-----/// Adhuri khushi ///----- Hriday

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kareeb ho  ke  bhi  darmiyaan   apne  doori rahi
kabhi  meri  to  kabhi    tumhaari  majboori rahi

dekhaa koi khwaab agar to woh pooraa huwaa
magar  ek  mohabbat  thi   apni  jo adhoori rahi

tumhaari  yaad   ne  hi  raaton  ko roshan kiyaa
tumhaare  ehsaas  se   har  shaam  sindoori rahi

kuch  to  baaki  rahaa  tum  bin in geeton mein
ek   tumhaare  naam  se  meri  ghazal poori rahi

tairti   rahi  kashti   apni   bich  samundar  mein
laakh   koshish   par   bhi   saahil   se  doori rahi

shikaayat  thi  shaayad  koi  khudaa  ko hum se
khushi   kabhi   mili  jab   humein,  adhoori  rahi


*****HRIDAY*****


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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2013, 08:03:39 PM »
WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB..........SUPER..
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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2013, 08:21:22 PM »
wah kapil bhai behad khubsurat qalaam lajawab shbdo ke baan rehte hai aapke tarkash mein lajwab lajwab
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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2013, 08:24:23 PM »
बहुत खूब हृदय जी


kareeb ho  ke  bhi  darmiyaan   apne  doori rahi
kabhi  meri  to  kabhi    tumhaari  majboori rahi

dekhaa koi khwaab agar to woh pooraa huwaa
magar  ek  mohabbat  thi   apni  jo adhoori rahi

tumhaari  yaad   ne  hi  raaton  ko roshan kiyaa
tumhaare  ehsaas  se   har  shaam  sindoori rahi

kuch  to  baaki  rahaa  tum  bin in geeton mein
ek   tumhaare  naam  se  meri  ghazal poori rahi

tairti   rahi  kashti   apni   bich  samundar  mein
laakh   koshish   par   bhi   saahil   se  doori rahi

shikaayat  thi  shaayad  koi  khudaa  ko hum se
khushi   kabhi   mili  jab   humein,  adhoori  rahi


*****HRIDAY*****



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«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2013, 08:26:36 PM »
bahut hi khoob kaha Hriday ji....dheron daad....
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«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2013, 09:48:27 PM »
waah kapil bahut sunder
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«Reply #6 on: September 10, 2013, 10:42:32 PM »
bahot achey, bas daad hi daaad...
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2013, 01:01:30 AM »
very nice...actually very very nice...
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2013, 02:04:16 AM »
oyeeee aajkal bade sad poem likhe ja rahe hain.... kya baat hai kp .. kisne bijliyan girai hain is baar..........

wase ye post hai ek dum fultooo fatakkkk type......... dil kar raha tha reply dene ko.... but u knw i wont .... tongue3
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2013, 08:56:27 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2013, 08:57:06 PM »
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ekhaa koi khwaab agar to woh pooraa huwaa
magar  ek  mohabbat  thi   apni  jo adhoori rahi

tumhaari  yaad   ne  hi  raaton  ko roshan kiyaa
tumhaare  ehsaas  se   har  shaam  sindoori rahi

kuch  to  baaki  rahaa  tum  bin in geeton mein
ek   tumhaare  naam  se  meri  ghazal poori rahi

Bahut hi achche ehsaas hriday ji.. in ashaaron ke kya kehne.. dheron dheron daaaaaaad..
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2013, 01:51:03 PM »
thank u soooo much Miraj ji....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2014, 02:54:05 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi kaa jo aapne ise waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaaa....!!!
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