Ab Mujhe Jaane do

by Pooja on August 27, 2008, 05:26:06 PM
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Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do
Bheer main rah kar tanhaai dekh li bahoot
Ab kisi tanha jagah per daffan ho jaane do

Thak se rahe hai kadam, thak umeendin gai
Sanso ko meri bhi, ab thum jaane do
Sanso ka chalte rahna nahi hai zindagi
Yah hum samjh chuke, unko bhi samjhane do

Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do………….
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 05:42:33 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2008, 05:26:06 PM
Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do
Bheer main rah kar tanhaai dekh li bahoot
Ab kisi tanha jagah per daffan ho jaane do

Thak se rahe hai kadam, thak umeendin gai
Sanso ko meri bhi, ab thum jaane do
Sanso ka chalte rahna nahi hai zindagi
Yah hum samjh chuke, unko bhi samjhane do

Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do………….


 Applause Applause Applause
dard dard me doobi hui behtreen peshkash......dard se jyada udaasi hai isme...
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2008, 05:54:26 PM »
Bohot Khoob Pooja...!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2008, 05:58:44 PM »
Shukaria Sanjeev ji and Celmira!!
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2008, 06:18:53 PM »
Nice lines Pooja..
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2008, 06:28:42 PM »
shukaria Honey dear!! apne nahi likha kuch!!
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2008, 06:39:37 PM »
Hmm tik hai pooja kuch koshish karti hun...

Ab mujhe jaane do
Dard ke sahare jeene do
Bebas hun tumari yaad mein
Yaadein nahi mitte intzaar mein
Yaad aayenge hum bhoologe nahi iss pal ko
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2008, 06:44:38 PM »
wah bahoot khoob Honey!!
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2008, 08:42:52 PM »
Bohot hi umda pooja ji bohot dard bhare ash'aar hein, yahan kuchh kuchh arz karne ka dil chahta he.....

Arz kiya he:

+++++++++++
                             
                      -: Sayyid Randeri :-
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2008, 08:51:55 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on August 27, 2008, 06:39:37 PM
Hmm tik hai pooja kuch koshish karti hun...

Ab mujhe jaane do
Dard ke sahare jeene do
Bebas hun tumari yaad mein
Yaadein nahi mitte intzaar mein
Yaad aayenge hum bhoologe nahi iss pal ko

Achha likha honeyrose sahiba... Applause

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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2008, 08:55:41 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on August 27, 2008, 06:39:37 PM
Hmm tik hai pooja kuch koshish karti hun...

Ab mujhe jaane do
Dard ke sahare jeene do
Bebas hun tumari yaad mein
Yaadein nahi mitte intzaar mein
Yaad aayenge hum bhoologe nahi iss pal ko

Nice lines Honey. Good one
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2008, 08:56:19 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 27, 2008, 08:42:52 PM
Bohot hi umda pooja ji bohot dard bhare ash'aar hein, yahan kuchh kuchh arz karne ka dil chahta he.....

Arz kiya he:

++++++++++
                             
                      -: Sayyid Randeri :-

Bohot umdah likha hai Sayyid Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2008, 03:15:20 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2008, 05:26:06 PM
Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do
Bheer main rah kar tanhaai dekh li bahoot
Ab kisi tanha jagah per daffan ho jaane do

Thak se rahe hai kadam, thak umeendin gai
Sanso ko meri bhi, ab thum jaane do
Sanso ka chalte rahna nahi hai zindagi
Yah hum samjh chuke, unko bhi samjhane do

Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do………….


Door nahin jaane denge aap ko,
Huum nigal jaayenge dard ke samandar ko,

Saans aap ki rukegi par waqt aane do,
Tab talak hamen apni saasen ban jaane do,

Ham se samjhaane ki baat na karo,
Hamen aap samajho aisa koi kaam karo,

Na hona dafan tab tak ruko,
Jab talak meri qabr par aapka naan na ho. -

SN**
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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2008, 04:07:46 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 27, 2008, 08:42:52 PM
Bohot hi umda pooja ji bohot dard bhare ash'aar hein, yahan kuchh kuchh arz karne ka dil chahta he.....

Arz kiya he:

++++++++++++++
                             
                      -: Sayyid Randeri :-


wah kaya baat hai Sayyid ji!! Bahoot khoob.. last do line to lamal ki likhi hai apne!!! wah kaya baat hai!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2008, 04:10:19 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 27, 2008, 08:51:55 PM
Achha likha honeyrose sahiba... Applause

+++++++++


kyun dil ka rona bhi kaam nahi atta
kyun yah dard kisi tarah thum nahi jaata
sawalo -jawabo main daffan ho gai her ek khushi
kyun kabhi yah silsilla ruk nahi jaata
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