----- /// Aetbaar nahi ///----- klaskar

by klaskar on July 05, 2010, 01:44:03 PM
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yeh kaisa pyaar hai tumhaara jo tumhe pyaar pe aetbaar nahi,
kehti ho masoom mujhe par meri masoomiyat pe aetbaar nahi,

agar karte ho pyaar mujhse sachche dil se to darti kyun ho,
barso se saath hoke bhi kyun tumhe mujhpe aetbaar nahi,

chhipati ho sach mujhse aur kehti ho mujhse koi gila nahi,
toda nahi koi vaada par ab tumhe mere vaado pe aetbaar nahi,

kabhi tum subah se lekar shaam tak bas mera raah takti thi,
ab jaane kyun aisa ho gaya hai ki tumhe mera intezaar nahi,

kyun tum ab mere khamoshi me chhipa dard nahi samajh paati,
kya badal gaya hoon main hi ya tumhe ab mujhse pyaar nahi...

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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2010, 01:51:04 PM »
awesome creation klaskar ji....
kya pyar or bewafai alfazo me sahara he apne....

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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2010, 02:05:47 PM »
nice poem kalaskarji...
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2010, 10:09:10 AM »
Thank u so much Devangi ji... main tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon aapka...!!!!

awesome creation klaskar ji....
kya pyar or bewafai alfazo me sahara he apne....

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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2010, 10:09:38 AM »
thanx a lot Anaam ji...!!!

nice poem kalaskarji...
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2010, 05:01:05 PM »
Kapil Bhaiiiiiiiii Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Likha hai aapne.. Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon Me Dhaalna Koi aapse Seekhe.. Bahut hi Umda Peshkash... Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2010, 05:21:29 PM »
kuch apni hi kahani lagti hai ye to.......bht khubbb klaskar ji...
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2010, 08:48:17 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji...!!!

Kapil Bhaiiiiiiiii Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Likha hai aapne.. Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon Me Dhaalna Koi aapse Seekhe.. Bahut hi Umda Peshkash... Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2010, 08:49:03 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

kuch apni hi kahani lagti hai ye to.......bht khubbb klaskar ji...
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2010, 02:03:05 PM »
Kapilji achha kalaam hai aapka......
Jeevan ki sachayi shayad ubhar aayee  hai.... Applause Applause Applause

Dekho kisiko ko ye kahaani apni si lagti hai....



Kyu tumko ye kahaani apni si  lagti hai
Aetbaar nahi kyu apno par eysa lagta hai

Kyu tumhe badla-badla apna sansaar lagta hai
Kyu ab yumhe parivaar mai pyaar kam lagta hai


kuch apni hi kahani lagti hai ye to.......bht khubbb klaskar ji...
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2010, 07:18:49 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... aur apne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Kapilji achha kalaam hai aapka......
Jeevan ki sachayi shayad ubhar aayee  hai.... Applause Applause Applause

Dekho kisiko ko ye kahaani apni si lagti hai....



Kyu tumko ye kahaani apni si  lagti hai
Aetbaar nahi kyu apno par eysa lata hai

Kyu tumhe badla-badla apna sansaar lagta hai
Kyu ab yumhe parivaar mai pyaar kam lagta hai


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