Adaawat...........mann

by mann.mann on May 02, 2012, 03:35:53 AM
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Dil main rakhta tha wo adaawat mujhse.
Par kabhi ki na usne shikayat mujhse..

Mujhpe kar liye jab usne saikadon sitam,
Ab chah raha hai wo inaayat mujhse.

Wo jinke kheme ke sardaar ham rahe hain,
Unhon ki hai milke bagaawat mujhse.

Yahan apne apnon par waar karte hain,
Chhodiye hogi na aisi shiyaasat mujhse.

Pahle wo waar karen aur fir marham layen,
Sahi jati nahin ”mann” unki ye aadat mujhse.

mann
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2012, 03:42:11 AM »
Waah janab kya khoob likha h.
Dil khush kar diya aapne.
Esi baat hmari daad kabool farmaye
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2012, 03:47:31 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya janab masoomji..
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2012, 03:50:00 AM »
bahut hee umda kalam hai mann ji dil khush kar diya aapne chaliye ek ( detaa hoonrau)
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 03:54:00 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya janab sainiji... bas yun hi sath dete rahiyega...
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2012, 04:14:36 AM »
good
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2012, 05:39:30 AM »
waaaaaah....kya khoob kaha mannji...

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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2012, 05:45:56 AM »
bahut khoob Mann Ji, mubaark ho 
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2012, 05:49:50 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on May 02, 2012, 03:35:53 AM
Dil main rakhta tha wo adaawat mujhse.
Par kabhi ki na usne shikayat mujhse..

Mujhpe kar liye jab usne saikadon sitam,
Ab chah raha hai wo inaayat mujhse.

Wo jinke kheme ke sardaar ham rahe hain,
Unhon ki hai milke bagaawat mujhse.

Yahan apne apnon par waar karte hain,
Chhodiye hogi na aisi shiyaasat mujhse.

Pahle wo waar karen aur fir marham layen,
Sahi jati nahin ”mann” unki ye aadat mujhse.

mann





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                      kitnee adaa se daawat kee hai.
                       pataa hee na chala adawat kee hai
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2012, 06:19:48 AM »
ati sundar Mann Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2012, 09:30:22 AM »
 Applause
 bahut khoob , mannji .
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2012, 01:44:30 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2012, 06:04:04 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on May 02, 2012, 03:35:53 AM
Dil main rakhta tha wo adaawat mujhse.
Par kabhi ki na usne shikayat mujhse.. Applause Applause Applause
aise log bahut hi khaternaak hote hain dushmani mein icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Mujhpe kar liye jab usne saikadon sitam,
Ab chah raha hai wo inaayat mujhse. icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
per aisa kyon mann. baat mein kahin na kahin koi gadbad hai.apne sher mein poori baat tumne nahin bataayi hai mann. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Wo jinke kheme ke sardaar ham rahe hain,
Unhon ki hai milke bagaawat mujhse.
ho sakta hai aap ke kisi farmaan ko nahin maante honge. jo aap ne jabran impose kiya hoga.ab her jagah to democracy wo bhi india waali demicracy to nahin hai na icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
Yahan apne apnon par waar karte hain,
Chhodiye hogi na aisi shiyaasat mujhse.
phir kisne kahaa tha iss aag mein koodne ko drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie
Pahle wo waar karen aur fir marham layen,
Sahi jati nahin ”mann” unki ye aadat mujhse.
aisa karo tum bhi unki tarah bann jaao. tit for tat.so simple icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
mann




good nahin very good mann.. keep and keep going..!
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2012, 03:34:01 AM »
bahut dhanyawad himanshuji
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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2012, 03:45:43 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad dollyji..
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