Abh wo kisi aur ka saaya hai...ritesh modi

by Ritesh Modi on December 08, 2012, 11:29:45 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Author  (Read 2677 times)
Ritesh Modi
Guest
Ye kya kam hai ke mera yaar aaj nazar aaya hai,
Chalo yu bhi sahi ke kisi aur ko saath le aaya hai,

Saamne hai wo khada lekin yaki na mujhe aaya hai,
Wo khud hai khada ya meri khwahiso ka koi saaya hai,

Dekhu usse ya chhup jau kahi, dil samajh nahi paaya hai,
Jo bhi ho khuda kasam wo bahaar apne saath laaya hai,

Wo badh raha hai aage aur hosh mujh ko nahi aaya hai,
Do lafz keh saku usse, itna josh apne dil mein nahi paaya hai,

Dil kerta hai ke aage badh haatho ko thaam lu, tabhi ek khayaal aaya hai,
Ki abh nahi wo perchai meri, abh wo kisi aur ka saaya hai….
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
ye shehar....Ritesh modi by Ritesh Modi in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
Na tum meri.......Ritesh modi by Ritesh Modi in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai « 1 2  All »
kya sila mila-----Ritesh modi by Ritesh Modi in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai « 1 2  All »
Meri zid....Ritesh Modi by Ritesh Modi in Miscellaneous Shayri
Kabhi kisi raat mein mera khayaal-Ritesh modi by Ritesh Modi in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq « 1 2  All »
anmolarora
Guest
«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2012, 11:49:56 AM »
bahut khoob bahut khoob
Logged
Ritesh Modi
Guest
«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2012, 12:09:43 PM »
bahut khoob bahut khoob
shukriya
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2012, 02:48:09 PM »
Ye kya kam hai ke mera yaar aaj nazar aaya hai,
Chalo yu bhi sahi ke kisi aur ko saath le aaya hai,

Saamne hai wo khada lekin yaki na mujhe aaya hai,
Wo khud hai khada ya meri khwahiso ka koi saaya hai,

Dekhu usse ya chhup jau kahi, dil samajh nahi paaya hai,
Jo bhi ho khuda kasam wo bahaar apne saath laaya hai,

Wo badh raha hai aage aur hosh mujh ko nahi aaya hai,
Do lafz keh saku usse, itna josh apne dil mein nahi paaya hai,

Dil kerta hai ke aage badh haatho ko thaam lu, tabhi ek khayaal aaya hai,
Ki abh nahi wo perchai meri, abh wo kisi aur ka saaya hai….



 Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Logged
Ritesh Modi
Guest
«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2012, 03:07:35 PM »

 Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Thank you
Logged
prashad
Guest
«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2012, 01:20:20 AM »
bahut khoob
Logged
nandbahu
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 122
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 4 hours and 11 minutes.
Posts: 14553
Member Since: Sep 2011


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: December 09, 2012, 02:28:04 AM »
very nice
Logged
Ritesh Modi
Guest
«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2012, 04:36:58 PM »
bahut khoob
thank you...
Logged
Ritesh Modi
Guest
«Reply #8 on: December 09, 2012, 04:37:26 PM »
very nice
thank you....
Logged
gaytri gupta
Guest
«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2012, 09:59:01 AM »
waah bahut khoob ....
Logged
Ritesh Modi
Guest
«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2012, 06:18:27 PM »
waah bahut khoob ....
thank you...shukriya
Logged
Kaushal Sharma
Guest
«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2012, 07:11:17 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Behad Umada Creation Ritesh Bhai,....
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2012, 12:00:01 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  wow.... no words to praise... bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat rachna... bahut khoobsurat andaaz me pesh kiyaa hai apne Ritesh ji.. too good...!!!
Logged
Ritesh Modi
Guest
«Reply #13 on: December 19, 2012, 02:45:19 PM »
Wah Wah Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Behad Umada Creation Ritesh Bhai,....
thank you...
Logged
Ritesh Modi
Guest
«Reply #14 on: December 19, 2012, 02:45:50 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  wow.... no words to praise... bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat rachna... bahut khoobsurat andaaz me pesh kiyaa hai apne Ritesh ji.. too good...!!!
thank you ji...
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 12, 2024, 08:08:48 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.117 seconds with 26 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8507 Real Poets and poetry admirer