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Agar tapakta ashkon ki jagah lahoo aankhon se...
Koi kisi ko phir shayed hi rulaata...
Dil ke tootne ki hoti jo awaaz...
To tumhein mere dard ka andaza ho paata...
Yaadein jo na aati yun khamoshi se chupke chupke...
To mere ghar ki raunaq hoti teri mehfil se zyada...
Na hota agar chaand mein daag...
Teri khubsoorti ka mujhe tod mil jata (NM)
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2005, 05:31:23 PM » |
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Wah ...
Kya kahi hai ...
Veru well done Isha ...
Keep it up ...
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«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2005, 05:33:26 PM » |
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Bahot khoob !!!
Very well said....
Zindagi jo dard ki kahani hoti to dard ka dard kisi ko na hota
Magar afsos zindagi dard ki kahani nahi
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2005, 05:33:27 PM » |
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wowwwwwwwwwww ishu...thats really nice!!!!!!!!!
samajh na paya koi kabhi ke meri ankhon me nami kyu hai,
hum bhi kehe dete hai ke yeh to dhul mitti ka kasoor hai!
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2005, 05:35:01 PM » |
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kiya baat hai Meena !!
aap ka to jawab nahi
well said keep it up...
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2005, 05:39:06 PM » |
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Agar tapakta ashkon ki jagah lahoo aankhon se...
Koi kisi ko phir shayed hi rulaata...
Dil ke tootne ki hoti jo awaaz...
To tumhein mere dard ka andaza ho paata...
Yaadein jo na aati yun khamoshi se chupke chupke...
To mere ghar ki raunaq hoti teri mehfil se zyada...
Na hota agar chaand mein daag...
Teri khubsoorti ka mujhe tod mil jata (NM) Agar dekh lete hamari aankhon mein pyaar aapke liye, To shayad aapko muskuraana aa jaata ... |
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2005, 05:44:04 PM » |
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wah wah wah kya reply maraa hai sab na........ek daam jhakaas.......sab ke reply padh kar mazaa aagaaya
and THANKS for appreication !!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2005, 05:54:13 PM » |
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Kya baap aap bhi ekdam zakaas likhte ho to hum ko ekdam zakaas reply dena padta hai ... Varna maamu bheja phod deta hai ... Samjhi kya  |
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2005, 05:33:20 AM » |
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Kya baap aap bhi ekdam zakaas likhte ho to hum ko ekdam zakaas reply dena padta hai ... Varna maamu bheja phod deta hai ... Samjhi kya hahahaa.........u r funny JHL........good one!!!! |
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«Reply #9 on: July 01, 2005, 09:33:51 AM » |
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amazing isha,thats fantastic :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2005, 06:47:06 PM » |
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Agar tapakta ashkon ki jagah lahoo aankhon se...
Koi kisi ko phir shayed hi rulaata...
Dil ke tootne ki hoti jo awaaz...
To tumhein mere dard ka andaza ho paata...
Yaadein jo na aati yun khamoshi se chupke chupke...
To mere ghar ki raunaq hoti teri mehfil se zyada...
Na hota agar chaand mein daag...
Teri khubsoorti ka mujhe tod mil jata (NM) Nice again isha ji |
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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2005, 07:10:44 PM » |
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Thanks................ rohit n' nidhi ji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 03, 2005, 12:47:03 PM » |
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Kya baap aap bhi ekdam zakaas likhte ho to hum ko ekdam zakaas reply dena padta hai ... Varna maamu bheja phod deta hai ... Samjhi kya hahahaa.........you r funny JHL........good one!!!! Thanks a lot Isha and you are funny too ... Beshak kuchh waqt ka intezaar mila humko, Par khuda se badkar yar mila humko, Na rahi ab koi tamanna jannat ki hame, Aye yaar tumse woh dard mila humko ... |
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«Reply #13 on: July 03, 2005, 08:56:10 PM » |
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:D
wah wah very nice JHL........waise ek taraf tareef karta ho dusri taraf shikwa karta ho.........good
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2005, 08:04:35 AM » |
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Thanks a lot Isha ...
Are yaar yahi to badkismati hai hamari,
Ki hum kisiki taarif kare to bhi shikwa lagti hai,
Shikwa apno ki hi apno se kya kare,
Aur jab bhi karte hai to shikwa bhi taarif lagti hai ...
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