adhoori chaahat ........................MKV

by mkv on February 18, 2013, 10:51:26 AM
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Aaj raat kitni lambee hai?
Ghadi pe baar-baar nazar jaati hai.
ChidiyoN ki chahchahahat sunne ko aatur man .
Mere betaab dil…tu hi bata…Kab subah hogi?

Are.Ye kya?..Jaldi se uthna hoga..
Kab aankh lagee..pata hi n chala..
Din kab nikla.. kitna sota hun main
Mujhe to khwaab me bhi unka intezaar tha.

Taiyaar ho lun..jaldi se..kahi der n ho jaaye..
Door jaana hai..unse milne..doosre  shehar..
Kya vo bhi aise bekaraar honge? Mere liye..
Aur..milne ki khushi..sabse dabaaye

Aakhir vo ghadee aa pahunchi hai..
Milne ka muqarrar vaqt..bhi nikal chukka hai.
Kahan hai vo..? dil ghabra raha hai..
N koi mesaage, na koi phone..

Vo to aise n the.. Intezaar ke pal..
kaate nahee katte.. karne vaala hi jaanta hai
Chand paloN me..dhadkane tej ho gayee
Door se dikh rahe hai vo

NazreN mili. par ye kya? Unki nigaheN kahiN aur
Beparwaah.. der se aane ka ehsaas tak naheeN
Aur jald hi jaane ka bahana..hairaan hun
N bichadne ka gham..n milne ki khushi …?

Haath hilaate chale jaana ..mud kar bhi n dekhna .
Aane vaala kal..saaf dikh raha hai
Ek aur dil tootega..aur amar prem ki chaahat bhi
Manjnu..hai to laila nahee.. Aur laila hai to….?
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2013, 11:24:33 AM »
wah wah wah wah kya jazbaat piroye haiN mukesh bhai,. ye naya andaaz ye naye tewar wah maza aa gaya , bohut khoob nazm kahi hai. dheeerroon daaad qubool kareN


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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 11:36:23 AM »
der se aane ka ehsaas tak naheeN
Aur jald hi jaane ka bahana..hairaan hun

WAAH WAAH MUKESH JI LAILA HAI TO MAUJNU NAHI ...

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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2013, 11:57:05 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2013, 12:19:58 PM »
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Kya baat hai Mukesh ji. Tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi. kya kahoon kya likhoon. aaj kuch alag andaaz mein mubarakbad deti hoon.

Pal do pal ke liye woh paas baite, baat na ho saki
Aisa unka aana hua ki, mulaqaat na ho saki
Chaha jo mil jaaye, aisa kahan phir hota hai
Unki yaadon ki roshni itni thi, ki raat na ho saki
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2013, 12:42:49 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2013, 01:21:52 PM »
MKV jee Aadaab...!



Janab kyuN intezaar meiN zindagi ka fasana bana rahe hai...  Winking
HoNgi naseeb meiN jo khud hi chali aayeNgi...  icon_geek


Waise behad gehre aur khoob khayaalaat ka izhaar e bayaaN raha..
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 18, 2013, 01:41:20 PM »
waah waah waah superb
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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2013, 02:54:18 PM »
waah MkV sahab
naya andaaz aur ek kamyan kosis nae andaaz me
ehsaason ko ache se piroya h aapne
daad kubul karen
lkhte rahen

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aur janaab mohabbt me success hokar shaan se jeena hai to hum Adhoori Chahton ( lela-majnu etc ) ko Role Model nhi banate tongue3
don mind
!
be happy always
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2013, 03:25:39 PM »
waah waah mukesh bhai kya bat hai
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2013, 04:18:26 PM »



zabardast! zabardast ! kya baat hai , Mukesh ji . Is naye andaz mein aur  bhi kamaal  kiya  hai . Nazm  me ri nazar mein eik mushkil sinf hai .Lekin aapne jis khubsurti se yeh kaam anjam diya hai woh qabil e taareef hai . Meri taraf se bahut mubarakbaad aur duaaein lijye. Khuda aapko shayri ki har sinf mein kamyabi ata kare . Amin
Hats off to you!
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2013, 04:50:46 PM »
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WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH MUKESH JI , JITNI TAARIF KARUN IS RACHNAA KI KAM HAI.. BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE...MAZAA AA GAYAA PADH KE... AAPKAA YE ANDAAZ PEHLI BAAR DEKH A.. MAGAR BAHUT PASAND AAYAA...!!!
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