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Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..
Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..
Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..
Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..
Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..
Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi..
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2007, 12:36:43 PM » |
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very nice pinki ji ..........bahut accha likha hai aapne ........per haan,plzzz last line per amal mat kijiyega .....
kaun kiska apna hai aur kaun yahan begaana hai
begairat si is duniya mai kisne bhala ye jaana hai
apne hi dil ko aaj main ye de raha hun tassaliya
jinke liye likhta hun main unka dl mera thikhana hai
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2007, 05:02:20 AM » |
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Good One Pinky & Nice Reply Fahi...
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2007, 06:53:32 PM » |
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Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..
Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..
Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..
Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..
Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..
Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi.. awesome poetry Pinky......... too good reply Majid bhai..... |
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2007, 07:49:38 AM » |
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Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..
Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..
Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..
Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..
Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..
Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi.. Bahut khoob Pinky... Daad Hazir hai. Kabul farmayiyega
Bhulana sakoge mujheko bhoolkar tum
Mai aksar tumhe yaad aathi rahungi
Kabhi kwaab bankar kabhi yaad bankar
Mai neendein tumhari churathi rahungi[/color] |
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2007, 11:01:48 AM » |
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bahut khoob...fahi jee...majid bhai..aur roja ..jee
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2007, 11:06:53 AM » |
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Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..
Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..
Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..
Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..
Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..
Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi.. excellent...superb...mindblowing..aur lafz nahi mil rahe hain gulabo ki tharaf karne k liye ...hum to apke phanka hogaye hain luv u |
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2007, 05:34:58 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2007, 05:50:33 AM » |
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Nice Pinky ji & good on Roja ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2007, 11:54:29 AM » |
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very nice pinki ji ..........bahut accha likha hai aapne ........per haan,plzzz last line per amal mat kijiyega .....
kaun kiska apna hai aur kaun yahan begaana hai
begairat si is duniya mai kisne bhala ye jaana hai
apne hi dil ko aaj main ye de raha hun tassaliya
jinke liye likhta hun main unka dl mera thikhana hai Thank you So much..!!  Last line par humne amal nahi kiya ji..isliye aa gaye hain wapis..!! :lol: Waah kya lines likhi hain aapne...!! bahut khoob..!! Likha kabhi jinke liye,
ab unke dil mein main rehti nahi
Shikwa bhi kya karoon kissi se,
Unhe to meri kami bhi khalti nahi.. |
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«Reply #10 on: March 18, 2007, 11:56:01 AM » |
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Good One Pinky & Nice Reply Fahi... Thanx a Lot Aryaan..!!!! |
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2007, 12:00:21 PM » |
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Har Pal Har Ghadi Jiska Intezaar Kiya Hai
AaJ usi Ne Keh Diya Kyun Humpe Waqt Barbaad Kiya Hai.
Aey Khuda Ab Aur Kis Kis Se Majid Gila Kare.
Jab Use Apne Dost Ne Jaane Ka Paigaam De Diya Hai Ohhh bahut khoob majid..!! Ek Gham tha dil mein Lafzon mein utaar diya..
Shayad mere lafzon ne aapko khafa kar diya..
Aisi koi tamanna nahi ki aap mujhse duur jaayein
Bas Dost samajh kar hi apne dil ka haal aapko batta diya.. |
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«Reply #12 on: March 18, 2007, 12:01:22 PM » |
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Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..
Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..
Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..
Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..
Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..
Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi.. awesome poetry Pinky......... too good reply Majid bhai..... Hanji bahut bahut shukriya ji aapka..!!! |
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«Reply #13 on: March 18, 2007, 12:04:50 PM » |
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Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..
Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..
Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..
Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..
Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..
Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi.. Bahut khoob Pinky... Daad Hazir hai. Kabul farmayiyega
Bhulana sakoge mujheko bhoolkar tum
Mai aksar tumhe yaad aathi rahungi
Kabhi kwaab bankar kabhi yaad bankar
Mai neendein tumhari churathi rahungi[/color] Hanji bilkul qubul hai aapki daad..roja..!! Shukriya..!! Aur aapne bhi bahut hi achhi reply di hai..dekho main aa hi gayi na!! Judai ke lamhe kaise kaate hain
Mujhse pooch na meri Dost..
Kuch majburiyan le gayin thi duur mujhe
Par tere dil ke main fir bhi kareeb thi.. |
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«Reply #14 on: March 18, 2007, 12:07:43 PM » |
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Kehne ko kuch raha nahi ab apne paas
Jo kaha wo kisi ne suna nahi..
Jaane kyun aaya hai dil kuch likhne par aaj phir
Mera likha to kisine padha nahi..
Dard shayad bahut ho gaya seene mein
Koi ansu bahut din hue nikla nahi..
Mil kar ek baar chala gaya koi mujhse
Ab talaasha jo usko to milta nahi..
Khamosh hai Zuban zindagi khamosh hai
Koi khafa hokar gilla bhi karta nahi..
Ab na aayenge laut kar Pinky hum yahan
Ke humara intezar to koi karta nahi.. excellent...superb...mindblowing..aur lafz nahi mil rahe hain gulabo ki tharaf karne k liye ...hum to apke phanka hogaye hain luv u he he he :lol: Pankha ho gayi ho..!!! :lol: waah thanx yaar!! Main to already tum par fida hoon..aur dua karti hoon tum hamesha khush raho..!! |
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