Agar Tapakta Ashkon Ki Jagah Lahoo...

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«Reply #15 on: May 19, 2005, 05:50:08 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Shukriya Meena....aap bohat kam likh rahi hain aaj kal?

   
Aaj phir mere dil ki dharkan
tera naam lekar tujhe pukaar rahi hai
Jaane kin tanhaiyon ka ehsaas
 meri rooh ko jhanjhor kar rakh deta hai
Sab kuch jaankar bhi jaane kyun
dil ko jhuti tassalli deta hoon
 Harr haQeeQat se waaQif hote huwe
yeh dil tumhe itna kyun chahata hai
Keh teri judaai mein isey  dharakana bhi gawaara nahi....
very nice aryaan...... Usual Smile

Kuch likho meena sis Puzzled !
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«Reply #16 on: May 19, 2005, 06:09:49 PM »
Bohat bohat shukriya Nidhi.........suna Meena aap ne? kuch likhiye.....ab tau Nidhi bhi keh rahi hain...Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: May 20, 2005, 10:39:26 AM »
Aryaan ji very nice wording again .........

teri har baat dil ko chu jati hai
abh saanson se bhi teri khusbhu aati hai
na jane kyun bina jane mujhe hassati hai
kya hai mahobaat kyun mere dil pe dastak lagati hai
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«Reply #18 on: May 20, 2005, 01:33:39 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat bohat shukriya Nidhi.........suna Meena aap ne? kuch likhiye.....ab tau Nidhi bhi keh rahi hain...Usual Smile


well aryaan ji aur nidhi sis:

alfaz nahin milte, aab koi nazm kya banaon,
kahi tu mbhi na ro pado, aab koi zakhm kya dikhaon!  :wink:

waise doosre sections me bhi dekhiyega waha bhi psot karit hoon shayari mai: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/forum32.html

 :D
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mehek
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«Reply #19 on: May 20, 2005, 02:24:50 PM »
zakhm chipalo chahe jitne
dard aansu ban ke chalkenge
pathar dil nahi saare is duniya mein
dilwale aankhon ki zuban padlenge
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Aryaan
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«Reply #20 on: May 21, 2005, 02:22:07 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Aryaan ji very nice wording again .........

teri har baat dil ko chu jati hai
abh saanson se bhi teri khusbhu aati hai
na jane kyun bina jane mujhe hassati hai
kya hai mahobaat kyun mere dil pe dastak lagati hai

Thanx alot Sandhaya..... & Beuatiful Reply!
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«Reply #21 on: May 21, 2005, 02:24:37 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat bohat shukriya Nidhi.........suna Meena aap ne? kuch likhiye.....ab tau Nidhi bhi keh rahi hain...Usual Smile


well aryaan ji aur nidhi sis:

alfaz nahin milte, aab koi nazm kya banaon,
kahi tu mbhi na ro pado, aab koi zakhm kya dikhaon!  :wink:

waise doosre sections me bhi dekhiyega waha bhi psot karit hoon shayari mai: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/forum32.html

 :D

Meena... aapka style hi alag hai......Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #22 on: May 21, 2005, 02:46:57 AM »
Quote from: "mehek"
zakhm chipalo chahe jitne
dard aansu ban ke chalkenge
pathar dil nahi saare is duniya mein
dilwale aankhon ki zuban padlenge

Nice One Mehek..


Who mehfil hi kya jis mein
shama na ho
Who dil hi kya jis mein
yaad na ho
Who masjid hi kya jis mein
Khuda na ho
Who savera hi kya jis mein
Aaftaab ki laali na ho
Who suhaani raat hi kya jis mein
Chaand ki chandni na ho
Woh Zindagi hi kya jis mein
Kisi ke diye zakhm na hon
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thycreator
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«Reply #23 on: May 21, 2005, 04:32:18 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Aryaan ji very nice wording again .........

teri har baat dil ko chu jati hai
abh saanson se bhi teri khusbhu aati hai
na jane kyun bina jane mujhe hassati hai
kya hai mahobaat kyun mere dil pe dastak lagati hai


Wah..typical of sandhaya stuff.....
Kyu padh kar tumhe lagta hai ki aaina dekha humne,
Aise hi toh nahi mere dil ko koi chu jata hai............;-)
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«Reply #24 on: May 21, 2005, 04:35:11 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
well aryaan ji aur nidhi sis:

alfaz nahin milte, aab koi nazm kya banaon,
kahi tu mbhi na ro pado, aab koi zakhm kya dikhaon!  :wink:

waise doosre sections me bhi dekhiyega waha bhi psot karit hoon shayari mai: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/forum32.html

 :D


Wah Meena ji......
Zhakm chupane se kabhi dard toh kam hota nahi hai,
Aansoo se bhari aankhen bhi dastaa sunati hai.........
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«Reply #25 on: May 21, 2005, 04:39:10 AM »
Quote from: "mehek"
zakhm chipalo chahe jitne
dard aansu ban ke chalkenge
pathar dil nahi saare is duniya mein
dilwale aankhon ki zuban padlenge


Wah Mehek ji.........gud one...
Dil walon ki bat nikali hai toh yu hi hans pade hai hum,
Dard aakhon mein liye firte hai wo deewano ki tarah,
Aise toh dunia mein har koi hi ghamjada hai aye dost,
Par wo gamgeen hai auron ke dard apne seene mein dekh kar.
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«Reply #26 on: May 21, 2005, 04:42:15 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Nice One Mehek..


Who mehfil hi kya jis mein
shama na ho
Who dil hi kya jis mein
yaad na ho
Who masjid hi kya jis mein
Khuda na ho
Who savera hi kya jis mein
Aaftaab ki laali na ho
Who suhaani raat hi kya jis mein
Chaand ki chandni na ho
Woh Zindagi hi kya jis mein
Kisi ke diye zakhm na hon


Wah Aryaan ji,
Yahi toh gam e jindagi hai warna bat hi kya thi,
Yahan har seh hi kissi na kissi ka gulam hai......
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sandhaya
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«Reply #27 on: May 21, 2005, 05:00:46 AM »
sukhriya Aryaan ji aur Creator ji ...........and nice work both of u ..........good

Tere intezaar main hai itni sidaat
tere pyar ko hum kaise sahenge
yahi soch ke sayad uss khuda ne
hume tujhe pane ki kismat nahi bakhsi
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thycreator
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«Reply #28 on: May 21, 2005, 05:05:39 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
sukhriya Aryaan ji aur Creator ji ...........and nice work both of you ..........good

Tere intezaar main hai itni sidaat
tere pyar ko hum kaise sahenge
yahi soch ke sayad uss khuda ne
hume tujhe pane ki kismat nahi bakhsi


Wah Wah Sandhaya ji......cool..

Kissi pane ki jaddojehed hai iss dil ko mai na samajh paya,
Kabse khuda ko talasha aur wo mujhe mehboob mein mila...;-)
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sandhaya
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«Reply #29 on: May 21, 2005, 05:08:02 AM »
meena ji and mehek ji aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai ..........

Hum tuh auro ko hassi de ke unke aansu lete hai
na jane phir bhi kyun ye log hume marne ki dua dete hai
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