~*~Ab hai mere paas kya~*~

by -Kashish- on February 02, 2010, 10:07:04 AM
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Ab hai mere paas kya
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...

Aksar karte rehte hain baatein
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...

Din to kat hi jaate hain duniya ki bheed mein
hote hain raat ke saathi
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...

Kabhi bhoole se bhi na liya tumne naam mera
karte hain bas tumhari hi baaatein
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...

Humkadam rehne ka waada karke door chale gaye kyun
talashti hain tumhe har pal har lamha
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...

Kahan kho gaye ho tum ae mere habib
raah dekhti hain har mod pe tumhari
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...

Ab hai mere paas kya
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...

Aksar karte rehte hain baatein
bas main aur meri tanhaayee...
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2010, 10:14:21 AM »
minblowing kashish ji..
keep it up. icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley  Applause    Applause
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diya786
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2010, 10:16:47 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kashish ji
bahut ache ehsasaat  icon_thumleft

Shukriya Kaash ji
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diya786
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2010, 10:17:36 AM »
minblowing kashish ji..
keep it up. icon_thumleft

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Bahut bahut shukriya
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2010, 12:02:34 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Kashish.. Bahoot hi dard bhare alfaz likhe hai.. Bahoot khoob!
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riyaz106
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2010, 12:31:57 PM »
Bahut shandaar poem likhi hai Kashish Ji. Nice creation. Dil kaifeeyat ko lafzon mein bahut achhi tarah zahir kiya hai.
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cara
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2010, 12:51:42 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI   KASHISH JI....

SAB KUCH TO LUT GAYA
JAB SE TERA SAATH GAYA
KYUN KI TUNE BEWAFAI
"AB HAI MERE PAAS KYA"
MAIN AUR MERI TANHAYEE....
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2010, 12:54:12 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI   KASHISH JI....

SAB KUCH TO LUT GAYA
JAB SE TERA SAATH GAYA
KYUN KI TUNE BEWAFAI
"AB HAI MERE PAAS KYA"
MAIN AUR MERI TANHAYEE....

Bahoot Khoob Cara ji !
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2010, 01:42:39 PM »
Khoobsurat alfaaz hai Kashish di...Itna tanha kaise parr gayi?? Hum hai ne tanhai dhoooorrrrrrr karne ke liye...Well written...

Nice lines Cara jee..
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2010, 01:50:04 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Kashish!!!!

Dard Ki inteha Hai iss Ghazal mein..

Bahut Bahut Khoobsurat!!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2010, 08:32:23 AM »
Nice One Kashish Ji
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2010, 01:16:45 PM »
Nice
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2010, 01:25:58 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Kashish.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se Apne Jazzbaaton ko Pesh Kiya Hai aapne.. Jab aapki Chaahat aapse Door Ho to Waqai aise hi Manzar hota hai.. Jaisa Ki aapne Alfaazon ke zariye Pesh kiya hai.. Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause




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