-----/// Ab muskuraanaa nahi hotaa ///----- Hriday

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hamaari mohabbat kaa hamaare paas aanaa nahi hotaa
isliye  mohabbat  pe  hamaaraa  likh paanaa nahi hotaa

titliyaan    bhi   dekho   kaisi   berang   si  ho  rahi  hain
unkaa  bhi  phoolon  sangh  khilkhilaanaa   nahi  hotaa

dekh  ke   unko kabhi hum muskuraa  lete the, wo nahi
isliye   aaj  kal   labon  kaa    muskuraanaa   nahi  hotaa

yaa  to   naaraaz  hain    woh   hamaari  hi  kisi  baat  se
yaa  unkaa  hamaari  gali  se    ho  ke jaanaa nahi hotaa

kismat    hai   khoti  ,  yaa    rekhaayein   hi   galat  hain
warnaa  yun roothaa huwaa  saa zamaanaa  nahi hotaa

hote  agar  wo  saath   to  tab  dard  hi  naa hotaa, aur
shaayad likhne  kaa  dard  pe  koi bahaanaa  nahi hotaa

ret kaa mahal tha apni  chaahaton   ka shaayad, warnaa
khwaabon kaa is tarhaa tutke bikhar  jaanaa nahi hotaa

kuch  kami  to  hamaare  andar  hi  hai  shaayad, warnaa
saahil  pe  aake kashti kaa  yun doob  jaanaa  nahi hotaa

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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2013, 08:19:16 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2013, 09:19:14 AM »
wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2013, 10:23:46 AM »
wha wha ji wha
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2013, 11:51:58 AM »
BEAUTIFUL
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2013, 01:27:33 PM »


hamaari mohabbat kaa hamaare paas aanaa nahi hotaa
isliye  mohabbat  pe  hamaaraa  likh paanaa nahi hotaa

titliyaan    bhi   dekho   kaisi   berang   si  ho  rahi  hain
unkaa  bhi  phoolon  sangh  khilkhilaanaa   nahi  hotaa

dekh  ke   unko kabhi hum muskuraa  lete the, wo nahi
isliye   aaj  kal   labon  kaa    muskuraanaa   nahi  hotaa

yaa  to   naaraaz  hain    woh   hamaari  hi  kisi  baat  se
yaa  unkaa  hamaari  gali  se    ho  ke jaanaa nahi hotaa

kismat    hai   khoti  ,  yaa    rekhaayein   hi   galat  hain
warnaa  yun roothaa huwaa  saa zamaanaa  nahi hotaa

hote  agar  wo  saath   to  tab  dard  hi  naa hotaa, aur
shaayad likhne  kaa  dard  pe  koi bahaanaa  nahi hotaa

ret kaa mahal tha apni  chaahaton   ka shaayad, warnaa
khwaabon kaa is tarhaa tutke bikhar  jaanaa nahi hotaa

kuch  kami  to  hamaare  andar  hi  hai  shaayad, warnaa
saahil  pe  aake kashti kaa  yun doob  jaanaa  nahi hotaa

*****HRIDAY*****


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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2013, 01:58:05 PM »
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Beautiful composition hriday ji. Lekin pyaar sachcha hai toh ek din jaroor mil  jayega. koshish jaari rakhiye, hamari dua hai aapke saath. bahut bahut bahut saari daad.
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2013, 02:01:30 PM »
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badiya likha hai bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2013, 03:41:51 PM »
 :clap:hriday apki tareef ke liye shabd nhi mere pass
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«Reply #9 on: February 27, 2013, 09:09:55 PM »
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Nice!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: February 27, 2013, 11:31:39 PM »
bahut khoob Hriday ji
daad daad
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2013, 09:11:06 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Nandbahu ji....!!!

bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: March 01, 2013, 09:44:59 PM »
bohat khoob,.........bohat c daad,......
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2013, 12:49:18 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Prashad ji....!!!

wah wah
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2013, 03:41:07 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Rajan ji......!!!

wha wha ji wha
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