Aise likhne ka.....!!!

by thelostworld on April 30, 2005, 08:49:53 AM
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thelostworld
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Aise likhne ka bhi kya fayda jo jhuta aur bekar lagee.
Aise rang ka bhi kya fayda jo fika aur bekar lagge.
Shayari woh hai jo di se nikle..
Aur jise sunke har dil mein Thoda sa to dard jagge
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vikas2210
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2005, 08:54:58 AM »
dard shayri main hota kisne kaha
dard dil main hota hai
dard agar shayri mai hota to
sab shayar ban jaate
is duniya mai har shaks shayar nahi hota

jo duba ho payar mai
jisne dekhi roz mout ho
jiski hontoo pe bas uska hi naam ho
jiski annkho mai bas ek hi ho

who hi likh sakta ha
who hi samjh sakta ha
ushi shayri mai kuch ho na ho
dard zaroor hota hai.
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2005, 09:39:08 AM »
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2005, 09:48:44 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!


bahut hi accha likha hai aapne

dard apna kisse kahe
samjheta kaun hai dil ki zaban.
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thelostworld
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2005, 02:59:18 PM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!


bahut hi accha likha hai aapne

dard apna kisse kahe
samjheta kaun hai dil ki zaban.

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thanx meena~!!
nicee vikas and meena!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2005, 04:04:25 PM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!


bahut hi accha likha hai aapne

dard apna kisse kahe
samjheta kaun hai dil ki zaban.


nice!!!!!!!!!

dil ki zuban samajhne wale hi dil ko viran kar dete hai,
bewafa rahon pe wafadar ko hi baiman kar dete hai!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2005, 04:30:21 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!


bahut hi accha likha hai aapne

dard apna kisse kahe
samjheta kaun hai dil ki zaban.


nice!!!!!!!!!

dil ki zuban samajhne wale hi dil ko viran kar dete hai,
bewafa rahon pe wafadar ko hi baiman kar dete hai!!!!!


wah!!!!!!  nice  work ......thelostworld....meena...vikas......:lol:

dil  ki  jubaan   kya   karogi    jaankar
hum usi ke dil mein rahte hain jo mujhe mehsoos kar sake.........
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2005, 06:37:59 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!


bahut hi accha likha hai aapne

dard apna kisse kahe
samjheta kaun hai dil ki zaban.


nice!!!!!!!!!

dil ki zuban samajhne wale hi dil ko viran kar dete hai,
bewafa rahon pe wafadar ko hi baiman kar dete hai!!!!!


wah!!!!!!  nice  work ......thelostworld....meena...vikas......:lol:

dil  ki  jubaan   kya   karogi    jaankar
hum usi ke dil mein rahte hain jo mujhe mehsoos kar sake.........


thank u aur bohot acha likha waheed!!

 :D
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thelostworld
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2005, 04:50:31 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!


bahut hi accha likha hai aapne

dard apna kisse kahe
samjheta kaun hai dil ki zaban.


nice!!!!!!!!!

dil ki zuban samajhne wale hi dil ko viran kar dete hai,
bewafa rahon pe wafadar ko hi baiman kar dete hai!!!!!


wah!!!!!!  nice  work ......thelostworld....meena...vikas......:lol:

dil  ki  jubaan   kya   karogi    jaankar
hum usi ke dil mein rahte hain jo mujhe mehsoos kar sake.........


thank you aur bohot acha likha waheed!!
nice waheed, vikas and meena!!
 :D
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vikas2210
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2005, 06:30:08 AM »
Quote from: "thelostworld"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!


bahut hi accha likha hai aapne

dard apna kisse kahe
samjheta kaun hai dil ki zaban.


nice!!!!!!!!!

dil ki zuban samajhne wale hi dil ko viran kar dete hai,
bewafa rahon pe wafadar ko hi baiman kar dete hai!!!!!


wah!!!!!!  nice  work ......thelostworld....meena...vikas......:lol:

dil  ki  jubaan   kya   karogi    jaankar
hum usi ke dil mein rahte hain jo mujhe mehsoos kar sake.........


thank you aur bohot acha likha waheed!!
nice waheed, vikas and meena!!
 :D


dil ke zuban sanjhai nahi jaati
tute dil ke sada hai yeh
dard ki lakeer hai yeh
yeh zubaan kisi ko sikhayee nahi jaati.
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thelostworld
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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2005, 03:58:41 AM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "thelostworld"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah both!!!!!!!!

shayari dard kehne ki tabir hai,
apne pas to bas yehi jagir hai!!


bahut hi accha likha hai aapne

dard apna kisse kahe
samjheta kaun hai dil ki zaban.


nice!!!!!!!!!

dil ki zuban samajhne wale hi dil ko viran kar dete hai,
bewafa rahon pe wafadar ko hi baiman kar dete hai!!!!!


wah!!!!!!  nice  work ......thelostworld....meena...vikas......:lol:

dil  ki  jubaan   kya   karogi    jaankar
hum usi ke dil mein rahte hain jo mujhe mehsoos kar sake.........


thank you aur bohot acha likha waheed!!
nice waheed, vikas and meena!!
 :D


dil ke zuban sanjhai nahi jaati
tute dil ke sada hai yeh
dard ki lakeer hai yeh
yeh zubaan kisi ko sikhayee nahi jaati.
nice to all.. bahut accha likah hai
thanx .........
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2005, 07:03:16 AM »
Wow, Vikas u wrote so nice......just amazing!!!.......dil ko chuu gayaa
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