-----AHSAAS-----:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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तेरे होने का अहसास कभी हुआ नही मुझे,

बहुत दिखाया तुम ने अपना पन,
बाते बड़ी -बड़ी की बहूत,

कभी मन से मन नही मिलाया तूने,
हमेशा खुद को नादान बताया तूने,

कहते रहे सिर्फ़ मेरे हो,
दिखाया दुनिया से आंजन खुद को,

नादान बन के ग़लतीओ को छुपाया तूने,
कसमे दे कर मुझे चुप कराया तूने,

कभी रहते थे मेरे बहो मे,
आज तुझे गैर की बहो मे पाया मैने,

दूसरो के हँसी छीन के,
खुद को हंसाया है तूने,

होगे तुम महलों के रहने वाले,
लकिन दिल बड़ा कहा से लाओगी,

दिल के बाते बहूत की है तूने,
लकिन दिल को कहा समझा है तूने,

जख्म देना फ़ितरत है तुम्हारी,
जिंदगी से खेलना ग़रीब की आदत है तुम्हारी,

कहते थे मुझे इश्क़ किया है तूने,
मुझ ग़रीब को गले कभी लगाया था तूने,

तेरे होने का अहसास कभी हुआ नही मुझे,
अहसास तेरे इश्क़ का कभी हुआ नही मुझे,

बादल


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honeyrose

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Re: ~~~अहसास~~~

«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2008, 07:56:07 AM »

Nice..acha likha hai aapne hindi mein.. Usual Smile


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Shikha12

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Re: ~~~अहसास~~~

«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2008, 09:47:50 AM »

Nice Work... Baadal Usual Smile

Quote from: baadal102 on February 11, 2008, 07:54:16 AM

pata nahi kya problem hai jo ye page nahi khul raha

Baadal

Page open toh ho raha hai... phir aisa kyon kaha??


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~अहसास~~~

«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2008, 09:20:37 PM »

bahoot khoob badal ji!!! bahoot hi bhawnao se bharpoor kavita likhi hai apne!!! Good creation!!

shikha maine jab try ki ahsaas link per click kar ke, link muje old yoindia site per le gaya!! kuch garbard to hai...

MAINE HOME PAGE PER JAB AHSAAS & VIEW COMMENTS PER CLICK KIYA TAB BHI SAME HUA. AB MAIN WRITE COMMENT PER CLICK KIYA TAB JAKAR IS POST MAI AA SAKI!!!

Admin ji ko pm kar chuki hu!!!


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Roja

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Re: ~~~अहसास~~~

«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2008, 02:11:50 AM »

didi, maine b try kiya mujhe b old yo per le gaya tha.
Jaisa aapne click kiya waise kiya to pad payi. Hope k
problem solve hoga shaam tak.

Nice wordings... full of expressions. some lines touched me.[/color]


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Roja

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Re: ~~~अहसास~~~

«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2008, 02:22:33 AM »

Alvida

Koste hai kisliye halaat ko
Aap kyu nikle the aadhi raat ko

Aapki bathein samaj main aa gayi
Aap bhi samjho hamari baat ko

Fookne ko ek ladki mil gayi
Aur ab kya chahiye baraat ko

Aapke badle huye jajbaat ko
Tes lagthi hai mere jajbaat ko

Tajmehlon ke zamane ab kahan?
Kaun katwayega apne haat ko?

Raat bhr wo aag barasathi rahi
Ho gaya tha jane kya bersaat ko

Jee ute wo bhi na isha ki tarah
Roj dete hai zehar sukraat ko

Mai abhi se keh rahi hu, Alvida
Is sadi ke aakhri lamhaat ho


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baadal102

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Re: ~~~अहसास~~~

«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2008, 02:49:45 PM »

wah kya baat hai roja ji bahut aache
mere saare marks bhi aap ke tongue3

aise hi likhte raho hamesha

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: -----AHSAAS-----

«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2008, 03:00:04 PM »

Yes Roja, problam is kavita ka shirshak tha, Jo baadal ji ne hindi mai likha tha. Ab wo english mai ho gaya to koi problam nahi Usual Smile

Bahoot khoob likha hai apne Roja!! Good creation!!


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baadal102

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Re: -----AHSAAS-----

«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2008, 03:05:52 PM »

pooja ji is post ke saare numbers roja ji ko

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: -----AHSAAS-----

«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2008, 03:20:47 PM »

Fixed Khoon woth Khoob Usual Smile

kuch khas nahi likh saki.. magar jo bhi man mai ayya wo yaha post kar rahi hu:

Ahsaas apne mai kai baar kitne galat ho jaate hai
Hote hai jo apne, unko kitna dukh de jaate hai

Sochein le jaati hai na jaane kaha se kaha
Kyun itne andhein, phir zazbaat ho jaate hai

Kabhi uski nadani lage uska bholapan
Aor kabhi man na milane ka karan bana jaate hai

Kabhi ho jaati hai wo sirf apni , apni hi socho main
To kabhi uske liye anjaan khud ban jaate hai

Galati kar jaata hai, her insaan kahin na kahin
Phir kyun pyar karne walo keliye, itne nish.thur ho jaate hai

Hansaya hai jo usko to apni tamnna thi yah
Kyun phir ajj apni baato se usse rula jaate hai

Dil ko samjhna her ek ke bas main nahi hota
Phir kyun her ek ko humdil samjhe jaate hai

Jis ka kabhi ahsaas hi na tha to ajj shikayat kaise
Bin ahsaas ke kaise log yah sab ahsaas kar jaate hai!!!


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baadal102

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Re: -----AHSAAS-----

«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2008, 03:24:30 PM »

[Ahsaas apne mai kai baar kitne galat ho jaate hai
Hote hai jo apne, unko kitna dukh de jaate hai]

kya bat hai pooja ji
verry well said

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: -----AHSAAS-----

«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2008, 03:27:35 PM »

shukaria baadal ji!!!


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shahiquekhan

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Re: -----AHSAAS-----

«Reply #12 on: February 12, 2008, 03:36:32 PM »

[size=20pt][/size]
Ghamon ke Badlon Par Aansuon ki Barish Karke Dekho,
Banenge Dost Bahot Kisi Ko Dost Bana kar Dekho,
Har Koi Samajhta Hai Apne hi Gham Ko Bada,
Kabhi kisi Ghamgeen Insaa ke Paas Jakar to Dekho,
Tumhare Dil Ki Bhi Chubhan Zaroor Kam Hogi,
Kisi Ka Dard Kisi ke Dil Se Nikal Kar Dekho,
Tum Par Museebat AAyein Hain To Jayeingi bhi ek Din,
Bas Mere Dost Us Upar Wale Se Maang kar to Dekho.


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baadal102

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Re: -----AHSAAS-----

«Reply #13 on: March 25, 2008, 08:40:55 AM »

bahut khoob shahiquekhan ji

Baadal


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