Aik Choti Si Koshish!

by Jhuki Palkein on October 24, 2009, 12:55:11 PM
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Dil Hai Ke Ab Wafa Jaanta Nahi, Mohabbat Ko Ab Pehchaanta Nahi,.
Ye Zindagi, Zindagi Nahi, Maut Lage, Bharosa Karne Ko Ab Ye Dil Maanta Nahi,.

Haal-e-Dil Kuch Theek Nahi, To Kya Hua Agar Usko Bhi Ab Koyi Parvaah Nahi,.
Ye Insaan, Insaan Nahi, Jaanwar Lagein, Dil Ki Baat Batane Ko Ab Ye Dil Maane Nahi,.

Ab To Lagta Hai Tum Chale Jao To Yehi Hoga Munasib, Hum Akele The Akele Hi Hain Sahi.
Ye Khushi Bhi Ab Khushi Nahi, Ghum-e-Tanhaiyo'n Ka Samundar Lage Ke Dukh Aur Dard Ke Siwa Ab Is Dil Ko Kuch Raas Nahi.
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2009, 01:10:49 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob JP ji.very touching and beautiful creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2009, 02:54:39 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khubsoorat Alfaaz Likhe Hain Jhuki Palken Ji.. Dard Ko Lafzon Me Bakhoobi Dhaala hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Lajawab Peshkash Hai aapki.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2009, 03:06:07 PM »
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob JP!
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pankshivam
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2009, 08:29:45 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Ismaji Applause Applause Applause
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2009, 01:56:20 PM »
bahut khoob likha hai aapne isma dear keep it up

dil roya bahut aaj kissii aur ko dard mein dekhkar
kasoor yeh labon ka tha, har waqt muskuraate rahe
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2009, 02:15:03 PM »
Wah JP sis accha likha hai aapne. bahut dard hai. Keep flowing. and welcome back to Yoindia  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2009, 01:48:08 PM »
Bahut acccha likha h aapne nice and touching ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2009, 09:27:09 AM »
Mashallah Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Aapne,.

Bohat Achche,.
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