Ada unki ...

by Just_Hate_Love on December 03, 2007, 05:30:49 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #15 on: March 04, 2008, 03:39:30 PM »
wow humm last line.. dard ki jagah funny lagi ya shayad main hi apki is line ko samjh nahi saki!!
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zakhmola
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«Reply #16 on: March 05, 2008, 04:35:56 AM »
Agar aapka matlab meri last line sey hai Pooja ji:

toh uska matlab yeh hai, hum jissey bhi chahtey hain uske liye dua kartey hain, tumhe meri bhi umra lag jaaye, Ab har koyi unhey apni umra dey raha tha , Aur Mar raha tha[ not literal sense ]....

....Jab -Jab Teri Adaon sey
Dil mEra jalta hai
Jaaney kyon yeh Saala Dil
Jalke Bhi Thandi Aahein Bharta hai....
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #17 on: March 05, 2008, 11:01:45 AM »
Good one Zakh...
I really enjoyed reading ur previous post ...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #18 on: October 06, 2009, 06:10:17 AM »
Excellent creation JHL ji,very touching n wonderful poem.beautiful lines by
Niraj ji ,Pooja ji,Zakhmola ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #19 on: October 06, 2009, 12:53:13 PM »
...thanks a lot Madhu for appreciation...aap bhi kuchh likhte to achhe lagta...
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