Adhura sawal

by adhuri kalpana on November 02, 2012, 01:14:06 PM
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 Mere dil ke aangan mai aaj ye tapan kaisi hai,
 Aag lagi thi barso pehle fhir ye jalan kaisi hai..

   Teri yaado tak ko door rakha khud se fhir bhi,
    Sab kuch bhulaye bethi hu jaane ye lagan kaisi hai..

        koi kehta paani jaisi,koi kehta sharaab jaisi hai,
        Main kehti zindagi behoshi mai guzar jaaye ye kuch aisi hai..

          Bas ek "ADHURA" sawal jo dil ko ab bhi bechain karta hai,
          Wo baat kya thi tujh mai jo meri halat ab bhi aisi hai . love9
   
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2012, 01:30:04 PM »
bohat khoob kalpana ji,........bohat c daad,......
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2012, 02:14:34 PM »
sukriya laaiba ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2012, 02:18:47 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2012, 02:31:39 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2012, 03:18:17 PM »
Khoob ! Bahaut achchha likha apne.
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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2012, 03:39:28 PM »
wah janab wah bahut hi khubsurat aur umda qalaam........

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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2012, 07:53:00 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar.. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kalpana ji....!!! too good....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2012, 01:41:39 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: November 03, 2012, 04:38:20 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Wah wah Wah Wah bahut khoob behad umda khyalat beahad shandaar creation Kalpna ji ..
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2012, 04:46:14 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2012, 06:12:06 AM »
sab ko meri taraf se bahut bahut sukriya Usual Smile
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