intezaar Bhai...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2011, 08:13:21 PM »
Azeem bhai aapka bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Quote from: Azeem on January 23, 2011, 09:31:02 PM
Waah Bohat Khoob Bhai,.
Bohat Achchi Shayari, Achche Ehsaas Bhare Hain Tumne,.
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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2011, 08:14:15 PM »
Anshumali ji aapka tahe dil se bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Quote from: Anshumali on January 24, 2011, 02:42:02 AM
Kya ehsaas pesh kiye hai ... bahut khoob ... Intezaar Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2011, 08:17:11 PM »
Nirala ji aapka bahut bahut Shukriya...

Nirala ji
sab apne apne khayal hain kya kijiyega... kisi ko kuch raas aata hai to kisi ko kuch bhi nahin...

Shukriya aapka bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Quote from: nirala on January 24, 2011, 05:56:50 AM
achha hai boss.
lekin janaab kabhi kabhar iss uljhan se bahar bhi aiye
   kab tak murjhaye gulaabo se dosti rakhoge
jeewan ke kaante bhi hain Taaza tareen unse bhi dil lagaiye.
""
Sukhe Gulaab ko dekh khus hone se behtar hai ' nirala'
       Taaze kaanton se Zakhmi hona
""
don mnd --mai ulta soch rakhta hu bas
"
thanx
"
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2011, 08:18:25 PM »
Rishi ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya... aap ka har baar saath mila aapka har baar bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 24, 2011, 05:55:57 PM
Bahut Khub Intezar Ji Nice Work
U Hi Likhte Rahiye, Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi
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