Adhoori Khwaaish,.

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Kaash Ke Falak Ka Main Ek Sitaara Hota,.
Is Jahaan Mein Sabka Pyaara Hota,.

Jee Bharke DekhneKiMujhe Har Koi Chahat Karta,.
Kaash Ke Aisa Dilchasp Koi Nazaara Hota,.

Dard Ke Samander Se Sab Ko Najaat Dilata,.
Khushiyon Ka Kaash Main Kinaara Hota,.

Deewaar Banke Khardne Ki Tamanna Kahan Ki,.
Bas Kisi Girrte Hue Shaks Ka Sahaara Hota,.

Jet Lete Sabko, Tujhe Paana Bhi Aasaan Hota,.
Tu bAgar Detasath "Azeem Na Kabhi Haara Hota,.

Ek Kamyaab Aashiq Zamaane Mein Main Bhi Kehlaata,.
Kaash Ke Sachcha Pyaar "Jaan" Tumhaara Hota,.

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vitasta
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2009, 12:29:03 PM »
bahut hi khoob azeem ji!
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2009, 01:06:13 PM »
Bahut khoobsurat likha hia azeem...

Ekdam alag subject par bahut hi achhe lafzon ka use kiya hia.

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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2009, 01:51:09 PM »
Quote from: Azeem on May 23, 2009, 12:27:21 PM

Kaash Ke Falak Ka Main Ek Sitaara Hota,.
Is Jahaan Mein Sabka Pyaara Hota,.

Jee Bharke DekhneKiMujhe Har Koi Chahat Karta,.
Kaash Ke Aisa Dilchasp Koi Nazaara Hota,.

Dard Ke Samander Se Sab Ko Najaat Dilata,.
Khushiyon Ka Kaash Main Kinaara Hota,.

Deewaar Banke Khardne Ki Tamanna Kahan Ki,.
Bas Kisi Girrte Hue Shaks Ka Sahaara Hota,.

Jet Lete Sabko, Tujhe Paana Bhi Aasaan Hota,.
Tu bAgar Detasath "Azeem Na Kabhi Haara Hota,.

Ek Kamyaab Aashiq Zamaane Mein Main Bhi Kehlaata,.
Kaash Ke Sachcha Pyaar "Jaan" Tumhaara Hota,.

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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Azeem
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2009, 04:19:22 PM »
Wah bahoot bahoot Khoob. Beautifuly expressed.. Gud Work Azeem!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2009, 06:35:05 AM »
very very nice azeem ji,aise hi likhte rahe, Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2009, 09:52:09 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on May 23, 2009, 12:27:21 PM

Kaash Ke Falak Ka Main Ek Sitaara Hota,.
Is Jahaan Mein Sabka Pyaara Hota,.

Jee Bharke DekhneKiMujhe Har Koi Chahat Karta,.
Kaash Ke Aisa Dilchasp Koi Nazaara Hota,.

Dard Ke Samander Se Sab Ko Najaat Dilata,.
Khushiyon Ka Kaash Main Kinaara Hota,.

Deewaar Banke Khardne Ki Tamanna Kahan Ki,.
Bas Kisi Girrte Hue Shaks Ka Sahaara Hota,.

Jet Lete Sabko, Tujhe Paana Bhi Aasaan Hota,.
Tu bAgar Detasath "Azeem Na Kabhi Haara Hota,.

Ek Kamyaab Aashiq Zamaane Mein Main Bhi Kehlaata,.
Kaash Ke Sachcha Pyaar "Jaan" Tumhaara Hota,.

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achachaa hai AZEEM BHAI
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2009, 09:23:19 AM »
Quote from: vitasta on May 23, 2009, 12:29:03 PM
bahut hi khoob azeem ji!
Shukriya Vitasta Ji,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2009, 09:23:54 AM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 23, 2009, 01:06:13 PM
Bahut khoobsurat likha hia azeem...

Ekdam alag subject par bahut hi achhe lafzon ka use kiya hia.

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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2009, 09:25:05 AM »
Quote from: Roja on May 23, 2009, 01:51:09 PM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Azeem

Shukriya Roja Sis,.
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2009, 09:26:59 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on May 23, 2009, 04:19:22 PM
Wah bahoot bahoot Khoob. Beautifuly expressed.. Gud Work Azeem!

Shukriya Sophi,.
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2009, 09:27:33 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 24, 2009, 06:35:05 AM
very very nice azeem ji,aise hi likhte rahe, Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji,.
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2009, 09:28:07 AM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 24, 2009, 09:52:09 AM

achachaa hai AZEEM BHAI

Shukriya K A Bhai,.
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«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2009, 11:22:14 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on May 26, 2009, 10:05:57 AM
Good Job Azeem Bhai
Kya Khwahi Shon Ka Samundar Hai
Bohat Khoob...

Khush Raho Bhai.

Shukriya Bhai, May Allah Bless You too,.
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«Reply #14 on: May 26, 2009, 12:40:38 PM »
Kaash ki sachcha pyar tumhara hota
Azeem Bhai ye "adhoori" kahan yehi to "poori khwaish" hai
Behatarin chahat hai aapki, Good.
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