achchha lagta hai .... zarraa:Shayri-E-Dard

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dostoN ... aadaab ... kaafee waqt ke baad is bazm mein haaziri de raha hooN .... bas dil dimaag aur kalam ki zang saaf kar ke kuchchh likhne ki jurrat ki hai ... so achchha bura jaisa bhi hai apke supurd kar raha hoon ....

sadaayeiN sun’na khaamoshi ki shab-bhar achchha lagta hai
n kuchh ho saamne takna wo manzar achchha lagta hai
(sadaayeiN = voices/calling)

lage hai faasle se to darakshaaN hi har-ik bastee
n jab tak paas se dekho to har ghar achchha lagta hai
(darakshaaN = bright / illuminated)

bhare rehte the jinke haath donoN guncha-o-gul se
unheiN karna jama ab eeNt-patthar achchha lagta hai
(guncha = flower buds, gul=flowers)

saza gustaakhiyoN ki jurm se barhkar mila karteeN
magar rindoN ki waah-waahee bhi sun kar achchha lagta hai
(rindoN = carefree/drunk)

rawaaN aisa ki afsurda rahe zindaan-e-tan meiN ye
lahoo ko mere nazzara-e-khanjar achchha lagta hai
(rawaaN = flowing, afsurda = depressed, zindaan = prison)

shahaadat maghala mera naheeN yaaroN bas itna hai
jhuka ho is'se zyada to kata sar achchha lagta hai
(shahaadat = martyrdom, mashghala = occupation)

wafa wo garm kamli jis ko mausam ke badalne par
mile hai orh raahat ya jhatak kar achchha lagta hai
(kamli = blanket)

reham aataa hai un ke dil meiN dil ko torh dene par
reham-dil bhi unheiN hona ab aksar achchha lahta hai

maram’mat maaNgte kaafee dar-o-deewar-o-chhat is ke
mohabbat thorhee mil jaaye to ye ghar achchha lagta hai

nibhaate ja rahe rasm-e-maraasim kis jatan se par
kabhi kuchchh be-wajah bhi keh ke sun kar achchha laggta hai
(maraasim = relationship)

kaleja jal utha karta hai unki baat se lekin
n din bhar baat bhi ho to n din bhar achchha lagta hai

huwe bezaar kuchh aisee tarah hum zeest se “zarraa”
ke bas ab lutf meiN hi gharq reh kar achchha lata hai
(zeest = life, bezaar = disgusted, gharq = drowned / immersed)

- ZARRAA


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2013, 03:11:42 AM »

So Nice.


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mkv

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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2013, 02:14:48 PM »

lage hai faasle se to darakshaaN hi har-ik bastee
n jab tak paas se dekho to har ghar achchha lagta hai (darakshaaN = bright / illuminated)

saza gustaakhiyoN ki jurm se barhkar mila karteeN
magar rindoN ki waah-waahee bhi sun kar achchha lagta hai (rindoN = carefree/drunk)

rawaaN aisa ki afsurda rahe zindaan-e-tan meiN ye
lahoo ko mere nazzara-e-khanjar achchha lagta hai (rawaaN = flowing, afsurda = depressed, zindaan = prison)

shahaadat maghala mera naheeN yaaroN bas itna hai
jhuka ho is'se zyada to kata sar achchha lagta hai (shahaadat = martyrdom, mashghala = occupation)

reham aataa hai un ke dil meiN dil ko torh dene par
reham-dil bhi unheiN hona ab aksar achchha lahta hai

maram’mat maaNgte kaafee dar-o-deewar-o-chhat
is ke mohabbat thorhee mil jaaye to ye ghar achchha lagta hai

nibhaate ja rahe rasm-e-maraasim kis jatan se par
kabhi kuchchh be-wajah bhi keh ke sun kar achchha laggta hai (maraasim = relationship)

kaleja jal utha karta hai unki baat se lekin
n din bhar baat bhi ho to n din bhar achchha lagta hai

huwe bazaar kuchh aisee tarah hum zeest se “zarraa”
ke bas ab lutf meiN hi gharq reh kar achchha lata hai
(zeest = life, bezaar = disgusted, gharq = drowned / immersed)

Kya baat hai..bahut khoob zarra sahab
maza aa gaya..bahut umda ghazal rahee janaab
ye ashaar..kya kahne..


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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2013, 03:21:31 PM »

bohut khub zaraa ji


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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2013, 04:40:27 PM »

bahut khoob zarra sahib .bazm mein wapsi ke liye khush aamdeed.


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zarraa

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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2013, 05:28:18 PM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 28, 2013, 03:11:42 AM

So Nice.

Thank you Sagar ji


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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2013, 05:30:50 PM »

Quote from: mkv on April 28, 2013, 02:14:48 PM

Mukesh ji ... apne jis shauq se parha aur jis prem se daad di ... us ke liye apka intehaayee shukrguzaar hoon !!


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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2013, 05:47:44 PM »

bahut khub zaara sahbh bahut hee umda lajawab qalaam.... thoda padhte padhte jyada time lag gaya ... par bhut hee umda creation....

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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2013, 06:33:56 PM »

Quote from: saahill on April 28, 2013, 03:21:31 PM

bohut khub zaraa ji

Aapkaa bahaut bahaut shukriya Saahil ji


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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2013, 06:37:30 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 28, 2013, 04:40:27 PM

bahut khoob zarra sahib .bazm mein wapsi ke liye khush aamdeed.

Aadaab Hassan sahab ...bazm aur dil mein jagah dene ke liye apka bahaut bahaut shukriya !!!


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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2013, 07:16:49 PM »

Quote from: soudagar on April 28, 2013, 05:47:44 PM

bahut khub zaara sahbh bahut hee umda lajawab qalaam.... thoda padhte padhte jyada time lag gaya ... par bhut hee umda creation....

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Dost, waqt dene ka aur pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya !!!


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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2013, 12:44:37 PM »

badi achchi kalaam rahi. padhkar dil khush hua. hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kijiyega.


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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2013, 12:58:13 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on April 29, 2013, 12:44:37 PM

badi achchi kalaam rahi. padhkar dil khush hua. hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kijiyega.

Aqsh ji .... apka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon !!


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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2013, 01:22:34 AM »

Wah bahut badiya.. aapko padna bahut acccccchhaaa lagta hai zarraa jee.
Bahut daad


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zarraa

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Re: achchha lagta hai .... zarraa

«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2013, 04:46:52 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on May 01, 2013, 01:22:34 AM

Wah bahut badiya.. aapko padna bahut acccccchhaaa lagta hai zarraa jee.
Bahut daad

Thank you for the kind words Suman ji


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