Yoindia Shayariadab - Promoting Poetry.

afsana..

by Harleyboy1 on August 25, 2004, 03:09:31 PM

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: afsana..

Pages: 1 [2] 3 All

Author

(Read 2701 times)

Tosha

Guest

«Reply #15 on: August 27, 2004, 11:48:53 AM »

dil ke wo arzoo
wo tammaana humari
ab na rahi
na rahi wo humari


	Logged

Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
	Jindagi ka ye afsana by 19deepak94 in Miscellaneous Shayri
	Afsana chahat ka by aqsh in Shayri-E-Dard
	Adhura Sa Afsana by nishi gahlaut in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
	soorila afsana samil hua...jyuthika... by jyuthika in Miscellaneous Shayri
	afsana...jyuthika... by jyuthika in Miscellaneous Shayri

sarafz

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #16 on: August 28, 2004, 05:24:11 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Quote from: "sarafz"

Humne jab kabhi kushi mehsus ki
Har kadam par apki Dewangi mehsus ki
Door rehkar bhi apki Mohabat kam na hui
Yeh baat humne dil se mehsus ki

bahoot khoob sarafz. nice work all....

kahi dil mai teri yado ka, ek nashtar sa chubhata hai
tarpata hai bahoot aor kahi jism mai pigalata hai,
bad mai lahoo ban kar ankho se nikalta hai
teri yaado ke aine mai, na puch kaise yah waqat gujrata hai

Wah Wah bohat khoob pooja ji app shayari bohat accha likhti hai specially jawab bohat accha deti hai.

Saat samandar ka fasla to beshak bahut bada hai
Magar do dilon ka fasla to itna chota hai,
Ke humein bhi takleef hoti hai,
Jab tumhein dard hota hai


	Logged

nishita

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #17 on: August 28, 2004, 07:53:51 AM »

tooo good pooja...

gar bewafai hai mohabbat ka roop sachha
to uske pyar se, uska inkaar hai achha..


	Logged

Tosha

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2004, 08:06:56 AM »

gar bewafai hai mohabbat ka roop sachha
to uske pyar se, uska inkaar hai achha

beautiful...!

chaw ka batlab samajhne ke liye
char pal to zindgi ke dhoop main batha karo...! Shocked


	Logged

nishita

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2004, 08:09:23 AM »

thank u tosha


	Logged

mateen govindvi

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #20 on: August 28, 2004, 02:03:57 PM »

good one all


	Logged

samnoj

General Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 1

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
19 days, 8 hours and 57 minutes.

always smile

Posts: 15216
Member Since: Aug 2004

afsana..

«Reply #21 on: August 28, 2004, 03:33:44 PM »

dhoop me baith kar bhi hum ne din nikaale hai
wahi gum waha bhi the, jo ab humaare fasaane hai


	Logged

mateen govindvi

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #22 on: August 28, 2004, 03:35:37 PM »

khoob


	Logged

sarafz

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #23 on: August 29, 2004, 04:13:36 AM »

Excellent


	Logged

Amit Janglan

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #24 on: August 29, 2004, 06:33:07 AM »

Quote from: "nishita"

tooo good pooja...

gar bewafai hai mohabbat ka roop sachha
to uske pyar se, uska inkaar hai achha..

bewafai ke roop par hunen monm ka ghar na banaa,
tere enkaar ki aag se, peenghal jayenge hum.


	Logged

mateen govindvi

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #25 on: August 29, 2004, 08:30:10 AM »

khoob


	Logged

Amit Janglan

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #26 on: August 29, 2004, 11:55:48 AM »

thanks guru :o


	Logged

Harleyboy1

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #27 on: August 30, 2004, 02:54:08 PM »

ek baar to hume dekh liya hota ,
hum bhi khade the raaho main,
tumne hume yaad kiya hota ,
to hum bhi karte yaad tumhe.


	Logged

Pooja

Guest

afsana..

«Reply #28 on: August 30, 2004, 03:09:32 PM »

Bahoot khoob tosha>>>> Chaw ko janan hai to kuch pal dhoop mai rah kar dekh<<<< bahoot hi acha likha hai apne.

nice shair Sarafz ji.


	Logged

samnoj

General Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 1

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
19 days, 8 hours and 57 minutes.

always smile

Posts: 15216
Member Since: Aug 2004

afsana..

«Reply #29 on: August 30, 2004, 03:29:42 PM »

dhoop me umar kaat di intezaar karte karte
kat gaye kai din uski rah takte takte
khuch aaram ke liye jab chaw ka sahaara liya
wo aagaye usi wakt hum pe ilzaam kaste kaste