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Kohinoor
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Aaj fursat me jb
Diary aur pen leke kuch
likhne baithi to...
Jehan bhatakta
hua aapke janib
chla gya...
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"Gudiya...tumhari gazlon me kuch khone ka dard rehta hai...
Tumhara lehja...
Tumhara andaaz...
Uffff...
Kitni gehrayi hoti
hai inme...
Mai to bs doobta chla
jata hoon...
Kbhi mere bare bhi
likho na kuch...
Jo tum sochti ho...
Likhogi na??
Mere liye??"
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Us din kitni aasani
se keh dia tha
aapne ye baat...!!
Par...
Kya kbhi aapne meri ghazalon ko
dhyaan se pdha hai??
Nhi...Agar pdha hota
to ye kbhi na kehte k
"kuch mere liye bhi likho na!"
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Kyoki mere har lafj,
meri har najm..
Aap hi ki amanat to they...
Meri ghazalen
aapko kho dene k
andeshon se bhri
hoti thi'n...
Aur meri shayri...
Haan...!!
Unme ijhaar chupa tha...
Meri Mohabbat ka!
Wo ankahi baaten
jinhe aap kbhi smajh
hi nhi paye!
Aur mere wo bebasi
k harf...
Jinhe aap dard kehte they!
.
Fir ek din yun achanak hi
hmara sath choot gya...!!
Kyo?...kahaan?...kaise?
Mujhe kuch bhi
hosh nhi...
Bs aapko kehte
suna tha k
.
"Gudiya...tum to
bahut hi yaad aaogi"
aur bs...!!
.
Dekhiye na...
Aapse bicharne k
barson baad mai
jb bhi kuch likhne
baithti hoon to...
Jehan bhatakta hua
aapke janib chala jata hai...
.
Aankhon se girte aansu
diary k safhon ko
barbaad kr dete hain...
Aur
mere kalam ki mutthi
khali reh jati hai
ab...hmesha!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2012, 05:59:26 PM » |
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Hello Bahenaa... !
Kia baat hai ... Tareef karuN ke houNslaa duN samjh nahi
aa raha ... but I know yeH sirf ahsaas hai... bahut khoob dear..
Behad achche se aapne apne ahsaas O khayaal ko lafz diye haiN..
humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... 
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O Aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Haan bhai ji...mai jo bhi kuch likhti hoon... Mere sare harf... Meri bayani... Sb kuch bs ehsaas hi to hain... Meri jaatti jindgi ka isse koi talluk nhi. Hausla afjayi ka shukriya. |
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2012, 06:34:16 PM » |
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bahut khoob kohinoorji...
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2012, 06:44:03 PM » |
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aap ehsaason ko alfaaz dene me ustaad ho gaye ho Noor-- keep it up-- bht kamaal ki shayra ho-- iss dard bhare ehsaason par dheron daad dil se-- bht saari duaon ke saath khus raho muskurati raho god bless u be happy always |
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2012, 01:19:06 AM » |
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nice
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2012, 12:05:16 PM » |
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bahot khoob, seedhe dil se likha hai jaise....very very nice..
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2012, 01:08:40 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2012, 03:53:18 PM » |
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lajawab...
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2012, 04:31:11 PM » |
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B E A U T I F U L !!
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2012, 11:37:15 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2012, 08:39:40 AM » |
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bahut khoob kohinoorji...
thanks yash |
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on eTI community..
