Ab Mujhe Jaane do -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #30 on: September 05, 2008, 02:42:52 PM »

Quote from: Aryaan on September 01, 2008, 07:14:11 PM

Excellent Pooja..

bahoot bahoot shukaria Aryaan ji!! Apke comments hamesha he mere liye bahoot mehtavpuran rahe hai!!! Acha laga apke comments dekh kar!!


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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #31 on: September 05, 2008, 02:44:42 PM »

wah kaya baat hai, BAHOOT KHOOB Sayyid ji!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #32 on: September 05, 2008, 02:45:27 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on September 02, 2008, 11:13:17 AM

:clapping:bahut khoob pooja ji Clapping Smiley

or sayyid ji Applause

hamesha ki tareh bahut hi umda lines Usual Smile

Baadal

bahoot bahoot shukaria Baadal ji!! app nahi kuch likh kar agye sad5


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Pooja

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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #33 on: September 05, 2008, 03:05:06 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on September 04, 2008, 03:24:05 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..bahut hi acha likha hai... Applause

Aansuo se uchal kar baahar aa,
Dil ke pathar ko Pigaal kar bahaar aa,

Bahut asaan tha kisi ka Aks Bankar jeena,
Ab khud apni peehchaan banakar
iss aaene se bahaar aa....

Tujhko Zimmedariyan utha rahi hai ab,
Jaag, uth, Chal kar bahaar aa....

Machali jal mein reh kar Tadap ko kya Samjhegi???
Tadap ko samajna hai to ek baar paani se bahaar aa....

Saanso Ka chalte jaana hi Zindagi Hai "POOJA"
band kamre mein dam to gutega hi,
Dheere-Dheere tehal kar Bahaar aa....

Tujhe abhi bahut lambe safar mein jaana hai eh dost
Hausle buland rakh,Manzil ko nazar mein rakh kar bahaar aa....

bahoot bahoot bahoot ache khwaish ji!!! is se acha jawab shayad is kavita kja ho he nahi sakta!! ASahi kahaapne.. dost wo hai jo pani main gire ansoo ko bhi pehchan le!! bahoot acha laha apki kavita ko parr kar!!

Pathar yah apne dil ka hi, rulata hai bahoot
Rah rah kar bhi, wo yaad atta hai bahoot

AKS ban kar is kadar jiye ki khud ka chehra bhool gaye
Tanhaai ko ab yaadon ka manjar sajata hai bahoot

Her farz hai apni jagah, her karm hai apni jagah
Zindagi main ayya khalipan, satata hai bahoot

Kabhi ruk gai sansein to kabhi bharni padi lambi ahhein
Bikhare hue khayalo main, Haqiqat ka saya, jhunjhlata hai bahoot

Chah kar bhi kabhi na hua jo chaha Pooja ne
Zindagi aor sanso ka ab yah khail ho chuka bahoot.....


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #34 on: September 09, 2008, 07:56:32 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on September 05, 2008, 03:05:06 PM

Pathar yah apne dil ka hi, rulata hai bahoot
Rah rah kar bhi, wo yaad atta hai bahoot

Her farz hai apni jagah, her karm hai apni jagah
Zindagi main ayya khalipan, satata hai bahoot

Chah kar bhi kabhi na hua jo chaha Pooja ne
Zindagi aor sanso ka ab yah khail ho chuka bahoot.....

Waah bohot khoob!


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #35 on: September 09, 2008, 07:57:30 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on September 05, 2008, 02:44:42 PM

wah kaya baat hai, BAHOOT KHOOB Sayyid ji!!!

Shukriya pooja ji.


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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #36 on: September 11, 2008, 04:31:00 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on August 28, 2008, 03:15:20 AM

Door nahin jaane denge aap ko,
Huum nigal jaayenge dard ke samandar ko,

Saans aap ki rukegi par waqt aane do,
Tab talak hamen apni saasen ban jaane do,

Ham se samjhaane ki baat na karo,
Hamen aap samajho aisa koi kaam karo,

Na hona dafan tab tak ruko,
Jab talak meri qabr par aapka naan na ho. -

SN**

Acha likha hai Syed aapne...


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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #37 on: September 12, 2008, 05:10:11 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on September 05, 2008, 03:05:06 PM

BahutBahut Khoob Pooja..aaapne bahut jazbaati reply diya..

Silsila Zakhm-Zakhm jaari Hai,
yeh Zindagi ke Dhoop mein jalti,
Rishto ki zameen hamari hai...

Mere Aankhon mein aansuo ko dekh kar,
usse kyon Taa-a-ujub ho raha hai "Khwaish"!!!
koi keh de unhe,inn ankhon ne aansuo ke saath
kai din, kayi raat jaag kar guzaari hai....

"Khwaish" Apne Dil ka Dard Har Ek Se Na keh paaya,
kya karta, jisse yaari hai sirf ussi se hi yaari hai....

Tufaan ke darr se zindagi ki iss kashti ko sambhal rakha tha,
ab koi darr nahi, kashti paani mein mein sawaar hai,
ab Samundar ki hi Zimeedari hai....

Bech daali hai Apni Zindagi ke har khushi ke din Tere sadke,
ab ghamo ki raat to hamari hai....

Haathon ki Lakeeron ke khel mein Kuch nahi "Khwaish"
yeh zindagi na Mere bas mein thi kabhi,
Na hi yeh Bas mein Tumhari hai....

Do kadam bhi na chal saka Woh Andhero mein Yaa Rab,
Aur humne to Andhero mein apni zindagi Guzaari hai.....


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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #38 on: September 12, 2008, 06:11:29 PM »

wah! wah!! wah!! kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob khwaish ji, kai baar apki likhi poem parri.. bahoot he ache shabdo ke sath apne bahoot gahri kavita ki rachan ki hai, jalad he kuch likhne ki koshish hogi!!


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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #39 on: September 13, 2008, 06:01:01 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on September 12, 2008, 06:11:29 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja...

yeh sab kamaal aapki poetry ka hai..

aapne khud itna acha likha hai ke reply karna asaan ho jaata hai

aapke jawaab ka intezaar rahega..shukiya


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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #40 on: September 17, 2008, 08:55:49 AM »

Very good work Pooja sahiba, Khwaish bhaijaan


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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #41 on: September 21, 2008, 03:35:07 PM »

Quote from: NODER on September 17, 2008, 08:55:49 AM

Very good work Pooja sahiba, Khwaish bhaijaan

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Noderji


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Re: Ab Mujhe Jaane do

«Reply #42 on: February 09, 2009, 05:27:15 AM »

Thanks Noder ji


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