~~"AHDE-JAWAANI KO BARBAAD KIYA"~~

by k.shael on April 01, 2009, 10:48:27 AM
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Pehle bahut ragbat thi tere naam se mujhe,
U lagta hai aab jaise isi ne mujhe jaamzar kiya,
   
Wehshat me tere pyaar ki khud ko kho diya tha,
U lagta hai aab jaise ahde-jawani ko barbaad kiya,

Sarjad na kiya tha kabhi mohabbat me lekin,
U lagta hai aab mohabbat karke hi bada gunaah kiya,

Tadbeere to bahut thi ki paa liya jaaye tujhe,
U lagta hai aab jaise kismet ne faqt hamse majak kiya.

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2009, 10:55:23 AM »
Bohat Achche Shally Ji,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2009, 10:57:10 AM »
Bohot Khoob Shally .. Pehli baar tumhe pure urdu main likhte dekha hai.....Very nice dear !
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2009, 11:31:36 AM »
Bahoot bahoot Khoob Shally.!Superb One Dear.
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2009, 12:30:11 PM »
Subhan_allah shally yaqeen nahi aata yeh tumne likha hain itni saf urdu wahhhhhhhh kya kehne maza aa gaya hain. Zarur kisi tagde shayer ka aashirwaad hain tumhare upar  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2009, 06:43:48 AM »
Verynice work shally...
keep it up!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2009, 10:47:52 AM »
really nice work dear shally
har lafz khoobsurat aur ba-mayne lagta hai
its great !!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2009, 05:18:25 AM »
K.Shael ji..Plz.In Lafzo Ka Hidni Kijiye Mujhe Urdu Nahi aati.
1.Jaamzar
2.Ahde Jawani
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2009, 05:26:33 AM »
Quote from: Muhammed on April 06, 2009, 05:18:25 AM
K.Shael ji..Plz.In Lafzo Ka Hidni Kijiye Mujhe Urdu Nahi aati.
1.Jaamzar
2.Ahde Jawani


Shukriya Ashraf Ki aap iss thread par aaye,

Ahde-Jawani - ( Jawani ka dour )

Jaamzar - ( Laachaar)

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2009, 06:05:29 AM »
bahut ummda shally ............ise padne k baad hamaari ummeedein aur bhi bad gayi hai aapse,,,,,,,,,
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