Ab Mujhe Jaane do

by Pooja on August 27, 2008, 05:26:06 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #15 on: August 29, 2008, 04:11:54 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on August 28, 2008, 03:15:20 AM
Door nahin jaane denge aap ko,
Huum nigal jaayenge dard ke samandar ko,

Saans aap ki rukegi par waqt aane do,
Tab talak hamen apni saasen ban jaane do,

Ham se samjhaane ki baat na karo,
Hamen aap samajho aisa koi kaam karo,

Na hona dafan tab tak ruko,
Jab talak meri qabr par aapka naan na ho. -

SN**

Bahoot khoob Sami ji!!
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«Reply #16 on: September 01, 2008, 07:00:43 AM »
buht hi khoob pooja ji

gulzar
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«Reply #17 on: September 01, 2008, 07:03:49 AM »
 Applause  Applause BAHUT KHOOB
POOJA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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Aryaan
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«Reply #18 on: September 01, 2008, 07:14:11 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2008, 05:26:06 PM
Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do
Bheer main rah kar tanhaai dekh li bahoot
Ab kisi tanha jagah per daffan ho jaane do

Thak se rahe hai kadam, thak umeendin gai
Sanso ko meri bhi, ab thum jaane do
Sanso ka chalte rahna nahi hai zindagi
Yah hum samjh chuke, unko bhi samjhane do

Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do………….

Excellent Pooja..
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #19 on: September 01, 2008, 08:52:55 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on August 27, 2008, 08:56:19 PM
Bohot umdah likha hai Sayyid Applause

Shukriya celmira ji.
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #20 on: September 01, 2008, 08:54:19 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 29, 2008, 04:07:46 PM

wah kaya baat hai Sayyid ji!! Bahoot khoob.. last do line to lamal ki likhi hai apne!!! wah kaya baat hai!!

Meherbaani pooja sahibaa, bohot bohot shukriya.
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #21 on: September 01, 2008, 09:22:06 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 29, 2008, 04:10:19 PM
kyun dil ka rona bhi kaam nahi atta
kyun yah dard kisi tarah thum nahi jaata
sawalo -jawabo main daffan ho gai her ek khushi
kyun kabhi yah silsilla ruk nahi jaata

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baadal102
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«Reply #22 on: September 02, 2008, 11:13:17 AM »
 :clapping:bahut khoob pooja ji  Clapping Smiley

or sayyid ji Applause

hamesha ki tareh bahut hi umda lines  Usual Smile





Baadal
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #23 on: September 02, 2008, 05:44:57 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on September 02, 2008, 11:13:17 AM
:clapping:bahut khoob pooja ji  Clapping Smiley

or sayyid ji Applause

hamesha ki tareh bahut hi umda lines  Usual Smile

Baadal

Baadal ji pasand karne or himmat afzaai ka bohot bohot shukriya. khush rahiye aabaad rahiye..
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honeyrose
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«Reply #24 on: September 02, 2008, 06:04:19 PM »
Applause Bohat khoob likha hai Sayyid ji aapne...
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«Reply #25 on: September 02, 2008, 11:42:42 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on September 02, 2008, 06:04:19 PM

Applause Bohat khoob likha hai Sayyid ji aapne...

Shukriya honeyrose sahiba, sadaa khush rahiye..
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«Reply #26 on: September 04, 2008, 03:24:05 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2008, 05:26:06 PM
Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do
Bheer main rah kar tanhaai dekh li bahoot
Ab kisi tanha jagah per daffan ho jaane do

Thak se rahe hai kadam, thak umeendin gai
Sanso ko meri bhi, ab thum jaane do
Sanso ka chalte rahna nahi hai zindagi
Yah hum samjh chuke, unko bhi samjhane do

Mujhe dard ke samunder main doob jaane do
Door bahoot door ab mujhe jaane do………….


Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..bahut hi acha likha hai... Applause Applause Applause

Aansuo se uchal kar baahar aa,
Dil ke pathar ko Pigaal kar bahaar aa,

Bahut asaan tha kisi ka Aks Bankar jeena,
Ab khud apni peehchaan banakar
iss aaene se bahaar aa....

Tujhko Zimmedariyan utha rahi hai ab,
Jaag, uth, Chal kar bahaar aa....

Machali jal mein reh kar Tadap ko kya Samjhegi???
Tadap ko samajna hai to ek baar paani se bahaar aa....

Saanso Ka chalte jaana hi Zindagi Hai "POOJA"
band kamre mein dam to gutega hi,
Dheere-Dheere tehal kar Bahaar aa....

Tujhe abhi bahut lambe safar mein jaana hai eh dost
Hausle buland rakh,Manzil ko nazar mein rakh kar bahaar aa....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #27 on: September 05, 2008, 12:37:55 AM »
Good One Khwaish..
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: September 05, 2008, 02:40:32 PM »
Quote from: gulzargul on September 01, 2008, 07:00:43 AM
buht hi khoob pooja ji

gulzar


Shukaria Gulzar ji!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: September 05, 2008, 02:41:56 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on September 01, 2008, 07:03:49 AM
Applause  Applause BAHUT KHOOB
POOJA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL

Thanks you so much Shally... apki taraf se bhi do linesd aa jaati to acha lagta!!! Apki kavitao main likha dard hamesha he bahoot jaana pehchana sa laga hai!! bahoot acha likhti hai app!!
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