Agar khushi isime hai to fir yahi sahi

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Tum bhi na bolo kuch aur main bhi kuch nahi,
Agar khushi isime hai to fir yahi sahi,

Tumhari apni duniya hai,
Muktalif mera bhi jahaan hai,
Do hain ye bas isiliye,
kyunki ek kahan hain,

ek ufaq hai bas wo, jis se jude hain hum,
dekho jo us falak pe kahan muktalif hai hum,

magar ufaq ko paana hai jaise khwaab ki baaten,
miraaj ki baaten aur sehraab ki baaten,

Humare haath kya hai ,jaise kuch bhi nahi,
Agar khushi isi me hai to fir yahi sahi.
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2016, 10:19:23 AM »
Tum bhi na bolo kuch aur main bhi kuch nahi,
Agar khushi isime hai to fir yahi sahi,

Tumhari apni duniya hai,
Muktalif mera bhi jahaan hai,
Do hain ye bas isiliye,
kyunki ek kahan hain,

ek ufaq hai bas wo, jis se jude hain hum,
dekho jo us falak pe kahan muktalif hai hum,

magar ufaq ko paana hai jaise khwaab ki baaten,
miraaj ki baaten aur sehraab ki baaten,

Humare haath kya hai ,jaise kuch bhi nahi,
Agar khushi isi me hai to fir yahi sahi.


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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2016, 10:59:28 AM »
type error!!! shukriya adil bhai!!
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2016, 08:19:26 PM »
bahut bahut umdah waah, dheron daad RAu ke saath.
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2016, 12:41:07 AM »
Behad shukriya..
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2016, 12:42:48 AM »
Magar iss rau ke Mayne kya hain
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2016, 04:19:42 AM »
Magar iss rau ke Mayne kya hain
Janaab yoindia pe yeh ek token of appreciation hai ke aapkee ghazal bahut achhi hai. Lekin yeh aap kee apni likhee honee chaahiye. Yeh aap bhi kisee ko de saktey ho agar koi ghazal aapko pasand aaye to. Aap note keejiye naam ke neechey Rau likhaa hai aur uss ke neechey + sign hai. Kisee ko Rau deney ke liye + ko press karnaa partaa hai.
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2016, 04:30:56 AM »
achha...
Magar iss portal me kya koi dusre ki gazal ya nazm bhi post karta hai kya.
Jitni maine post ki hai wo sab meri apni hi hai...//
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2016, 12:48:00 PM »
Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2016, 01:58:39 PM »
waah waah
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2016, 04:58:40 PM »
Aap sab ka behad Shukriya !!
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2016, 12:12:49 AM »
achha...
Magar iss portal me kya koi dusre ki gazal ya nazm bhi post karta hai kya.
Jitni maine post ki hai wo sab meri apni hi hai...//

Jee haan doosrey kee post kar saktey hain lekin neechey naam usskaa likhnaa parhtaa hai.
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