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Tamanna dil ki hasrat hai
Jiski puri hojaaye wo khush kismat hai
Na puri hoto gam na karna mere dost
Adhuri rehna to tamanno ki fitrat hai
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2010, 12:25:45 PM » |
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saaHeb:
namaste!
baRii saHeeH baat farmA'ii hay .. chaNd lafzoN meiN.. KhuSH raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2010, 12:37:49 PM » |
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thank's Dhaval ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2010, 12:39:02 PM » |
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Bahoot khoob Amar ji !
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2010, 01:10:32 PM » |
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THANK'S SOPHI JI
KUCH YU JUDA THA UNKA ALVIDA KEHNE KA ANDAAJ
KI SUNA BHI KUCH NHI OR KHA BHI KUCH NHI
KUCH YU BARBAAD HUE UNKI MOHABBAT MAI HUM
KI LUTABHI KUCH NHI OR BACCHA BHI KUCH NHI
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2010, 05:39:00 AM » |
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Wah wah Amar ji badi achhi lines likhi hain. Sari hasratein kabhi puri nahi hoti. Ek puri hoti das nai paida ho jaati hain.
Khwahishon ke waste sadiyan bhi kam
Ek adhuri dastaan hai zindagi
Dil dhadakna chhod dega ek din
Maut ki jaanib rawa.n hai zindai
(riyaz)
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2010, 07:02:19 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2010, 08:18:16 AM » |
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THANK'S MADHUWESH JI
KABHI HIMMAT TO KABHI HOUSALE SE HAAR GAYE
HUM BADNASIB THE JO HAR KISI SE HAAR GAYE
AJEEB KHEL KA MEDAAN HAI YE DUNIYA
KE JISKO JEET CHUKE USISE HAAR GAYE
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2010, 05:27:21 PM » |
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waah waah bahut hi khoob amar ji..nice line riyaz ji...
Hum mhbt ki baazi haar chuke hai,
iss bat ka ilm tak nhi us ajnabi ko,
merre har khuab jal kar raakh hai kisi ki ankho mein..
kaise batau ye sach main us ajnabi ko......
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muskan_bye
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2010, 04:32:48 PM » |
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sab ne bahut khoob likha hai very nice ....riyaz ji geet ji amar ji and all the member good one.........
zindagi mein agar kuch choot jaye
or dil ki tammanna thi ki hum kahe dete
lekin kahe na paye toh ye adhuri tammanna ki fitrat hai
ya na samjh pana logo ki hasrat hai
jo samjh woh bhi soch mein pad jaye
lekin ye toh ek shayari banane ka ek tarika hai
jiski arzoo puri na hui
wahi adhuri tammanna ki fitrat hai
kya kahe is adhuri zindagi ko
jisme bahut si tamannaye hai
magar uska pura na ho pana
is adhuri tammnaa ki fitrat hai...
jab suni dil ki awaz
toh laga anjaan the aap
socha kya kare hum
phir karne ki thani humne
lekin woh door chale gye
or humari adhuri tammnaa
humare dil mein rahe gayi
or yahi humari adhuri tamnna ki fitrat hai.........
***************************muskan******************************
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2010, 05:50:21 AM » |
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bahut khub muskan ji and khushi ji issi tarah likhate rahe
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2010, 04:44:35 PM » |
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broken ji or amar ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka
adhuri tammnaa
adhure sapne
adhuri dhadkan
adhure apne
kya kahe is adhuri zindagi ko
adhuri tammanna or fitrat ko....
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