Ae dil yoon rootha na kar...!!

by Talat on December 23, 2006, 02:44:42 AM
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Talat
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Ye tanha raat, aur kuch nam si aankhain hain
Meri samaa'at main goonjti unki baatain hain

Beqarari si hai dil ko jaane kaisi ek tadap hai
Ruk ruk ke chal rahi kyun aaj ye saansain hain

Samajh kar bhi kyun main samajh nahin paati
Mere dil ko bechain kar rahi meri hi aahain hain

Ek din chale jaayenge kahin rooth kar mujhse
Rahi jinko mujhse na kabhi shikaayatain hain
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Tosha
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2006, 02:48:49 AM »
yaar khud pe kabu karo ... !! :cry:

main aaun kya tumse milne Puzzled !
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javedarshad
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2006, 05:42:10 AM »
Talat acha kaha hai
Aap itni qun muzmahil hain
Arz hai
Chalye wahan chalain jahan bandagi na ho
justujuia shauq ho be kasi naho
massaratain fida hun ashkoon ki chah per
khuskhu har nafas ho bedili na ho
hu sairabi jahan ulfat ke jam se
 rukain qadam wahin jahan tashnagi naho

Mashallah se kafi achcha kahne lagi hain
aap ki uuper ki gazal ki wajah se yeh likh diya hai
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Meena is back
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2006, 10:42:27 AM »
very nice talat kuddiye!!!

 :D
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Tosha
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2006, 02:00:06 PM »
nice javed
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nikki
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2006, 02:37:52 PM »
too good Talat sis...n Javed ji....

khud-b-khud dil bechain ho to kya karein
unki yaadein humein diwana banaye
aur unhein kabhi hamara khayaal bhi na aaye to kya karein
sochti hun unse baat karun kabhi himmat hi na ho paye to kya karon
baat ho bhi jaye magar dil ki baat honton pe na aaye to kya karun
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Bharat
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2006, 04:13:59 PM »
Hi Talat,

Very nice........

Javedji,

good job...
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Bharat
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2006, 04:34:01 PM »
Nikki,

Very good !
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2006, 06:48:56 PM »
bahot  khoob  Talat........Javed........Nikki..........
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javedarshad
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2006, 08:30:37 PM »
Nawazish hai aap loogoon ki

abhi arz kia hai

Puchoo na wajah too aik baat kahoon
Baghair aap ke ab humse jiya nahi jata

Ehsas apna badloo jazbaat main na bahkoo
mita degi tumko dunyan khud ko sawarne main
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2006, 11:53:29 PM »
Thank you Tosha (I m fine laughing4, Javed (Bas aise hi jo dil main aata hai likh deti hoon), Meena sis, Nikki, Waheed and Bharat Usual Smile Thanks a lot for the appreciation.

Javed, aapke dono posts bohot achche hain..and inspiring too !! Usual Smile

Bohot khoob Nikki !! Usual Smile
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vikas2210
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«Reply #11 on: December 25, 2006, 06:21:01 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Ye tanha raat, aur kuch nam si aankhain hain
Meri samaa'at main goonjti unki baatain hain

Beqarari si hai dil ko jaane kaisi ek tadap hai
Ruk ruk ke chal rahi kyun aaj ye saansain hain

Samajh kar bhi kyun main samajh nahin paati
Mere dil ko bechain kar rahi meri hi aahain hain

Ek din chale jaayenge kahin rooth kar mujhse
Rahi jinko mujhse na kabhi shikaayatain hain


Talat bahut khoob kaha aapne.......

kaise rahenge tere baigair is duniya mai
jaha tanhaiya milti hai payar mangne mai....
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: August 02, 2007, 09:37:58 AM »
Shukriya Vikas.....bohot khoob kaha aapne
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2007, 07:25:18 AM »
Superb talat Di.. well expressed the inner feelings.. bahoot hi khoob..

nikki & javed both of also wrote gud..
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2007, 02:40:49 PM »
Thanks Divs Usual Smile
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