Aise guzare ki ab aaye na bane........ mann

by mann.mann on September 17, 2011, 11:14:39 AM
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Rishta ye ham se nibhaye na bane.

Rishta ye ham se nibhaye na bane.
Aise guzare ki ab aaye na bane.

Zakhmon pe marham koi laga to len,
Lekin ye dard kisi tarah mitaye na bane.

Sahte rahte hain be-intihan sholon ki tapish,
Aag ye dil ki magar bujhaye na bane.

Ham bhatakte rahe khaq-e-sahra main,
Lautna chahen to ab aaye na bane.

Yaad aa aa ke hame dard bahut deti hai,
Bhul jate magar wo “mann” se bhulaye na bane.

“Mann”
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2011, 11:25:06 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 17, 2011, 11:14:39 AM
Rishta ye ham se nibhaye na bane.

Rishta ye ham se nibhaye na bane.
Aise guzare ki ab aaye na bane.

Zakhmon pe marham koi laga to len,
Lekin ye dard kisi tarah mitaye na bane.

Sahte rahte hain bei-ntihan sholon ki tapish,
Aag ye dil ki magar bujhaye na bane.

Ham bhatakte rahe khaq-e-sahra main,
Lautna chahen to ab aaye na bane.

Yaad aa aa ke hame dard bahut deti hai,
Bhul jate magar wo “mann” se bhulaye na bane.

“Mann”


bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2011, 12:20:03 PM »
bahut ache
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2011, 01:52:43 PM »
ADDAB ,,,,SARFIRA JI ,,,JANAB KO JANMDIN MUBARAK ,,,

 
  ARJOO AUR TAMANNAO  KI HAR SHAY KAREEB HO
  HAR ROJ HAJARO KHUSHIYA TUMKO NASEEB HON
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,HAVE WONDERFUL ,,,,YOUR SPECIAL DAY,,, Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2011, 03:34:06 PM »
Kya baat hai mann...sach mein dil jeet liya aapne..bahut khub..!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2011, 04:15:30 PM »
mann ji..beautiful Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2011, 06:02:18 PM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab waah kia khoob lafzoN meiN aapne khayaloN ko
baNd kiya hai... behad khub aur umdaa kalaam pesh ki hai
aapne... Usual Smile

Waah sabhi ashaar kafi gehre khayaal liye haiN.. aur
adaaygi behad khoob rahi... Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye,

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye,
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile           


Quote from: mann.mann on September 17, 2011, 11:14:39 AM
Rishta ye ham se nibhaye na bane.

Rishta ye ham se nibhaye na bane.
Aise guzare ki ab aaye na bane.

Waah waah bahut khoob ... behad achcha
matla kaha hai aapne.. chaND lafzoN meiN itne pechokham
bhar diye ke kia kaheN waah bahut umda Usual Smile
HazaaroN daad Hazir hai.. Usual Smile         

Zakhmon pe marham koi laga to len,
Lekin ye dard kisi tarah mitaye na bane.

Achcha sher hai daad..           

Sahte rahte hain be-intihan sholon ki tapish,
Aag ye dil ki magar bujhaye na bane.

Waah waah kia kahne bahut khoob daad daad ..         

Ham bhatakte rahe khaq-e-sahra main,
Lautna chahen to ab aaye na bane.

Kia kahne achcha hai daad ..         

Yaad aa aa ke hame dard bahut deti hai,
Bhul jate magar wo “mann” se bhulaye na bane.

Maqra bhi khoob raha daad .. Usual Smile         


“Mann”


Aapki kavish se hume laga tha ke sher thik se
adaa nahi ho payeNge.. par aapne bahut achcha nibhaya radiff
ko... Usual Smile

Daad hazir hai... Usual Smile
   
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2011, 08:00:24 AM »
thanks sarfiraji...
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2011, 08:01:56 AM »
Thanks sunilji…..
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2011, 08:04:03 AM »
thanks shebaji...
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2011, 08:04:59 AM »
thanks gyanji...
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2011, 08:05:54 AM »
thanks tamnnaji...
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2011, 08:07:11 AM »
thanks parwazji…. Duae dete rahen…
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2011, 08:07:57 AM »
thanks shihabji…. Duaye dete rahen…
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2011, 09:36:07 AM »

mann.mann ji,

Very nice thoughts you have
expressed in your post...

Keep on writing and at the same
time read good hindi/urdu poets
to improve and understand the
technical aspects better..

All the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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